Seven Hues- A Drabble Series Complete Page 39

SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Yellow

My favorite so far. It was so descriptive of how his love had made her a better person. Loved it.

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: What_the
Ek aur res... don't kill me ... will un-res soon...!!

Kitne res Maya!! 😆

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Some fires were worth burning in.

And some lines are worth to be engraved in memory, forever !

Zaaku ! u r going fantastic ! 👍🏼👏

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vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Haayyee... It was lovely...

I mean seriously...

And the line... Some fires are worth burning in...

Steals the heart away...

Its like you know the exact portrayal..

Sona tap ke hi apni asli keemat pe pahuchta hai..

It was beautiful.. the way you showed how sometimes his harshness was ekdum exact amounts mein.. and sometimes it was too much..

its like getting to a rose...

you have to go through some thorns..

Awesome.. :D

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HappilyLost

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Undoubtedly Yellow was warm, like sunshine and the words flew smoothly enrapturing the reader as well. Beautiful Ankita baisa👏👏

I loved how she accepts the fact that her fragile self had not been saved from the burning hot desert that he was and yet she admits of having blossomed under his warmth.

It was sweet how she doesn't approve of people's perspective regarding Rudra and somehow staying with him has done her good as well.
You write so well!

My favourite line was definitely this .
Some fires were worth burning in
Absolutely perfect. You have me hooked to this baisa!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: SherryGS
Yellow

My favorite so far. It was so descriptive of how his love had made her a better person. Loved it.

Sherry I hope with each update you find favorites!!

:D

Thanks so much!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: shreya_rc
Some fires were worth burning in.
And some lines are worth to be engraved in memory, forever !

Zaaku ! u r going fantastic ! 👍🏼👏

Thank you Shreyu!!

Itte time baad!

Aaj kal you are ekdum MIA!

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Senbon, I love the way you express all these feelings- The desert sun scorching her is such a powerful metaphor. I really really liked it- I'm a sucker for metaphorical, evocative language, and your writing fulfills that. Well done!

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antiquegold

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Senbon, those sixes of yours are going further and further into the crowd! Bordering on poetry! Speaking of which how about one hue in poetic form?

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Oldestfan
Senbon, those sixes of yours are going further and further into the crowd! Bordering on poetry! Speaking of which how about one hue in poetic form?

I suck so bad in poetry, I will never show my face in the forum again!!

Also, almost all of them are written now. 😃

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