Parud OS: Maybe - Page 3

Originally posted by: Rubab4137

Superb..amazing 👏

thank u so much...

Originally posted by: _Ms.Foxy.Angel_

That was one heart touching OS.
loved it.

thank you so much... :-D

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..

Superb

Loved it

thank you so much... :-D

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

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<font color="#006633" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Like seriously, I loved it!</font>

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<font color="#006633" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Pata hai kya, jabse tune mere ko baar baar tang karna shuru kia tha naa.. Ki Paro ka monologue likho... Likho monologue... Mujhe tabhi lag gaya tha ki tera khud ka mann ho raha hai!!</font>

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<font color="#006633" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Aur bahot hi zyaada accha likha hai betu!!! Sahi mei!</font>

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<font color="#006633" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Now all I want is that you continue writing on PaRud... Seriously!</font>

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<font color="#006633" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Maine jeevan mei shayad doosri baar teri likhi hui kisi cheez ko itni baar padha hoga! Bahot hi zyaada accha hai!</font>

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Thank you so much baabu..

it means the world to me...

I was toh very hesitant ki I don't go Ooc for this particular one...

glad u liked it :-D

Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">You know Vaish, I really don't know how to comment on this piece. One because it's RR and two because it's saddened me deeply. I'm moved by the depth of her agony/despair and regret. Also, I loved the parallel you drew between her feelings of solitude once before and then again now. I was quite surprised when I realised the time it is set in. I was reading it as being set right after her confrontation with Thakur-Sa. So imagine my surprise when I realised this is after another false accusation and then everything just got so much better.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">For it to be Rudra to realise she's thirsty and come give her water was sooo delicious and believable it almost made me want to squeal. Gorgeous detail there. So telling and just YAY!</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I just love everything about this. Please write more on PaRud because you treat them sooo well.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Thank you for this Vaish! <3</font>

pata hai cp pehle mereko aapka comment thoda samajh nhi aaya tha...

fir aa gaya...

thanku so much cp..

no saying thank u..

this was totally random... but I feel u liked the surprise... :-D

Originally posted by: ipkknd-fan

Great OS!
Love it :)

This was am amazing os yet lil emotional..
N u have portayed paro's feelings very well...

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha

This was am amazing os yet lil emotional..
N u have portayed paro's feelings very well...

thank you so much sanju... :-*

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply brilliant
loved it//