SS - When You're Gone the Pieces of my Heart are Missing You CH 5 UPD - Page 10

Originally posted by: seeta_naips

so Shrimati Ranawat jumped to her husband's defence

such a beautiful ending

Originally posted by: mandy15

superb:)

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

that was amazing .

loved rudra's concern and fear for his paro.

awesome story

Originally posted by: neet2407

Wonderful beautiful ending - she realised how much he loved her and they gads happy ever after Loved the vm too , as you know it's one of my favourites songs and very appropriate for this story!

Originally posted by: Shafoo

love your part 4 and ending part

Originally posted by: HSFA

Hi Abeer, this is the first time that I have read any of your works and let me tell you I simply loved it. It was beautifully written.

I loved the way how in chapter 1 you expressed Paro and Rudra's feelings and Rudra's recation on knowing that she had been abducted was bang on!!

You never let your readers wander off the track. I have read the first write-up on Parud and I am glad to have read yours.Just love Paro's confession...and Rudra's silence and his care says it all.

Keep writing more. Do pm me.

Love

Fatima.

Originally posted by: henamani

this was so cute. tora end mein romance zyada hota to kya baat thi

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Khushi's vigilance n presence of mind makes me happy...

Rudra's love n care towards Khushi makes me elated..

I enjoyed Parud talk a lot..

Their relationship is changing..

Confession n togetherness r on their way...

I hope to see all this happening in the show..

Originally posted by: What_the

This was a nice story...protective Rudra, brave Paro and a confession...all the elements of a good PaRud story!! Kudos! i really enjoyed reading it!

Love

Maya