Woaaahhh! Mani, *hugs*
I was unable to read your other tales, coz of lack of time! :( But I promise to cover all the parts and comment on them ASAP! :D And here, I found this! :D Read 2 parts, and girl! This is wonderful!
And you know how much I love your style of writing! Simple, yet so beautiful and sounds magical! :')
Okay! Now, to the story! Umm..only word I can think of right now, is.. simply fantabulous! I have never came across this kind of Shantanu in any tale, and honestly this is what I had expected from our 'real' shantanu, but somehow he wasnt THIS spoilt! :P And though he is way too unemotional and rude, I'm loving this hawty brat! ;) A kind of Shantanu, I always wanted to see..coz, something about the guy tells me, when he'll fall in love..he would love his girl like no other! And thats something interesting to watch out for!😳
And hey, A diff Maddy! ;) Ah! This is totally different! And I'm loving it! :D
But I wanna see Sunil pampering her as well! :D
Feel bad for Khanak! She has lost so much in life, and the description saying, how the room felt so empty and lonely just touched my heart! It is unimaginable to lose your family! To lose the people, you thought would remain with you as your support life-long! *Sigh*
Okay! No more ill treatments! Now, time for some verbal fights! and ofcourse my girl..winning the title of being the only soul 'unaffected by the brat'..even though, she actually is!😉
Lovely piece of writing! And honestly, I feel..this story has a real good future, if you'll consider continuing it beyond 10 parts! Coz, something inside me, warns me..that I'm gonna fall for these two real bad!😳
Glad to have you here once again Mani! *hugs*
I'll read the 3rd part and will get back, very soon! :D