New PaRud OS: Sleepless (11-May) - Slightly Mature

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Look at the time of this post Rangrasiyans...
Just wanted to point it out, so that you know what inspired the title of this OS.

A new OS - I don't know what genre I could possibly classify this as.

I am going with a 'Slightly Mature' tag to be on the safer side.



I have rambled on quite a bit 😆...can't help it!
As a result, there are two parts to this OS.

Both will be in this thread - just scroll below.



In case you have not yet come across the Navarasas thread, let me have the pleasure of directing you there.
Yeh nahi padha, to kya padha?


Also, I have created an index of my PaRud works - I will update it every time I write something new.


Can't wait to see what you think of this one.
Compliments, Comments, Criticism... all are welcome!


Love,
What_The (Maya)


PS: PMs later..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a beautiful story of her sleepless night. Loved it!
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Simplicity is so beautiful.
Your language is clear and limpid. The words distill that essence. That feeling that so many wives get when their husbands are out of the home.

A simple true life situation, described so beautifully. I sit back after reading with a pensive smile on my face!

Lovely work Maya! And get some sleep girl! Hot herbal tea!
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Loved both the parts! Have a huge smile plastered on my face! Lol
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Beautiful story - her restlessness w/out him by her side.

-Sona
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"Her taut and deliciously sensitized body would welcome his fierce possession of her - surrendering to him in every way that mattered."

Fantastic line. You write these beautifully calm OS's. They are refreshing and make your readers feel like they are in Paro and Rudra's private world. Enjoyed this very much. It was nice that he told her he could not sleep without her. 😊
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What a beautiful two part story. Loved it.
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If only I could write eloquently I would make an attempt at the OS idea rolling in my head. The vividness of the moment in your OS is what I enjoyed the most.

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