OS: Disgust from Rudra's POV - Page 7

Originally posted by: JJKKL

Thanks a lot for the detailed feedback. I really mean it.

I understand many here do not think Rudra will be disgusted. Let us wait to see how CVs play this out

Yup it will be interesting when it finally happens...whether or not disgusted I would like to see him apprehensive about it...

Happy you liked the inclusion of the doll. I agree men do not usually believe in fairy tales. But usually men do not cry or break down so often. Men do not have such open communication with their spouse. Usually men do not pick up and keep things like a doll, an earring etc. So our Rudy is a little different- right ? So I thought why not believe in destiny and meeting the girl again ?

Very true...😊

Ah the twist. Glad you liked it. I try to predict the end of books, serials, movies etc. And I have seen 75% of the time the ends are so predictable. And I tend to remember only those which are not. Am a big fan of twists - that too at the end.

Me too...I have a habit of guessing, analysing, second guessing and analysing some more with everything I read or watch...n LOVE IT when I am unable to predict the end...I LOVE TWISTS!! They are the best part to a story...that is one reason why I love watching RR...they keep me on my toes...for the on many occassion I predict one thing n something I didn't even think happens...the most recent was the mondays epsiode...where the whole Laila Rudra Paaro scene next to he swing was a dream...i laughed so hard when she wakes up...because moments before she does I was ready to go into the tv screen and rattle Rudra's cage for staying quiet throughout Laila's blegh talking🤢...n then Paaro wakes up with a jerk n i was like WHAAAT?!!!😲 then 🤣 because they had surprised me yet again...I generally don't like such dream sequences and more often than not figure it out that someone is dreaming it...but didn't this time...

Yes it was abrupt and I will take care to address that next time.

And the advice is very sound. I should leave it for a few days. And then read it again and add more. Incidentally I did leave it for more than a week as I wanted to get it edited by one of the very renowned writers here. She did come back saying she will do it. But I guess she did not get time. My patience ran out and I wanted to post it in the second weekend at least. And yes I just posted it as it is 😭 Will follow it next time.

I understand that feeling...wanting to post it...n not wanting to read through it again n again...I had to get myself into the habit of doing it...still gets annoying today...but I make it a point to read it again...as it really does help my writing...

I am waiting for another concept for which I can give a twist 😃 Not everybody is like Rudra - Har raat Aat Saal. God , as slogans go - this one really made it in RR.

haha...yeah it definately has caught on...😆

PS: Thanks again and yes your post was longer than my OS. Hats off for taking so much time to write it. And also to read all the comments here.

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OMG you are right...well...next time write a longer OS...so that I can write a shorter comment...well one can hope I do...😛

Originally posted by: JJKKL

Oh my dear Zee. 🤗 to you too. THanks for understanding the problem with detailing the details 😉 I also hope they show something like this in the show and how Paro recognises it and fixes it. That will be lovely - right ?

Why don't you publish your writings here or share the link so that we can have a look ? Making it a two OS or THree OS - well I need to get some ideas for a twist at the end of each OS. Else I am not able to find the inspiration for the same. Maybe I will get it as RR progresses

Originally posted by: Zeeliciousxo

Definitely write only when you are inspired to write - when people are forced to write it is pretty obvious to see in their writing. Hope you continue though, do PM me if/when you do 😊

Originally posted by: JJKKL

Where have you been Chamkeeli ? Are you seeing RR nowadays ? Reading any of the reviews ? Hope at least you are doing the former.

Thanks for telling me I won half the battle. Phew !! That is a plus. And you have clearly mentioned the issues or rather the loop holes in my narration. Quite helpful. Will try to address them next time.

You are never too harsh. You know that.

Yes I will keep writing. But not at Rudra's strike rate

Originally posted by: mozart66

Lovely OS JJKKL!! Loved it!!

Originally posted by: Chamkeeli22

Hi JJ... Been travelling, so missed a few episodes last week. But yeah, catching up this week. Also, I have mixed feelings for the current track... So, trying not to spread that negativity in the forum 😃

@ Rudra's strike rate: 😆😆.. clearly an Energiser bunny! And I am sure, kabhi kabhi, more than once a night too 😉 nothing surprises me about this guy anymore!

Originally posted by: ACTywm

Originally posted by: JJKKL

Hi Mozart,

You were also MIA. What happened ? Hope everything is fine. Thanks for the encouragement.

Are you watching RR or has taken a temporary break ?

Originally posted by: Zeeliciousxo

Yes it will be lovely but I don't see how they could show something like this at a 9:30 PM time slot 😆 I would love to but I'm not comfortable with sharing my work with others for now 😛 Maybe in the future!

Definitely write only when you are inspired to write - when people are forced to write it is pretty obvious to see in their writing. Hope you continue though, do PM me if/when you do 😊