YEH PYAR HAI(ss) pt 10 pg 24 jan 20 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loving yhe story, will read it defo, will comment when i have time sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow u r back wid yet another luvstory... lovely n innocent update nikki... nd injection iz d solution fr every other thing... dat is sooo soo cute... waiting for next... -saroj
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey..read all the parts..nd they were lovely ...w8ing to read moreee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx for the pm di. I read all the parts and really loved them. <3 <3

With lots of love
kanika
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi friends...sorry for the delay...i was busy with my sons work...and now my net also not working..i have been switching on and off for really halfhr..before it goes away first i will update...


pt 4

shaan and khanak were sitting in the dinning table and eating...

shaan helped her while eating..he thought her how to eat...

savitha : bhiay kesav sir has come...

shaan : oh...di u help her to finish eat all...

savitha : s bhiaya...

shaan was his hand and came to dinning hall...

shaan : s kesav...

kesav stood from sofa

kesav : goodaftenoon sir ..(smile)

shaan : ummm...

kesav : sir in these two files u have to sighn ssir...

shaan : sit down...

shaan and kesav sat in the sofa and shaan took the file and he was checking...

khanak : shantanu...shantanu...

khanak came to hall...shaan looked at her...kept the file

shaan : khanak u did not wash ur hands...its not good manners...

khanak : u came...

shaan : i washed my hands and came ...

meanwhile savitha to came there...

shaan : go with savitha di..she will give u chocolatess...

khanak : chocolates...she ran to the kitchen with joy...

shaan sat on the sofa looked at kesav who was looking at khanak questiongly...

shaan told about her to kesav...

shaan : we have to find her relatives...

kesav : umm...(thinking something)

later at night ...savitha went home at evening...

shaan : r u sleepy...

khanak : umm...

shaan took her to the guest room...

shaan : khanak u sleep in this bed...

khanak : umm...

khanak laid in the bed...

shaan put the bedsheet over her...and he was about to go...

khanak : u sleep this side...

shaan looked at her in shock...

shaan : khanak...u sleep here i will sleep in...

khanak : no..no...i am afraid...i cont sleep alone...

shaan thought okay till she sleeps then i can go to my room...

shaan layed bessides her...

khanak : shantanu...

shaan :umm...

khanak : u should not leave me...promise...

shaan looked at her..she has extended her hand for promise...

shaan looked at her eyes...

shaan : umm..promise..(placed his hand on her hand)

khanak : if u did not keep promise god will punish u okay...(innocently)

shaan just smsiled at her and closed his eyes...

after few minutes shaan opened his eyes and saw khanak has slept...

she was sleeping like a baby...shaan was about to getup...

he recalled her promise...he smiled to himself...he placed two pillows inbetween

them and he slept there itself...

later the next day morning...shaan heard some noise and woke up...

he was shocked...khanaks head was sresting in his chest

and her hands around his waist...her one leg on his leg...

pillows were on the floor...shaan felt something inside...

he slowly moved without making khanak wake up...

later savitha came with her son ansh who is 4 yrs old...

khanak liked ansh and they both played together...

shaan gave chocolates to ansh as it was his birthday...

(savithas hubby worked in shaans factory..he died recently in an accident

shaan helped that family ...he gave job to savitha also...ansh was really cute..

savitha brought ansh there sometimes so shaan liked him...shaan knows his birthdays..

so during birthdays r festivals shaan takes dress and chocolates for anssh..)

shaans cell rang...

shaan : ha doctor...

doctor : shaan we need khanaks photo...my friend has come now...

shaan : oh...i will send it with kesav sir now...

doctor : okay...

shaan then called kesav...

shaan : kesav...before u go to office come to my house..

kesav : s sir...

shaan went to his room and took a camera...and came down to hall...

shaan : who wants to take pic...(with a smile)

khanak : wat..wat is this...

ansh : aunty..it is camera...

shaan : correct boy...let me tell u khanak...

shaan : u stand here ...

khanak stood as shaan told...

shaan took a pic and the photo came out...

he shook it...and he showed to them...

khanak :hey...my pic...(smile)showed to ansh...

shaan : ansh u both stand together...

shaan took pics and showed them...

ansh : mom...mom...

savitha came from kitchen...

shaan took pics of ansh savitha and khanak together...

kesav : sir...

shaan : u came...took a single pic of khanak and gave to kesav...

shaan : give this pic to doctor ...

kesav : okay sir...

khanak : shantanu we both can take...

kesav was about to go...shaan stoped him and asked him to take pics of them..

