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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: DiehardYMfan

now coming to the update

loved the fact that you dint show them falling for each other but instead you showed them being hurt because of their self-esteems and rational being which is very logical on the part of the writer

and loved Khanak..

I have always loved Khanak more than Shantanu in RBO as well as any fanfic

it is because of the gender

it is because of the fact that Khanak is someone one can easiy identify himself with

Shaan on the other hand is always like the hero of the story

I loved the presentation of her agony...brilliant writer you are

and waiting fopr your next part soon

and BTW updates are not short by any standards

your length of updates is very much reasonable

(saare readers mujhe joote mat marna.lol)



then i think u havent seen d standard length of her updates :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

wow lovely update m feeling lke slapping nikhil...😡

deir parents think dey r nt made fr each other?????

oh god wats gonna happ update soon..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

wonderful update mani di!!!!!!!!!

og god dis nkhil n wish i cn strangle him.😡 hw cn he say all bulshit abt khanak n shan believed...n he even dint met khanak felt rejected...

really feeling bad fr khanak...😭 hw should hav atleast meet her n clarified...

n shez gonna leave khandelwal house...😲 hope madhavi n sunil stops her..

age kya hoga whn shaan will knw d truth waiting...

n thkns a ton fr quick update...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
OMG shaan how could you believe in nikhil's drama...This is not fair shaan...you should have asked khanak about it...and not knowing the truth you have insulted her...😭
I feel sorry for her...She has no parents now to support her and now this budthal is all after her and told her to get out of his house...
shaan😡nikhil...both of you are responsible for khanak's tears...
OMG cant wait for the next update...will khanak go away from khandelwal's house???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Awesomest update Manita 😊🤗
u made me cry 😭 poor girl is going through a lot first she lost her parent and now this to listen the taunt of being there
omgeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so what i thought was right shaan saw them when Nikhil pull khanak to that pillar and he took it wrong, Nikhil i hate him i want to straggler his neck 😡 Nikhil what all happen is coz of u 😡
ok coming to khanak poor girl when she saw her earrings i was like no khanak its ur dad'd last sign that u have and i 😭 she doesn't have any choice and then the way shaan talked to her was really hurtful, she was rich any thing she would keep her hands on she would get it, life is really cruel and unpredictable
shaan went to the birthday part but restless and khanak thought occupied his mind, yes shaan what u said wasn't right n the way u behavior with her was very bad
shaan thought why he has started to behave rude toward her and the flash back come his mind
the night at Sharma's house when he was a girl with Nikhil and thought may be they have some thing
first he thought the guy must misbehave but then felt he thought coz the girl didn't shout for help so they have something going on
shaan was restless after that he left after knowing it was khanak he recognize her dress and new madhvi has called him there to meet khanak
next day shaan called Nikhli and he talked all nonsense about khanak 😡😡 😡 how dare he said she was with her for past 2 years and that make shaan hate her and anger raised on him
how dare that Nikhil said she has many BF i wish shaan in future to make his state in the worst condition
poor Khanak, she hasn't any fault and got his stamp of having many BF and shaan i think should talk to her n not avoid her
he should has asked her to know that truth how can he trust that Nikhil so easily
khanak was rich then what happen to their business did Mitals do something to them
and what about khanak's bro Ricky where is he, now will khanak sell her earing, do any one will know about her this step i m so sad so her
omgeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so many question
hope will get answer in upcoming updates
will wait for the update eagerly
Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
right now i really think shan is not worth for khanak no matter how much he tries to be responsible and mature he just behaves opposite to that
he should try to contact with khanak and hv a talk about it and not blindly beleive in that b******* good for nothing nikhil
after all she is girl in a situation like this girls reputation matters the most boy kya hai c nikhil he said some nonsense about relationship betw his and khanak which is obviously not true but he is suffering nothing and khanak she has done nothing and poor girl still dont know about all this and she is paying for it for doing nothing
this update made me cry for khanak i know how she must be feeling man very very lonely bad and sad and shan's words were like breaking heart into several small pieces
he should feel like miserable of himself to think about khanak like that and to talk to her like that when he will get to know the truth
and i dont mind khanak leaving khandelwal house bcoz i m very angry with shan right now he must know not only but feel terrible to loose khanak bcoz of his stupidity and his senseless mind budthal
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Hey sorry I weren't able to reply to the third part but both updates were brilliant.

I feel terribly sorry for the situation khanak is in currently. The third part gave a wonderful insight to the relationship she had with her family and the fourth part is starting to give an understanding to why shaan is behaving the way he is...he has totally misunderstood and hopefully he will confront about it in the next coming updates. Again awesome updates and will be looking forward to the next one :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
got to read ur 2 updates.. Nikhil has had his revenge I guess @ Khanak.. and based on one situation he is angry with her.. idiot..
Khanak is moving out.. hope she is able to find a decent place.. and I'm not sure where is Ricky. waiting to read more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Superb yaar,
waiting for the next update... Pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
hi manitha..sorry for the delay comment...i read the last three updates..its lovely..when i read the third part it made me think that nikil should have said something to shaan...and i think shaan loves her from first...he too attracted to her when seeing her...he was intersted in knowing how she know his mom and dad... he liked her so only he called nikil if not he wont called him..i guess he too had seen her pic and he also liked her on seeing her pic and defiently his mom would have said many things about khanak...so shaan should have known everything...madhavi loves khanak a lot so in phone and everytime she should have talked about khanak...(my guess...as i wrote five stories..just a guess..i dont know wat u have in store.. anyways...)...i am really intersted to know wat happens now..its really intersting yaar... waiting for ur updates...
regards
nikita...

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