The Moonrise : A Rangrasiya OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: tvbug2011

Lovely, atmospheric writing, Shreya. Love your interpretation of the scene, the description of Rudra's pain. His pretence is an interesting twist - makes me wonder does he pretend to Paro or to himself. Delicious!! 👏👏👏 Please write more.

Originally posted by: Sunaha6

Wow Shreya sa, you just created magic. I can literally visualize every word. Seriously you have a very good hand at writing. 👏

Would definitely love to read much from you shreya sa.👍🏼

Originally posted by: prettypri

Hey Shreya 👏

You have written this emotional OS so well

😳

All the feelings in rudras mind are described so poignantly.

The scene as it was shown on tv was mind blowing.

I can't think of a better way to put the same in words than what you have written here

😳

Keep writing...😊

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

thank u soo much priya jiji ! you guys are my source of enthusiasm ! watever i i write, it is always for u guys entertainment only.

so it really gives me immense satisfaction and inspiration to write more !

luv u lots !❤️

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Mesmerizing! I loved the repeated use of the moon, and especially poignant was when he pretends..and that is left upto me to interpret--Who is it to? To Paro? himself? It opens up a lot of space for the reader to re-read and use her own interpretation!

One request/suggestion---can you paragraph it so that the scenes flow a little closer together? Its just a posting style thing for me, its easier to read if the paragraphs are more clear, and also separated from each other so each new image/concept you've introduced gets a bit of space!

Originally posted by: Radaz

Wonderful Shreya! It is couple of days since the episode in which
The scene aired but rudra's eyes and his emotions r still with me
The silence and his monologue got a much deeper interpretation
Once i read ur OS. His deepest darkest never heeling
Wound was cut open again and that feeling was clear
Depicted in ur OS
And finally him surrendering to the comforts
Offered by his own Paro, whom he does not want
To acknowledge as his saviour as yet!
The subtle reference of surrender ! Awesome
Good going shreya! Hope to read more of
Ur work !

Originally posted by: SherryGS

Very nice illustrative writing. Well done.

Originally posted by: dknala

Awesome writing!

Originally posted by: nihamrm

So beautifully written!!
The usage of words not only convey the emotions but the magnitude and i love how you presented it all, everything that's not shown in the show all the unspoken words and emotions can be found in this