New OS - All of You - Page 2

Loved that little OS. I liked that he took charge and made her listen to his side of things. I love an in charge Rudra. I like how he wants her to love him, to like him, to be with him, on his side. He has changed so much.

Gorgeous stuff! Loved the story and so beautifully written!! Thank you.

That was beautiful, the way rudra feels insecure about how paro feels and the way he expressed himself. Loved it!

Just awesome, nice read, you're good with words and emotions. I wish cv's read this and incorporate this into the show, it'll just rightly fit in.

Napster: Thank you SO much for getting me so well. Your comments are another OS on their own. I never meant it to be physical intimacy but wanted to lead the reader to explore the solace they each provide the other. For Rudra her unconditional acceptance & understanding are above all else. I absolutely hate that a man who is seemingly invincible is so emotionally vulnerable about his mother. But that's what adds to the layers doesn't it?

I hope we see Rudra reconciling with his mother in his own time & on his own terms than through St.Paro or because the TRPs demand it. We can hope can't we? I did write something on Mala & Dilsher though not from Dilsher's pov. It's called "Bhagya"

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rangrasiya/4011428/new-os-bhagya

Spectacular... Kudos... His thoughts his sentiments and his hatred... All were just bang on... i cannot fathom what would happen if Paro would not understand it and that is what you clearly expressed...

Lovely. Love the way Rudra puts forth his views and thought to Paro. And that is how it should be. No one should force anyone to love.

superb