OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Repentance-Completed. - Page 23

Beautifully written! Loved it!👏

I like how this is fast becoming an SS in itself. Jasheem Khan is a really interesting character. I think psychopaths are very difficult to write about. Because how do you write a character that feels nothing. Only a sick satisfaction at others' pain? Very well done , Navin. I love Paro's thought processes. When will a female protagonist on TV be as layered and as complicated?

Wonderful update. Rudr in gahtak commandos unit was a nice twist. Jashmeen khan will not know what hit him and he deserves every bit of it.

reading Y&T its like standing and looking at the sea ...serene at first and then as tide changes waves start crashing in sometimes very harsh sometimes like a soothing touch...

Uff! 👏 That's all I can say Navin.

WOW!! After reading it, I am trembling... still...

The first few paragraphs, I thought the story should have been titled revenge!

i'll start off by apologizing to you first..you know i've been stalking you for the longest time to check whether you've updated or not...however the last couple of days have been excruciating for me, especially on the work front...i feel terrible to see the that you've PMed me, notifying me about this update and yet i haven't been able to post this comment on time..anyway coming back to the story...i read it thrice...as a matter of fact, i re-read each of the chapters several times...call me a loony!!..😆..but seriously, i feel each time i read a chapter, i discover new facets about the characters and the situations that they are in at a given moment...the same holds true for this installment as well..i was once aghast at the idea of paro being in love with this jallad...i despised the treatment meted out to her though unfortunately, most prisoners are often treated in this horrendous fashion..but now i just don't know what to feel for rudra...i just don't know what to make of the situation that both rudra and paro are in at the moment...do i feel pity this man?..i guess, yes..do i feel extremely sorry for this unfortunate poor girl?...heal yeah...infact somewhere down the line, i had started pitying rudra right after going through the previous chapter...the comparison between the flower and paro was profound...and i have nothing to say about the end...i don't think i can ever come up with the right words..also i've noticed one thing...you've always mentioned rudra as HIM as opposed to him...i feel it paints a much bigger and grander picture of a child in the body of a man, a being who though in his adulthood is still battling the demons of his past..am i right?...