Parud One Shot---THIRST (New--22nd March)

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Lovely work. The meaning of water was truly justified here.

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ipkknd-fan

@ipkknd-fan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Wow that was amazing!
Loved the OS :)

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Midnight

@Midnightsorrow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

This is amazing, well written the wrist scene was abit disturbing though.

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

It was indeed a mindblowing piece of work. I'm totally speechless after reading it. The intensity and emotions tugged my heart. You have penned Rudra's emotion so well. I really loved the father-son scene so much. The much needed emotional confrontation between them, and how Ranawat finally became his Bapusa again. The little child in Rudra is finally emerging after years.

Hats off to you... Will definitely check out your previous work too.

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Thanks for this beautiful OS!

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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Wow, glad I read this! It was satisfying all the cravings that didn't get satisfied in today's episode!

Thanks for the OS, it was excellent!

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

What can I say that hasn't been written already. It was all of above and lot more. Just beautifully written. Wish something close to this we get to see. Fab jus fabulous

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MaroRudra

@MaroRudra

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

So one again through your writing I felt like I was a physical part of the story, like I was actually in that hospital waiting room. I genuinely flinched when Rudra threw the glass, such is the impact of your words. Coming to the actual scene, I love how you showed Rudra resisting and Paro persisting. While the CVs don't use your logic and show everyone blaming Paro for Dilsher's state which is ludicrous, the resisting/persisting approach is essentially the essence of the show and you captured it beautifully! I really do wish you were an actual writer for this program because your stories would look incredible on screen and trps would go through the roof!

Edited by MadihaH8 - 11 years ago