Mercury RRising - Page 2

Originally posted by: ujwala444

Damm good update

Originally posted by: Malini1

Lovely take as usual. Thanks for detailed analysis.

Originally posted by: supreet_dmg

very nicely said 👏

Originally posted by: Ipoona

Meanwhile, Rudra, already in good humour from winning his round withKakisa, felt his anticipation rise at the sight of Paro in the courtyard smiling at something his sisters-in-law had said. It was time to light her fire. He stared at her until she felt his eyes on her and dropped her own in confusion, losing her smile in the process. Good! He turned on the heat - layering the dare in his eyes with insolence and sensuality - and broadcast his come-hither without wavering. She was right to be apprehensive; to mistrust his intentions; to fear him; but neither could she look away. Her gaze returning to him time and again. And he pulled the invisible strings drawing her like a puppet to his bedroom door.

The bedroom door opened beneath Paro's touch, and she walked in warily with the tea-tray. There was no sign of the monster. All to the good. She was bending to lift a magazine from the table so that she could put down the tea-tray when her wrist was grabbed and twisted behind her, bringing her flush against the length of his body, driving the breath from hers. Eyes dilated, she exclaimed at his behaviour, ordered him to release her. That's when he captured her other wrist and brought it alongside the first in the small of her back, forcing her body closer still against his.

"What are you doing? Let me go!" Her eyes shouted their shock and panic at him. But the devil was smug, insolent, unmoving. It was payback time. "This is an ideal and loving husband's way. You had so many questions about my wedding. Now I have one question: is this wedding/relationship just the way you'd imagined it?" His voice was slow, savouring her discomposure. It was intolerable. Paro struggled, her body jerking against his, which only increased her agitation. But he only shushed her. Then told her: "Don't move, Paro!" Hearing her name in his languid accents was no doubt the reason why, even though he released it, one wrist stayed where it was, unmoving.

Out of the corner of her eye she could see his hand rising to her face, and now there was panic in her voice. "Don't you dare...!" In response, he breathed out a "shhh" that stoked up her nerve endings. And then with lingering sensuality, rubbed a streak of fire down her cheek. "Tea." At his explanation, she raised heavy lids over eyes wide with bewilderment, agitation and something else. That suddenly, all his languor evaporated. Intent, unsmiling eyes, lit with a dark, hidden heat met and held hers for one slumberous, heavy beat. Then Paro's lashes flickered and broke the spell. But it took a while for their breathing to even out, for the heat to dissipate, for sanity to return.

Rudra recovered first and pressed his advantage before Paro could calm down. "You didn't answer me. Is this the kind of marriage you wanted?" She bent, hiding her face, but Rudra grabbed her wrist so that her eyes flew to his. He wasn't going to let her evade him this time. She pulled her hand from his as if she couldn't bear him to touch her any more and gave in. No. This wasn't what she had in mind when she'd talked marriage, she admitted. Finally!

Sabs ... Loved the fire ... LoL ... Intensely heated text ... Was the scene equally good ... Out of curiosity what did he actually say when he said Don't move ... You draw me in so easily ... 😛 I love romance and your writing today is dripping it ... And another thing ... What did that other woman ... I am guessing she is the resident go to gal for his baser needs ... Since he hates woman ... What solution did she propose ... Or was it just alluded to ... Sabs love your writing ... Have you written any fiction ?

Thanks for a wonderful read. ... Can't wait for the next update ...

Originally posted by: ddFan2012

What an awesome take...

Phew...your detailed description of their scene from the moment he stared and beckoned her to come to him to those Parud heated moments...is just fantasttic...

I need the AC on on a cold winter morning..☺️

Originally posted by: tvbug2011

Thank you, ddFan. Glad to do my bit to generate heat.😃 But seriously, that Ashish ufff completely hot! 😳 That's the heat source there!!

Originally posted by: ddFan2012

oh just cal me DD they are the initials of my name.

Originally posted by: vanitha3d

Lovely take😊