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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

so Shrimati Ranawat jumped to her husband's defence

such a beautiful ending

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

that was amazing .

loved rudra's concern and fear for his paro.

awesome story

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Anita

@neet2407

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Wonderful beautiful ending - she realised how much he loved her and they gads happy ever after Loved the vm too , as you know it's one of my favourites songs and very appropriate for this story!

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

love your part 4 and ending part

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Fatima

@HSFA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Hi Abeer, this is the first time that I have read any of your works and let me tell you I simply loved it. It was beautifully written.

I loved the way how in chapter 1 you expressed Paro and Rudra's feelings and Rudra's recation on knowing that she had been abducted was bang on!!

You never let your readers wander off the track. I have read the first write-up on Parud and I am glad to have read yours.Just love Paro's confession...and Rudra's silence and his care says it all.

Keep writing more. Do pm me.

Love

Fatima.

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

this was so cute. tora end mein romance zyada hota to kya baat thi

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Khushi's vigilance n presence of mind makes me happy...

Rudra's love n care towards Khushi makes me elated..

I enjoyed Parud talk a lot..

Their relationship is changing..

Confession n togetherness r on their way...

I hope to see all this happening in the show..

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

This was a nice story...protective Rudra, brave Paro and a confession...all the elements of a good PaRud story!! Kudos! i really enjoyed reading it!

Love

Maya

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: lourel24
loved it.How rudra was panicking when tejawat threatned of slitting her throat.I cud picture his reactions the way u have written.Now our baisa,She is beauty with brains n also with lots of courage.

Really? You could picture it...that is such a big compliment for me...thank you sooo much!! 😳 n Yup our baisa most definately is beauty with brains n A LOT OF COURAGE!! 😃

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: maitsp
awesome end. rudra's happiness at the end made me smile. wish he'd confessed though...

I know...but our major saab is momvrath mahraj as Paaro calls him...so it will take a while before those three words come to his lips...but Paaro doesn't need to hear them not anymore...for she has read it in his eyes...now when ever he says it...it will be amazing for her, yes...but she no longer is doubtful about whether or not he loves her...😊

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