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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: RB81

Loved the Khanak u described..And looks like their 1st meet is memorable for her by some means..Hhhmmm..Let me see..Off to read the next part..



Originally posted by: RB81

Hhhmmm..So their 1st encounter was not bad..But wat happened that made Shaan to behave like this??As per Madhvi's words looks like he has changed a lot..BTW wat happened to Ricky??Where is he now??
Glad that Khanak was able to escape from that psycho..
Awaiting the next part..



Thanks a lot Ramani... your questions are relevant and genuine ...as always 😊
What made Shaan to behave like that and even about Ricky... will be told in next few updates!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

yayyy back to back updates as u promised hoping for the update tonight also

ok their first meeting was not bad but it was not a proper meeting actually i mean kuch baat hi nahi hui
how rude of shan he doesnt care actually hain na
nikhill he is really obsessed with khanak but he forced her thats not right we get terrified with the people like this can understand khanak but she is strong enough to get over through this
i hv a question what happened to ricky? u didnt mention him in the previous updates he died with his parents or he is still alive?
plzzz update today also



I will try my best to update tonight as well :)))
Thanks for writing back...will tell about Ricky next !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Great to see you writing on the forum again Manita...Hope to catch-up with this one very soon 😊...



Will wait for that May 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Woaaahhh! Mani, *hugs*

I was unable to read your other tales, coz of lack of time! :( But I promise to cover all the parts and comment on them ASAP! :D And here, I found this! :D Read 2 parts, and girl! This is wonderful!

And you know how much I love your style of writing! Simple, yet so beautiful and sounds magical! :')

Okay! Now, to the story! Umm..only word I can think of right now, is.. simply fantabulous! I have never came across this kind of Shantanu in any tale, and honestly this is what I had expected from our 'real' shantanu, but somehow he wasnt THIS spoilt! :P And though he is way too unemotional and rude, I'm loving this hawty brat! ;) A kind of Shantanu, I always wanted to see..coz, something about the guy tells me, when he'll fall in love..he would love his girl like no other! And thats something interesting to watch out for!😳

And hey, A diff Maddy! ;) Ah! This is totally different! And I'm loving it! :D
But I wanna see Sunil pampering her as well! :D

Feel bad for Khanak! She has lost so much in life, and the description saying, how the room felt so empty and lonely just touched my heart! It is unimaginable to lose your family! To lose the people, you thought would remain with you as your support life-long! *Sigh*

Okay! No more ill treatments! Now, time for some verbal fights! and ofcourse my girl..winning the title of being the only soul 'unaffected by the brat'..even though, she actually is!😉

Lovely piece of writing! And honestly, I feel..this story has a real good future, if you'll consider continuing it beyond 10 parts! Coz, something inside me, warns me..that I'm gonna fall for these two real bad!😳

Glad to have you here once again Mani! *hugs*
I'll read the 3rd part and will get back, very soon! :D



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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
You updated again! :O

This is so awesome! :D

But sadly, if I sit here, then I'll day-dream about them in my seminar presentation 2mo! :P

Will read both the parts 2mo, and will get back to you! :D

Good night! :') *hugs*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
tch, u made me cry in this part

poor girl is going through so much of pain and had to listen insulting words from shaan

the girl who was brought up in a rich family and has never felt d need to depend on other but now she is living at d mercy of khandelwals and can imagine her state , how she must have felt hearing d words like - get out of my house

hmm... So that idiot ass - nikhil had created all this mis understanding and that stupid shaan beleived all that but never cared to ask once from her too

i want khanak to move out of his house asap and it seems their house is still their but just due to her safety madhavi brought her with them , but still she shuld move out and show him her worth ... He dont deserve her

lovely story
but isnt updates are shorter than ur standards ? :P

next part pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
nikhil😡😡😡
hate him lyk anything...how dare he is????
He has spoke all the shit about khanak...want to slap him hardly...
Loved the update...i felt very emotional while reading the update...tears rolled down my eyes while reading khanak's part...😭

waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
wow such a wonderful and fantabulous update
cant think of anything else
and I especially liked the doctor bit of dilation of capillaries
I am really addicted to the profession
I left MBBS midway after realising it is not for me...
but I love it whenever I read such things
Simi always used to incorporate such things in HAA
you are a doctor I think judging from the "hospital rounds"
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
now coming to the update
loved the fact that you dint show them falling for each other but instead you showed them being hurt because of their self-esteems and rational being which is very logical on the part of the writer
and loved Khanak..
I have always loved Khanak more than Shantanu in RBO as well as any fanfic
it is because of the gender
it is because of the fact that Khanak is someone one can easiy identify himself with
Shaan on the other hand is always like the hero of the story
I loved the presentation of her agony...brilliant writer you are
and waiting fopr your next part soon
and BTW updates are not short by any standards
your length of updates is very much reasonable
(saare readers mujhe joote mat marna.lol)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Thats so sick of that b*****d Nikhil..But y didnt Shaan try to talk abt that later to Khanak..Y this bitterness?? So somewhere this shows he really liked Khanak seeing her for the first time..
Awaiting the time for Shaan to know the real colours of Nikhil n apologise to Khanak for all his words to her..
Now wat is Khanak going to do??She is going to leave Khandelwal's house??Will Madhvi & Sunil allow that??
Awaiting the next part..

PS: Question regarding Shaan's behaviour got answered.. Awaiting answer regarding Ricky.. 😊
Edited by RB81 - 12 years ago

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