PaRud SS: Tangled emotions Chap 3 updated (Pg 7) Index Pg 3 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hey Gargi, Amazing updates!--Thanks for reading Navi😃

Just read both parts now ... and it's awesome👏!---Really? It just came to my mind😳 As u know I don't watch this show, but through your wonderful writing, I've become so familiar with the lead characters😳.---Really?..You have got to know a lot to know about Rudra specially..He is such a mess. I guess your title is from Rudra's POV,---From the point of view of both Rudra and Parvati..But you gave a me a good point. Next time I would definitely mention the point of view word for both of them😊
because he is 1 tangled mess😆.---Hmm he is..He doesn't let his heart rule at all n definitely not in front of a beautiful woman His heart is telling him to say 1 thing , but he's mouthing off something else!---Damn his ego..But ya this story has been forwarded a bit and right now m focusing on the love story of the main characters😉 Enjoyed it lots, do continue soon, thanks 4 the PM😃.---Your welcome Navi.



Thanks once again Navi for reading it. Its a great thing for me to find you here and the most important thing, to read it just on my PM and leave a beautiful note of support🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: puvini

but how vl he shut her😳 in Rudra's style?😉 looking forward to it.. Dilsher already re-opend his plan to make her his bahu this time with more confident & determination.. Thats gonna b interesting ..


Hmm dilsher has some plans for the better😉..Lets see what Tandav Rudra has to perform to throw Paro out of his house😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Awesome updet gargi...
Rudra and paro both is so stubborn...why rudra you can't open your heart for someone...but love paro's reaction she stand for herself...sasur sa ko to bahu pehle se hi pasand hai bus un k rudra dev k manne ka wait hai...best of luck ranaut...

Arz kia hai...

Jiss ko tufaan se ulajhne ne ki aadat ho,
Aisi kashti ko samundar bhi Dua deta hai...


Edited by riddzykhanmalik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Loved both the chps.
I was wondering where is Dilsher in the 2nd one. Finally he came in!

I loved how Paro clearly told rudy boy- "I wont go" and it is his responsibility to provide for her.

I am impatiently waiting for Rudi boy's mind to take a hike for a while and let his heart function..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Caught up with both chapters. I'm enjoying that it's set post the case. Now when there's nothing to actually bind them, what actually keeps them together. Love yr way of story telling!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Awesome updet gargi...Thank dear..What's ur name?😊


Rudra and paro both is so stubborn...why rudra you can't open your heart for someone...Hmm we all know Rudra boy how he is...He can't let his heart out to a woman..specially to a beautiful woman

but love paro's reaction she stand for herself...sasur sa ko to bahu pehle se hi pasand hai bus un k rudra dev k manne ka wait hai...best of luck ranaut...Yes our dear Sasur sa has got another chance to make Paro his bahu.

Arz kia hai...Irshaad😃

Jiss ko tufaan se ulajhne ne ki aadat ho,
Aisi kashti ko samundar bhi Dua deta hai...Waah!...Kya khub kaha👏👏..Nice shayeri...



Loved ur comments dear..Thanks for the encouragement n for the great shayeri😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: shree10

Loved both the chps.--Thank you Shree


I was wondering where is Dilsher in the 2nd one. Finally he came in!--Yes Dilsher has to be there after all. Our source of enterainment😆

I loved how Paro clearly told rudy boy- "I wont go" and it is his responsibility to provide for her.--Our Paro has grown quite stronger in so many days

I am impatiently waiting for Rudi boy's mind to take a hike for a while and let his heart function..😃--Hmm..lets see when his Heart wins the fight😉


Thank you once again for the great comments Shree😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Sofna

Caught up with both chapters. I'm enjoying that it's set post the case. Now when there's nothing to actually bind them, what actually keeps them together. Love yr way of story telling!


Thanks sofna😊..Glad you liked my story telling way😳...I actually always wondered how the story will move after the entire cross-border issues are resolved n so here I am with my own story😆. I think in the show as well it will be interesting to see how it folds.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Hi Fadila😊..thanks for liking
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi what is ur name?...Thanks for finding the story great😊

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