Kuch khas hai ShaNak SS pt 8,9 pg 9 updated 29 jan - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
we know real life beckons ana thanks for updating long :)
WOW i like rishabh he is naughty haughty ;) and a true gentleman too he is not at all boring if khanak is keeping shan then i can have rishabh ;)

i think rishabh is going to be a great help to khanak to start new he ll be her supporter dekhna ye hai ke wen & how he wil fall for her OR not at all i dont mind them being only best friends :)

shan is still confused if he knows khanak's mysery her sad story he understands her grief then he is making her living here in mumbai worse why he insults her more thn him she too wants to go back to dhulwadi but majburi ki wajah se cant he shud atleast respect her take care of her as her caretaker atleast he is her husband after all
he insults her at the same time doing things for her i will not forgive shan so easily if u ask me i want khanak to give him tough time to not forgive him so easily wen he understands his mistakes and beg for forgiveness

update soon ana update on only weekends bhi chalega if u r too busy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

we know real life beckons ana thanks for updating long :)

WOW i like rishabh he is naughty haughty ;) and a true gentleman too he is not at all boring if khanak is keeping shan then i can have rishabh ;)

i think rishabh is going to be a great help to khanak to start new he ll be her supporter dekhna ye hai ke wen & how he wil fall for her OR not at all i dont mind them being only best friends :)

shan is still confused if he knows khanak's mysery her sad story he understands her grief then he is making her living here in mumbai worse why he insults her more thn him she too wants to go back to dhulwadi but majburi ki wajah se cant he shud atleast respect her take care of her as her caretaker atleast he is her husband after all
he insults her at the same time doing things for her i will not forgive shan so easily if u ask me i want khanak to give him tough time to not forgive him so easily wen he understands his mistakes and beg for forgiveness

update soon ana update on only weekends bhi chalega if u r too busy

RK is a character u guys may surely love...he's a very imp part of khanaks life...may be more than shan even...or may not...but surely a character u gonna love...as to there love story...let's see...lol khanak might get possessive of rk...she may not let us keep him...haha...
As for shah...yeah he's one confused boy...boy..not a man yet...I always wanted a redeeming shah or realizing khanak peob somehow..grow into a little matured man..but it was not in the show...so will make it happen here...not once he ever told sorry to khanak for all this..and kept on insulting her . He won't be forgiven easily by khanak...hope his realization doesn't beclate in my story...coz as he has got natz...now rk has entered the scene too...this story...Shawn will grow from a boy to man...he will realise all his wrongness..he will learn to respect, treasure and value relations...he will have to throw away his me and myself attitude... let's see his journey...he's got an habit of blaming others for all his situations...but now he will have to start taking responsibility...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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right ana he blames others for everything but in show after realizing his love for khanak he saod sorry to her
lets c what happens here update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all, Thank you for updating 2 back to back updates Ana 😛😛

I love Shaan's immaturity, since that will define his growtha as a MAN, as a human being...
He never takes responsibility of his deeds and blames others, true, a natural thing to posses for a smart rich spoilt boy...

whereas, Khanak already has gone thorugh so much pain in such short age, definitely much more practical and mature person.
Loved when She moved to Shimla with the help of Dadi, who is exactly like her in nature...😊

Loved how you are taking the progress in this tale.

My wishes:
1. Want Shaan n Natasha to go to Shimla together for a business purpose. I definitely want Natasha around Shaan, since i think she will be one of main reason Shaan will grow as a personality.
2. Khanak n RK, definitely want a solid frndship, NO MORE LOVE though. Its undigestable. 😆😆
3. These two groups meeting, and then realisation through Jealousy, Dependency, care, support... etc etc...


I wud love to read Shaan learning from RK how to be good, and Natasha, dont want her to be negative...

