SS - When You're Gone the Pieces of my Heart are Missing You CH 5 UPD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: seeta_naips
so Shrimati Ranawat jumped to her husband's defence

such a beautiful ending

Yup she did...how could she not...no one touches her Rudra...just the way no one is allowed to harm major saab's Paaro...😃

thank you...I'm glad you liked it 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: mandy15
superb:)

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: bluemoon255
that was amazing .
loved rudra's concern and fear for his paro.
awesome story

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: neet2407
Wonderful beautiful ending - she realised how much he loved her and they gads happy ever after Loved the vm too , as you know it's one of my favourites songs and very appropriate for this story!

THANK YOU...YUP THE SONG IS INDEED BEAUTIFUL...I'M GLAD YO GOT TO WATCH THE VM BEFORE IT GOT BLOCKED...I REALLY NEED TO FIGURE OUT HOW TO STOP GETTING MY VMS BLOCKED...😕

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Shafoo
love your part 4 and ending part

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: HSFA
Hi Abeer, this is the first time that I have read any of your works and let me tell you I simply loved it. It was beautifully written.
I loved the way how in chapter 1 you expressed Paro and Rudra's feelings and Rudra's recation on knowing that she had been abducted was bang on!!
You never let your readers wander off the track. I have read the first write-up on Parud and I am glad to have read yours.Just love Paro's confession...and Rudra's silence and his care says it all.
Keep writing more. Do pm me.

Love
Fatima.

Hi Fatima

Thank you...I'm glad you enjoyed my writing and that your first PaRud fanfic was mine 😳 thank you for all your comments letting me know what you enjoy about my writing and yes most definitely will pm you whenever i write a new fanfic...😊

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: henamani
this was so cute. tora end mein romance zyada hota to kya baat thi

Lol...romance...may be in another PaRud ss...as they have only just started heating up our tv screens...when it starts to send sparks of inspiration in my mind will surely put pen one but for the time being I am just drooling over my screen...therefore not in the state to pen anything 😛

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: pakpearl
Khushi's vigilance n presence of mind makes me happy...

Rudra's love n care towards Khushi makes me elated..

I enjoyed Parud talk a lot..
Their relationship is changing..

Confession n togetherness r on their way...

I hope to see all this happening in the show..

Lol...shona...Khushi nahi ...Paaro...Rudra ki Paaro hai...aj suna nahi show main....'meri Paaro' 😆

n other than that right on all accounts Shona...Paaro's vigilance is commendable and Rudra's care is uff...loveable...apni zindagi itna care karne wala kab aiga shona?!! 😛

n Yes their relationship is definitely changing n even in the show one can see it...its' a slow process but they are progressing...n its' lovely to see.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: What_the
This was a nice story...protective Rudra, brave Paro and a confession...all the elements of a good PaRud story!! Kudos! i really enjoyed reading it!
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Maya

THANK YOU MAYA!! 😃