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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 28

Posted: 11 years ago

That was one heart touching OS.
loved it.

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

For somebody who is as new to RR as they say, you have got the character brilliantly Baisssuuu!!

Like seriously, I loved it!

Pata hai kya, jabse tune mere ko baar baar tang karna shuru kia tha naa.. Ki Paro ka monologue likho... Likho monologue... Mujhe tabhi lag gaya tha ki tera khud ka mann ho raha hai!!

Aur bahot hi zyaada accha likha hai betu!!! Sahi mei!

Now all I want is that you continue writing on PaRud... Seriously!

Maine jeevan mei shayad doosri baar teri likhi hui kisi cheez ko itni baar padha hoga! Bahot hi zyaada accha hai!

Edited by _SenbonZakura_ - 11 years ago

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Kashish

@Couch_Potato

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

You know Vaish, I really don't know how to comment on this piece. One because it's RR and two because it's saddened me deeply. I'm moved by the depth of her agony/despair and regret. Also, I loved the parallel you drew between her feelings of solitude once before and then again now. I was quite surprised when I realised the time it is set in. I was reading it as being set right after her confrontation with Thakur-Sa. So imagine my surprise when I realised this is after another false accusation and then everything just got so much better.

For it to be Rudra to realise she's thirsty and come give her water was sooo delicious and believable it almost made me want to squeal. Gorgeous detail there. So telling and just YAY!

I just love everything about this. Please write more on PaRud because you treat them sooo well.

Thank you for this Vaish! <3

Edited by Couch_Potato - 11 years ago