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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

So since we have so much dissatisfaction with the progression. I thought why not get alternate story lines going so each can include what they want to see int it.

they have used many major issues as stepping stools to get us this far..

the border issues ...bride sales (possible prostitution)

arms sales

zamindaar corruption and mass monopolisation.

Army conduct..

POW handling

DIL harassment

infertility

Adoption

and i guess the list can go on ...but they all seem like props for a final love story..tht starts with hate and ends with consummation...

So what if the plot was any of the above and we had love story that happened along the way ...

My pick would be border issues and terrorism (just because I am more acquainted with it)...

I will come back with my proposed plot line but feel free to post yours ...

a topic and how all this will fit in there try and keep the same geographic location and the characters...

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fun_games

@fun_games

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Posted: 11 years ago

What about Laila angle? I thought she is an integral part of the story😲

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fun_games
What about Laila angle? I thought she is an integral part of the story

Yup you can do that too ...its up to you to pick one and go with it ...or you can pick a theme (cos i dont think Laila is a theme) and have laila as part of the ensemble as she is now but give her more space in the plot...

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Definitely a focus on the action at the border, Thakur's nexus, the men who're involved, the arms dealing, etc.

I would have loved to see how Rudra deals with all of the above and how his relationship with Parvati progresses with developments on the professional front. Paro could have transitioned from an unwilling witness to an ally. Trust, faith, honour, self interest, along with love, lust, and intrigue-- it would have all made for an interesting watch.

I'll freely admit that I'm not fond of this extended family business. I'm heartless, but at times like this, there is much to be said about orphaned leads minus the relatives.

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Smriti

@serialjunkie

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Posted: 11 years ago

focus only on consumashuns

between

Thakur and Thakurain

Mohini and Danveer

Mala and Dilsher

Samrat and Mythili

Sunehri and DreamBoy

Sumer and Phone Partner

Mazdoor and Mazdoorain

Aman and Shanti

VK Singh and Mrs. Vk Singh

Kesari Ram and his missing Turban

Gotti and Forced Marriage

Nautanki and Reality

bas.

save Rudra Paro for last episode.

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Jasmin

@Jaz1990

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Posted: 11 years ago

Border issues! But I guess the family stuff is also needed for family viewers

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tttttt1

@tttttt1

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CravingKhana

Yup you can do that too ...its up to you to pick one and go with it ...or you can pick a theme (cos i dont think Laila is a theme) and have laila as part of the ensemble as she is now but give her more space in the plot...

laila i am sure will return as a vamp

i thought the plot of MU was a very strong one only to be diluted by madumaki madumaki yesterday

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Napstermonster wrote an OS on bindi...that is very practical and possible...CVs should have shown the fate of bindi to paro...and even if she still doesn't believe that it was thakur's doing atleast a seed of doubt could be planted...maybe instead of treating her as a witness/accomplice they could have asked her to help prove that she is right and BSD is wrong...that SHE somehow gets the proof that tejawat is innocent and while looking into all this she realises how true BSD has always been.

Anything but the marriage please. I dont want to stop watching one serial I have started in past two years. Please.pretty please.