kesav took pics of shaan and khanak then shaan khanak and ansh..and then he went...

savitha asked for copy of pics...shaan told her take wat ever pics she wanted ...

r she can take all the pics if she wanted...and he went to take his lappy...

a week has gone...in the last week shaan mostly did his work in home itself...

he took care of khanak nicely and she also wanted shaan to be with her also...

ansh came to their house daily...so that wen they r playing shaan called his staffs

r clients and he did his office work...so the week went well...

shaan : savitha di..where they...

savitha : they r making chappati dough...

shaan : di takecare i have to go to office today..important work..

savitha : umm...i will takecare bhaiya...

shaan went to office...

shaan pressed intercom button...

shaan : kesav bring xx file...

rishi : sir..i am rishi..kesav took leave sir...

shaan : i saw him when i came na...

rishi : he told he was not feeling stomach upset itseems...

shaan : oh...rishi then u bring the file now...

rishi : s sir...

while in house...there was a knock on the door...

savitha : sir...wat happened..u r hands blood...

kesav : nothing a small cut...while entering the house in that gate something...

savitha : comeinside...i will see for bandage...

savitha went inside the kitchen...with in a minute she returned...

savitha : i will go and get bandage from shop...u hold ur hand with this cloth..

savitha gave the cloth to him and she started to walk out...

after savitha went out ...kesav quickly went inside after locking the front door...

and saw khanak and ansh were making small balls from dough...

he opened the fridge he saw two cups of icecream...

meanwhile in shaans office...he was dictating letters to rishi...

rishi :sir.. u have said this already..

shaan : oh...(thinking..)

rishi : r u not feeling well sir...

shaan : no..i am fine..but...

(he felt something uneasy...he felt something wrong)

shaan :u continue...he started to dictate the letter...

kesav : ansh come here ...this is for u...

kesav gave a icecream cup to ansh...

khanak : for me uncle...

kesav : come with me i will give...

khanak : umm...

kesav : u sit here and eat...gave a chocolate to him...

ansh shook his head and sat and started to eat...

khanak : for me also chocolate...

kesav : i will give come with me...

khanak : umm...

kesav walked to the guest room...khanak also came along with him..

kesav : sit in the bed...

khanak : first icecream...

kesav : uh...have it...he gave the icecream...

khanak sat in the bed and started to eat the icecream...

kesav sat near her...he touched her shoulders...

slowly he took of her chudithar sall...

khanak : why r u taking my sall give it...

kesav : icecream may spill in it...

khanak : oh...

kesavs hand slowly landed on her lap...

kesav : ahhh...

kesav was on the floor...when he saw he was afraid...

shaan was standing there in full anger...

he started to beat him nicely...kesav was saying sorry sir..please leave me...

but shaan was not in a mood to listen he was giving him nicely...

meanwhile savitha also came...she cameinbetween and stopped the fight...

inthat gap kesav ran to front door and opened it and ran away...

savitha : bhaiya wat happened..front door was locked i came from the back door...

kesav sir hands was blood...

shaan : shit..he..was trying to misbehave with khanak...

savitha was shocked and stood in shock...

khanak : shantanu chocolate...

khanak : ahhh...

shaan has slapped her...


next update on monday...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

Aww lovely update niki...
Savitha is taking care of khanak...so sweet!!
Waiting for the next part



thanks a lot maneesha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudhareddy

Lovely update Niki

khanak innocently asked that natasha is in pooja room
Savitha is very sweet and she taking care of khanak khanak when hugs shaan shocked to see her in towel and changes his shirt because it smells of her😆
Waiting for Shaans reactions from Khanaks actions😆



thanks a lot sudha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kp_yasharan

thanks di i try to write but i have no time now day



thanks a lot khusbhoo..try to write whenever u have time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: poo_j

Lovely update di..😃 Khanak is really innocent when she took Shaan to pooja room and asked for Natasha..


Good..Savita is going to take care of Khanak..As he can't stay with her 24/7!!!

Oh..Ho..She wiped all the chocolate in her dress..😆 She too want to go out with him..😳 Good Savitha diverted her..

Oops..Shaan came when she was in towel..Poor guy totally got shocked!!! 😆 And she hugged him..😳☺️ Awww..He covered her shoulder..Very good!!!

All are scaring her with injection..😆

Shaan already fallen for her it seems..😳

Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update di..😃



thanks a lot poo...ha..he has fallen already
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

OMG khanak towel me hi 😳

poor shan how he gonna concentrate now
this is amazing
update soon :)



thanks a lot jaisy...hope u like further also...

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