OS: Tears Of An Angel!

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Shivani nice OS. If i keep on reading such post about Paro will end in depression. So many good posts. Each word that you have used carried more weightage than it actually should...Loved reading :)

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DiyaS

@DiyaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Beautifully written ... you conveyed how lost and dazed Paro is, and how nothing Rudra says or does is impinging on her conscious self, so lost is she in her grief and shock.

Loved the song too ... so apt!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: _Littles12_
You have wrote such brilliantly. Everything was summed up, WOW!

Do try continuing it❤️

Thank you dear! And I'll honestly try how far can I pull it!!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Skyfall
This was absolutely beautiful.

I love the way you write!

You have managed to convey her emotions in such a brilliant way.

Please do keep writing.

Thank you! I am happy that you liked it!!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: littoos
nicely written...i cld feel those tears...

Thank you dear!!!

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Anita

@neet2407

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

your OS is as great as your takes girl! Really wonderful stuff - of course waiting to read more !

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sslmay11
Shivani nice OS. If i keep on reading such post about Paro will end in depression. So many good posts. Each word that you have used carried more weightage than it actually should...Loved reading :)

Sorry Lakshmi, that never was the intention. I've been listening to this song on a loop and have been visualising Paro and no one else! That's how the OS sprung up!! Thanks for liking it!!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: DiyaS
Beautifully written ... you conveyed how lost and dazed Paro is, and how nothing Rudra says or does is impinging on her conscious self, so lost is she in her grief and shock.
Loved the song too ... so apt!

Paro was dazed to an extent that she didn't register a thing that came her way. All she knew was her losses and isn't ready to budge!

Glad you liked it Diya.