OS- Yesterday and Tomorrow-Red Ghagra (completed)

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daniclayton

@daniclayton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

I loved it... U can imagine how much as I read in the middle of a party and I am sitting reading this

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Roshni

@rashika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Wow. Just came across this from your other os. I must say the contrast between yesterday and tomorrow is so big. Yesterday seemed so horrible compared to tomorrow. How cruel life has been for paro before. Would love to know how it all changed into the beautiful tomorrow it has become.

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

I love the contrasts you've portrayed in this series :) Beautifully done!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

"The red ghagra dropped from her body as if it weighed a ton. She was no longer a bride. As it fell from her trembling body, it seemed to carry down with it all her expectations, her hopes and dreams. Her future fell in red folds of cloth around her ankles, now tattered, stained with blood and wet with her tears. She would never be clad in her mother's blessing again, never wear red again. It was over."

This is the essence of this part of the series. The red ghagra which made him appear like an animal then is now his own pride on her and the dreams that he stripped away made their way back into her life on his behest. Oh how fate is intertwined here! Powerful writing, Napster.

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goguma

@goguma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

what a contrast..!

yesterday was painful to read, while tomorrow had me ...

nice ...!

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gabrielle14

@gabrielle14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

OMG it was sooo beautiful. I was nearly in tears reading Yesterday. I could imagine Paro and Rudra doing these scenes. I wish the CV' s would incorporate this into the story.⭐️⭐️⭐️

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Omg what is Rudra's intentions towards her

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