OS: Khamoshi - Page 6

Originally posted by: ...shruti...

i dont really know what to say right now i have been stalking your work on tumblr and reading it all silently i just have to say that your work is truly amazing

writing research papers is my only limit but they way you strung words always leave me speechless.

coming to this OS i really love how you pointed out all the little thing she used to do for him and how it affects him now also the blue kurta thing which is actually very significant in their story i esp love the part where he try to fill the gap in btw his fingers which was really touching

waiting to read more stuffz from your side 😳

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

This is the first work of yours I have read.. And by god, you are awesome!

The silence, blatantly taunting him about her absence in his life! Brilliantly portrayed CD-Sa!

By any chance, are you gonna write her side as well? How she feels when he comes on the phatphatiya to take her back?

Originally posted by: niyoti

Choti!

I see you're getting a jump start on creative weekends. Loved this one! Something in the vicinity of that thing they call a heart broke into pieces when I came to the part about him picking up the phone hoping to hear her voice.. it's this pang... I can't explain it.. but it conveys a deep sense of loss to me.. Perhaps you'll understand where I'm coming from if I tell you that it reminds of a man picking up the phone out of habit at a certain time in the day when his wife usually used to call.. he knows she won't anymore.. but he picks it up anyway.. He knows there is no logic to his actions but still...

Ultimately he ends uplistening to his late wife's voicemail on a loop..

EDIT: You are awesome! Did I not mention that before??? AWESOME I say! As usual..

Originally posted by: MissAsian

Omg u must continue this. We need a part 2!

Originally posted by: What_the

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So nice to see another gem of a story from you!!

Loved the way you describe this ominous silence that haunts him...her absence means the absence of her gentle laughter, her tinkling anklets, her affectionate reprimands, her phone calls...and he just cannot bear this silence...

Everything reminds her of him...starting with his own shirt...and he misses so many little things about her...even the scent of the detergent she used...that was so sweet,,,lovely touch!!

The first few sentences...where he unconsciously reaches for her hand...and touches nothing but air...

He squeezed his eyes shut and reached over with his other hand, slipping his own fingers into the gaping holes in a sorry attempt to fill them in.

That was such a heart-breakingly tender moment...

So glad that he decided to go to her at the end...

All i could do was grin knowingly...Rudra just cant stay away from Paro, can he? And most definitely not in our imagination...

Love

What_the

Originally posted by: Tannakstar

I've got a lotta love for you and your work, my friend! And thank you so much for posting this on a Sunday; no PaRud over the weekend really takes its toll on me.

Of course this OS is amazing, I love love love that Rudra is finally realising how much he needs and misses Paro, it's about time he figured it out. And I also liked the fact that as soon as he realised that he missed her, he just made his way to his motorbike to bring her back (I'm assuming) - it was very much in tune with his character.

This nearly broke my heart " He squeezed his eyes shut and reached over with his other hand, slipping his own fingers into the gaping holes in a sorry attempt to fill them in. ". I thought this was wonderfully written; I can see this becoming a potential scene on RR once Paro leaves.

I can't express how much I enjoy reading your work, needless to say, a whole load of your stories are favourited and bookmarked for me to read when I need a Rangrasiya fix.

Keep spinning those tales dude :)

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

This one shot is beautifully written

The title said all.

Parvati when left him by obeying the only command which wasn't meant to obey, took with her his din and raat chein and sakoon and now it's getting hard to breath.

The emotions of Rudra are depicted beautifully and very deeply.

Love it

Originally posted by: SherryGS

Beautiful. Ah what a nice way to end the weekend. For some reason I find pieces written from Rudra's POV always so enticing. I think I am more fascinated at the way his mind works and what others think is going on in that complicated mind of his. He is man of such stark contrasts. Anyway, loved it as usual and I look forward to all the great pieces of work that will be coming soon. ⭐️

Originally posted by: shree10

Loved loved this choti!
Perfect capture of Major's state if Paro leaves him!

The only thing unpalatable was he referring to her as wh#$e! Totally uncalled for..

Originally posted by: DDC1

CD,

Since you can't read my silence, let me just say AWESOME!!

Let me leave with words from MLK Jr.

"In the End, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends."