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Posted: 11 years ago

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dreamwinner

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Posted: 11 years ago

Confusing, what ru trying to say

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puglet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamwinner
Confusing, what ru trying to say

I was trying to say that Rudra is confused on if he needs to involve Paro on a work assignment he has about Tejawat's house. He doesn't want to tell her because he fears what it will hold for them.

The idea of the OS came from how Rudra has to go to work but probably has to drive there with a dead hand. Then the only pending case he has that is important is Tejawat. The rest was my ramblings and how I want to see Paro involved in BSD.

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was well written but I'll be honest It was quite confusing too,lol.

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ek_haseena_thi

@ek_haseena_thi

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Posted: 11 years ago

i dont get the story, also lang. use is not easy for reading. Like why say infitesmal decision. infinitesmal means as per google -- small, so why not say small so reader is not googling meaning line by line? no offence u asked feedback so am jst being frank.

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binimoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

I was confused, nice attempt though.

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puglet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ek_haseena_thi
i dont get the story, also lang. use is not easy for reading. Like why say infitesmal decision. infinitesmal means as per google -- small, so why not say small so reader is not googling meaning line by line? no offence u asked feedback so am jst being frank.

No worries. I usually don't write either as you can tell. 😛 I used such words as they are more effective descriptors for the limited word count that a OS is.

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VishaD.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Topic is closed as per TM's request.

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