OS- Yesterday and Tomorrow-Red Ghagra (completed) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice contrast.

Haye, Major smiling knowing what Paro Baisa is upto and ordering BM around!
Muze bhi jana hai Barat mein!

About - Laila - I dont despise Laila so far. Major is equal partner there.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!
amazing story.👏
thanks for sharing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just love this OS... Hope to read more from u.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Major Sahab is deeply in love with his Paro. I'm eager for their wedding and the past which begins their love story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: napstermonster


Thank you very much your Highness! Honestly, I am touched that you would read Perfection after such a long time, and to tell you the truth, I didn't think I would ever write again after IPK ended on such a terrible, Fandom -destroying note. I found myself losing the desire to write at all, and for me that was a huge loss. I was mad at myself. I was mad that I felt so bad, I was a logical sensible adult! and still, till date, I haven't watched an episode of IPKKND beyond October 2012--I've just not watched the show post the Junior ASR track. I wanted to finish my old FFs, even tried a few times but when the desire to write anything is gone, its gone. Or so i thought.

Suddenly, over the past few days, the images, the words and the story ideas for Paro-Rudra started to just to come, so fast that I have a note pad with random scribbles that should be the start of at least a few more One Shots--at least! I hadn't written in over a year, and over the weekend I've written 4 OS and am working on more.

And I'm feeling some Arnav Khushi inspiration too. I don't know how many people would be interested in IPKKND continuations of Perfection, but I'm writing some anyways---whether I'll post them remains to be seen--honestly, if I do I'm not sending out PMs--I'm embarrassed since I dont know if the new stuff I'm writing is any good.

But I'll post soon, and see if people like the new stuff for Perfection or if its tomatoes and chappals for me. Please keep an eye out for my new OSs on Parud (just some OS for now, as I start getting comfortable with the new characters) and let me know how Perfection strikes you.



aww well i read A girl named Khushi a while back n that is when I fell in love with ur writing. I saved the entire story with me, its in my books collection I always carry in my phone! A story that made me weep, yet smile.. Heartwrenching yet... so poignantly beautiful...
but i somehow missed the rest as it was a same case for me, the way IPK ended was soul destroying for me. I haven't myself either continued or written anything after that. I also just couldn't.. i just dumped every single thing... :(( Even now I am just delighted that u have found ur muse again through PaRud.. hopefully i will get lucky once again too.. i am not yet there..
RR is kinda like a healing touch.. but i am vary.. very very vary of getting attached... handing over something else power to hurt me again.. once bitten ten times shy is my motto with this show.

And oh Perfection was amazing! As the name said, perfect.. I left my last comment there telling u that it was a miracle n a blessing that u stopped it at the point of Khushi landing in Arnav's arms n collapsing instead of leaving it at her still running and not at the point where that psychopath was behind her! A single paragraph! but it allowed me to breath! That was how gripping that story was for me!!

And as for ur new batch of OSes!! The r MAGICAL!! just just love them so much!! No matter how busy i am at any time, when i see an update of ur OS i just drop everything and read!
They r as good as a Girl named Khushi.. n i cannot give a higher praise.. cz i just love that story like anything... 🤗

Keep writing and hopefully this story will give us happiness only.. here is wishing for a proper closure n that it will not break our hearts one day!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guinea

Very nice ...though seriously if and when rudra and paro marry , would like her to wear another lehnga 😆 Sanaya has worn it for too darn long ...she will get nightmares if she has to wear it again 😆


Totally repromoting...but just I'll still just address this--its a NEW copy of the old lahenga. And how long will Rudra let it stay on this time, Guinea Gold? I give it 10 mins tops beyond the pheras!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi dear i have read all your works but may not have commented bcoz i am usually a silent reader who is not so good with words😛 just wanted to tell you in this os series of yesterday and tomorrow the red ghaghra was so sensuous 😳and heart touching to read and the os with bindya was so realistic i think the cv,s should consider this idea for unmasking tejawat in front of paro. 😊
If you dont mind please write a scene involving laila in this series i am dying to read in your narration. Please of course its up to you but just consider a sincere request from your fan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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More please!!! Love these stories.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sony1990

Hi dear i have read all your works but may not have commented bcoz i am usually a silent reader who is not so good with words😛 just wanted to tell you in this os series of yesterday and tomorrow the red ghaghra was so sensuous 😳and heart touching to read and the os with bindya was so realistic i think the cv,s should consider this idea for unmasking tejawat in front of paro. 😊

If you dont mind please write a scene involving laila in this series i am dying to read in your narration. Please of course its up to you but just consider a sincere request from your fan.



Hi!

Can I request any readers of my one shots to suggest themes for new Yesterday and Tomorrow stories? I did ones on Bindi, on Mirrors, the wedding ghagra, on "food" and I'm working on one on Laila.

Any requests on themes or things/special symbols you want to see in a Yesterday/Tomorrow story?Please post here!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: napstermonster



Hi!

Can I request any readers of my one shots to suggest themes for new Yesterday and Tomorrow stories? I did ones on Bindi, on Mirrors, the wedding ghagra, on "food" and I'm working on one on Laila.

Any requests on themes or things/special symbols you want to see in a Yesterday/Tomorrow story?Please post here!


Looking forward to the one on Laila. As for other suggestions, how about on on Rukmani and maybe one involving Rudra's bike?

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