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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
Haayyee... It was lovely...
I mean seriously...

And the line... Some fires are worth burning in...

Steals the heart away...

Its like you know the exact portrayal..

Sona tap ke hi apni asli keemat pe pahuchta hai..

It was beautiful.. the way you showed how sometimes his harshness was ekdum exact amounts mein.. and sometimes it was too much..

its like getting to a rose...

you have to go through some thorns..

Awesome.. :D

Haaye mere bacche.. Bahot hi sacchi mucchi mei pyaara comment dia hai tune..

Aur ekdum sahi cheez bhi boli hai..

Sona aag mei tap ke hi nikharta hai!

Nahi toh kahi dhool mei milaa padha rahe!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: HappilyLost
Undoubtedly Yellow was warm, like sunshine and the words flew smoothly enrapturing the reader as well. Beautiful Ankita baisa👏👏

I loved how she accepts the fact that her fragile self had not been saved from the burning hot desert that he was and yet she admits of having blossomed under his warmth.

It was sweet how she doesn't approve of people's perspective regarding Rudra and somehow staying with him has done her good as well.
You write so well!

My favourite line was definitely this .
Some fires were worth burning in
Absolutely perfect. You have me hooked to this baisa!

Aaah Nidhi! Comments like these keep me going and make me believe that my work is worth posting. Nahi toh mai self doubt aur pity mei hi jhoolti rehti hu most of the time!

Thank you.. Thank you so much!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: chotidesi
Senbon, I love the way you express all these feelings- The desert sun scorching her is such a powerful metaphor. I really really liked it- I'm a sucker for metaphorical, evocative language, and your writing fulfills that. Well done!

Choti-sa.. (I almost felt like calling you Choti si... I have no idea why.. That just sounded cute in my head.. Will stop making a fool of me now.. Ahem..)

Thank you for the comment!

Feelings are the only things I can write on okayishly.. Dialogues and material descriptions I suck at colossally.. :P

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

^_^ Thank you..

Sona wala is my fav line..

I could imagine it.. She sitting near an angithi.. :D

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--POV--

@--POV--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Some fires were worth burning in.

and some stories are worth waiting for!!

Her dream itself was of him burning her.

I loved how you have linked the colors to actual events in the serial with your own twist!! And I am hard pressed to choose one of the punch lines as the best one.. All of them are beautiful!

👏

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kaykay

@kaykay

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Usui Takumi the perverted alien!!

haaye I cried at the last chapter of KWMS! I have missed beech ke chapters of it.. I am more of a manga reader than an anime watcher. Only because I dont get the amount of time I used to when in college!

Have you read Special A?? Or Tokyo Crazy Paradise?? Trust me, you'll love them!

Naruto I left as soon as it became Shippuden. Too much idiotic-pana Kishimoto Sensei does. 🤢

ohh and before I forget, Thank you for reading blue!! Yellow is updated too!

oh my god...i cannot absolutely cannot believe what i'm reading here...r u guys talking about manga..KWMS,special A ,skip beat in RR forum...cnt believe my eyes...hmm oops...sorry got carried away...the drabbles are so nice...each color's representations to the characters are perfect...short,sweet,to the point precisely...looking forward for the other colors...the last line was perfect fit for paro...so far my favorite is yellow

Edited by kaykay - 11 years ago

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Its amazing!!!

those lines perfectly describes!!!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: --POV--
Some fires were worth burning in.

and some stories are worth waiting for!!

Her dream itself was of him burning her.

I loved how you have linked the colors to actual events in the serial with your own twist!! And I am hard pressed to choose one of the punch lines as the best one.. All of them are beautiful!
👏

Thanks so much! I don't think there are any punch lines.. I just write random stuff! 😆