The Moonrise : A Rangrasiya OS - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Shreya! It is couple of days since the episode in which
The scene aired but rudra's eyes and his emotions r still with me
The silence and his monologue got a much deeper interpretation
Once i read ur OS. His deepest darkest never heeling
Wound was cut open again and that feeling was clear
Depicted in ur OS
And finally him surrendering to the comforts
Offered by his own Paro, whom he does not want
To acknowledge as his saviour as yet!
The subtle reference of surrender ! Awesome
Good going shreya! Hope to read more of
Ur work !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
It's nice shreya Baisa... Continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful shreya,
Beautifully written almost poetic .

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Rudra hurt and pain was beautifully portrayed. Lovely.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
You have a way with words Shreya! Beautiful!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So beautifully written!!
The usage of words not only convey the emotions but the magnitude and i love how you presented it all, everything that's not shown in the show all the unspoken words and emotions can be found in this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Whatta BEAUTIFUL piece that was!! Please do write more and more!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jaz1990

Your so good with words! Damn how do u write so beautifully!

thank u soo much jaz.I tried to write something meaningful, thatz it.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CandYlicious_S


CUte walay bhi likho na :D

I love emotional wali stories because I LOVE being connected with emotions.. <3 😳

cute lovestories hoti i nehi mujhse re.either hilarious or emotional...i think i dwell in the extremities 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Hey Shreya 👏
You have written this emotional OS so well
😳
All the feelings in rudras mind are described so poignantly.
The scene as it was shown on tv was mind blowing.

I can't think of a better way to put the same in words than what you have written here
😳

Keep writing...😊

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