Four Shot: SAY GOOD-BYE--Part 3, Pg 26 (updated--June 17th)

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ICanDoThis

@ICanDoThis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Ek do teen char panch chey saath...
Aath naun das gayara bara theraa

... Tera karoun mein gin gin keeey Intazaar!

Aa be jaa napster, ab tu gaya sunday!

2.45 monday morning UK time...
😭

On a serious note,
Sorry to hear things hav been tough

Take care and

SEE YOU HERE SOON !!

Samina

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napk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

This is so different and you write it so beautifully. I just came across this wonderful piece of work today. I almost have tears in my eyes reading what paro is going thru alone. She has a loving family and every body loves her despite the fate of mohini and Sumer. But her deal with bholenath has made her brave to handle all the pain she's suffering.

She wants to say a proper good bye to all of them but she can't... She wants to atleast write letters saying she sorry but fears that they will come looking for her and she can't do this as well. But the only thing she can do and did was act normal make sure everyone is happy and do something special for them before she leaves.

Coming to the reason she's leaving... This is the hardest part to leave to person you love more than yourself and I'm not sure if he sensed she's leaving or not but he's definitely making is hard for her to leave. But if she leaves whatever life has to offer her it can't take away all these sweet memories from her.

Looking forward for the final part. Hope the RR has something similar to this and going by the current track looks like paro may leave soon.

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MOnamy11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Amazing story :-) please update the third part :-)

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ek_haseena_thi

@ek_haseena_thi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

plz yaar update last part when u can and do it soon !! I sign in to RR forum only check on this and yesterdy /tmrrow, no update for so long for both series! u make readrs totally fida on u Navin !! its ur fault we do stalking pls give tihs ur time soon!

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Hello baisa... Bhere in the world r u? 🥺

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anju4566

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

tusi aise chhodke na jao. hum to part 3 ke intezar me shukhe ja rahe hain!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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just_juhi

@just_juhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Update...

Please

Pretty Please

Pretty Please with whipped creme, cherries, sprinkles, chocolate syrup and all that other good stuff on top??? 😃

Really, the first part of this fic had me hooked (just like your Yesterday/Tomorrow series) . I'm waiting in anticipation to find out whether Paro will actually leave 😕 and if Rudra got wise to what his wife was planning. The way you ended Part 2 was just wrong 😭.. I can just picture aage jaake kya hoga😳😳