Today's Take - A Festering Wound - Page 4

It was a raw epi Diya, and yr take has done beautiful justice to Rudra's 'festered' wound.
What really stood out for me was how familiar they are becoming of the presence of each other in their lives. She is attuned to his movements right down to the way he opened the door. His gaze seeks her out first in these harsh surroundings.
Their time has only been short, in the worst circumstances they are together, yet they are united in front of everyone, despite their equation behind closed doors.
She feels safe to indicate the reason fr chai, he rescuing her from any humiliation meted out by the kaki (shoe).
The chachi in her spy mode to discovering the truth is actually cementing their need to remain together.
I'm glad she brought out the chink in Rudra's armor. Paro is a good person, she would not relish in someone Else's pain/grief...it will pave way for her to start seeing the man behind the jallad facade he presents to the world.

Originally posted by: Malini1

Lovely write up as always.

Originally posted by: Sofna

It was a raw epi Diya, and yr take has done beautiful justice to Rudra's 'festered' wound.
What really stood out for me was how familiar they are becoming of the presence of each other in their lives. She is attuned to his movements right down to the way he opened the door. His gaze seeks her out first in these harsh surroundings.
Their time has only been short, in the worst circumstances they are together, yet they are united in front of everyone, despite their equation behind closed doors.
She feels safe to indicate the reason fr chai, he rescuing her from any humiliation meted out by the kaki (shoe).
The chachi in her spy mode to discovering the truth is actually cementing their need to remain together.
I'm glad she brought out the chink in Rudra's armor. Paro is a good person, she would not relish in someone Else's pain/grief...it will pave way for her to start seeing the man behind the jallad facade he presents to the world.

short, but your take hit the nail perfectly, dia. (and like i always say, your take lends a sophistication to the story that the episode did not have, through my eyes.)

i am disappointed in the directing .. pain does not need tears as validation.
for a man like rudra pratap ranawat, who can dishoom dishoom on a broken back, tears were not needed to convey the depth of emotion.

i feel that rudra was always dependent on his mohini kaki.. when he was a kid, he treated her just like a mom. i believe that is why he was so ready to touch her feet and apologize when she demanded it. in his memory, she was never this vicious.(she was sharp-tongued to the adults , never to him the child.) hearing his maa-like maasi taunt him about his maa must have been heartbreaking for him..

i wanted to speed up the scene after he said "get out".. everyone were lingering on and giving expression closeups.. IMHO, him hanging by a thread and pushing everyone out, should have been executed faster, so he could collapse against the door.

Nice take Diya. Could not post yesterday, will definitely try to put in my thoughts on both episodes today.