OS- Yesterday and Tomorrow-- Prisoner (Part 1, 2 and 3)

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Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Wow!! Fantastically written. The emotions in both parallels are so far apart you wonder how they could ever merge. Can't wait to read more.

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SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow Napster, these OS's are blowing my mind away. What I look forward to the most is finding out how they got from yesterday to this tomorrow.

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Payali09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Such a unique narrative. Never seen stories sequenced as you have done in the form of yesterday and tomorrow. Yesterday is so heartbreaking and torturous that as a reader I question how on earth is tomorrow possible. Yet the beauty of tomorrow makes the pain of yesterday seem like a distant memory. Hopefully there will be more parts to this. Please do continue!

Reading your writing seemed so familiar so I clicked on your index link and realized you were the same author who brought me to actual tears (a rarity) with Apshagun + A Girl Named Khushi. So pleased to see your take on PaRud now. Cannot wait to see what further gems will be mined from your imagination!

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meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

I don't watch the show but thanks to all the friends i see here, i can't help but visit once in a while...

And each visit i wait to see if inspiration has struck yet

Oh how it has, N. Your writing is as exemplary as ever and though the names have changed as has the God and the irreverent pet name she calls him, the tug of genius in your concept is the same. If this show is beginning to release the best creativity its successor saw once (still does), i'm not sure i can hold out much longer

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Wowww!!! I mean just wow. I am just at a loss of words,you atr one talented writer,dear!Third part brought tears in my eyes.

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

That is powerful writing Napster ...

waiting to read more on the Jallad and softie Paro ...

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golpokobita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

As much as I love the tomorrows, i feel terrified to read the yesterdays.

In both cases, Rudra is extreme. I can't imagine Rudra being so caring and loving to Parvati! Neither can I believe that one can be so cruel and beastly when I read Paro's condition yesterday!

Curiosity is killing me! What happened in between??

Your writing is so powerful, the narratives of yesterday has left me restless.. Brilliant writing!

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Angels11

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: napstermonster

Its not supposed to be a period of three days. Its not meant to be literally taken. Yesterday means the past, tomorrow means the future. No actual time line.

Tnx 4 clarifying. Found the past horrific. how can paro forget tat nightmare so easily

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

So glad to see you here ! I totlly loved it! :D I think my fave was Tomorrow in Part 2 <3 I hope we get a part 4..phir 5..6 and as many as you can ! :)

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-Saumya-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Those OSs are so brilliant! You portray two diametrically opposite scenarios and yet there is something which binds them both together. The tomorrows have such a warm, fuzzy feeling and the yesterdays are dreadful. I can't wait for more of these! 😳

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