New PaRud OS: Sleepless (11-May) - Slightly Mature - Page 10

Originally posted by: bioinfo

am struggling to find words to actually explain how beautiful this OS is, both the parts are extremely engaging , thanks for posting and looking forward to your other updates , i already loved the first part of navrasa and definitely will read the upcoming parts , again thank u so much for making me come here , ruh ko chain mila 🤗

Awesome story...!!!!

Originally posted by: sirivalli.t

Awesome story...!!!!

loved it...

very beautifully written...

What a sweet OS.


Hope you will write more 😛 😛

Such a sweet, romantic TS, amazingly written!

Loved it. 😊

Originally posted by: IPK007

Such a sweet, romantic TS, amazingly written!

Loved it. 😊

Originally posted by: niyoti

Haye Maya!😳

How do you paint such vivid lovely images with such few simple words?

Gosh! It just makes me grin ear to ear. Such a lovely insight into new love. Paro's bashfullness is so in character and unbelievably ADORABLE!

My absolute favorite lines have to be:

She blushed, thinking about the numerous occasions when she had slept on his side of the bed. But never, actually on the bed.

Almost as an afterthought, he added " I don't think I can sleep without you next to me".

She was firmly wrapped in her husband's arms - her own private sanctuary - as she closed her eyes with a sigh of relief.

Bholenath forbid if she had to spend any of her nights in the future, in any other way.

I absolutely LOVE how you've captured playfulness and sensuality all in the same frame. To me it makes this OS all the more endearing!

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the os loved how paro was thinking about him and what happens with them in the bed room so cute and sexy loved how she was missing him just like he was missing her amazing update thanks for the pm.

What a beautifully written OS!!! It was the little things, like when she goes over to "his" side of the bed and uses his pillow to try and feel close to him or when he says that HE can't sleep without her... that showed how you used the most simplest of descriptions and phrases to describe SO much. Keep up the great work and Iooking forward to reading more of your fics.