Will wait for the story that is. LOVE to unfold between Shantanu and Khanak...😃😃😛😉😊

- Saroj

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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
sorry for late comment
read both the parts
liked them very much
so rk is not bad person at heart he tried to be friend with khanak
i think this friendship will go long way. Might be possessiveness will come on both side rk side more if he doesn't know khanak is married.
though khanak is impressed with rk but she can't forget sk ;-)
the one and only shantanu khandelwal
what will happen with both rk sk will come face to face
clashes of jealousy i guess :D
waiting for next update and waiting for khanak to start grooming by daadi's friend or will she give this job to rk? then rk ki pathshala will start!


between do you have time i saw one shanak vm it was sad but i liked it very much can you write short story on that?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
update sooon babe please x
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Anaaa

Update karo jaldi jaldi... plijjj
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7
Hi guys...so let's enter shanak world again...so we have Rk,So,khanak,Natasha...ummm...interesting...let's see what happens further...we all know who r Shan, khanak,Natasha...so here presenting u the RK...rishabh kundra...VIVIAN D SENA...CREDIT TO UPLOADERS...I AM JUST USING IT...

Edited by dreamyjennice - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys
Can anybody do me a favour...make an edit of Vivian and yashu...and,a banner for my story...starring all four with suraj as,well...I will be greatful...and can pm me them..so that I can put it on front page of story
OK so now back to update...and guys also one thing...am glad sonevbody is made an fb page and loading epis there...bwleive me it's like oxygen to my eyes,watching rbo back...thank God to whoever it is...

Part 7

Simla..

The day went pretty boring since morning. Khanak was busy thinking about life..her past and shan. She hadn't met Rk since morning...RK...what sort of name was that??? He had,such good name Rishabh. Shantanu had a fetish for being called Shan. And now Rishabh had for RK. What was this with names,with city people...she couldn't understand it. It was 3 in after noon and the house was eerily silent. Dad I had gone with aunty...to some temple. She couldn't go as she was in her chums( periods) and feeling too cranky. She thought to take a stroll in sun out in garden.
She was strolling for past half an hour deeply engrossed in her thoughts not knowing she was being watched. Rk who had just come back into house had seem khanak strolling out in garden. He wanted to be alone for sometime...he had some serious issues to think of but expressions on khanaks face intrigued him. What was she thinking so deeply that she didn't even hear the Loud honking of his,car. He silently sat on the garden sofa and stared at her.it's been half an hour and she still didn't stop to even acknowledge his presence. So this chudail knew to think deep...ahaa...let's have some fun...he suddenly stood and started following her..
Khanak who was lost in her own world felt an awareness suddenly...she felt like she was being watched. She stopped and looked to Ger side to find nobody...she started to walk again but she again felt same. She was feeling scared...when she felt someone breathing on her neck...she was shocked,rooted to spot in fear...
K: KKK...KAAAUUUNNN...HHHAAAIII?? She,asked closing f her eyes fearingly...
RK: Mai ek vampire hoon... ur smell is too delicious...I got my food for today...
Rk laughs evilly putting artificial fangs in his mouth...
K: vampirrreee...won kya hota hai...??? She still doesn't dare to turn around in fear...
RK: vampire drinks blood of humans...and u smell so tasty..I wanna eat you...hahaha
K: plzzz don't kill me...she starts crying...
Rk: I am hungry...u sound,so sad of life...I better kill you...u will be free...am doing u a fovour...
Rk holds her tightly from behinds and enacts sinking his fangs in her neck...khanak is dreading with fear...she feels something poking her neck skin and she's all ready to die...she shuts her eyes more tightly when she suddenly hears loud laughing sound...a laughing sound she could guess was of rk...she turned around and glared him furiously...
K: RK I am gonna,kill u..she starts running g behind him...and they both are running behind each other...
Dadi enters and www tches them along with rk mom...dad I is glad finally seeing a smiling playing khanak...rk mom was also shocked..seeing rk play like this...was her son actually smiling...both we're glued watching khanak and rk shout like kids and run behind each other all laughing and smiling...but something made both of them shudder...will this flower into a new relationship between these two...both dadi & SK looked questioningly into each other...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
thanks for updating even a short part

liked vivan intro

now about update
khanak still engrossed in shaan's thought and strolling in garden. and after many attempt of rk she din't even saw him. it must be surprising for rk girl not giving attention to him. liked scene of rk scaring her and khanak as she is!! scared for her life. it reminded me pool side khanak studying english and shaan enters and she scares scene. and you made rk vampire lolz like vivan's first serial. and she actually taken him as some vampire and cat and mouse run was nice. they surely will make good friends. And as sk and dadi both fears hope this should be friendship only. may be very possessive friendship but ony friendship.
Edited by Marathi_Mulgi - 9 years ago

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