OS- Yesterday and Tomorrow-- Prisoner (Part 1, 2 and 3)

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Suni

@Suni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

The yesterdays are terrifying! Makes me wonder if the Jallad there is someone else and not Rudra? I cannot conceive Paro being so happy (as she in the tomorrows) with someone who treated her like that.

Love your writing!

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Nicely composed and a great insight into what is, what was and what may be... Hope one day we get to read more in your previous works too...

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bolt

@bolt

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Like the side by side.
Very interesting.

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

My first Rangrasiya OS and it had to yours.

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shruathi

@shruathi

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

wooowww loved it superbbb grinning like mad reading it:)

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

WOW ...👏 Napster... Simply Brilliant .. 👍🏼Read all three parts in one go ... The contrast between Yesterday and Tomorrow was written really well ... 👍🏼

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

superb writing as always...👏

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@Deleted

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

hey, saw u on if after so long...

Will you continue 'perfection.'???????? I just love the story!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

the first one was good, the second one was (shudder) sadistic. you paint such a vivid picture with your words, now it will take some time to erase that whip from my mind. you have immense talent, girl!

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Fabulous writing Napstermonster. I've never read any of your tales before so I'm pleasantly surprised to read such beautiful pieces. I am intrigued to know how PaRud will fall in love when they have such a bitter past. If only there was a today to indicate the transition in their love story.

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