SOUND OF LIFE Ch28(end) pg 55 oct 23 - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
love the update Nikki
feeling bad for Khanak. shaan first felt bad for her n at the same moment angry and tortune her
he gave hard kiss n wanted to repeat last nite act
Poor girl hw she wil escape n hw she is gng to live with him for 1 mnth
waiting for next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor khank...Feeling bad for her...
Why shaan is behaving like this...
Hope she finds some way to escape from him...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys...all r feeling bad for khanak..from child shaan is egoistic and he is very possesive...he misunderstands that khanak is loving vidhruvan and in the final year party she scolded him and she slapped him...and that made his ego go high and and she is not loving him..everything made his anger rise and he used it at the right timing...her dad and bro accident happen accidentally ...
this story is inspired from a tamil novel...still 2 to 3 updates it will be like this..
i thought this type of will be different..u guys havent read like this..so i thought of writing this down...
if u guys dont like it..i will quit this ff...i really want ur likings..ur comments...those r important for me...if u guys dont like it ..i will stop writing this ff..and will think of new idea and will write another ff...
watever u guys say i will do...
Edited by niki_rbo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey relax yaar we toally understand shan's behaviour and nature in this but that doesnt mean that we dont like ur this ff like u said its new for us and the power of ur writing is so much that we r supposed to hate shan and sympathy khanak the story so far tells us that and we r just stating our views or what we feel thats it

plzzz dont take it in a wrong way and dont u dare discontinue this ff continue soon and waiting for next part :)
heer_85 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nikki the story is going very well n its interesting please don't think to discontinue it
we loved the way u taking this ff
yeah we felt bad for Khanak but it does't mean we hate shaan, the situation and misunderstanding make us think why he behave like that with Khanak
we know how sturbone he is and don't like to be insalted
waiting for next part update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
no babe exactly like jalis urs writing is sooo good that it makes us want to hate shaan..
nd dont u dare finish this ff because we knkw theres so many surprises in this story and this ff's is the one thats really making me glue to it because it has soo many twists...
p.s.so I didnt mean to offend u with my comment xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey niki..loved ur ff..its different from what we read usually..pls continue..
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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful update niki...khanak thinking wht will her parents think abt dis...dey even dnt knw where is she...😭😭

soo she came to dinning table to eat...n shaan started kissing her forcefully...

nw she dnt hav any means to escape...hope deir misunderstanding will be cleared soon...

PS.uff y u think no body is liking dis dis is comp diff fm wht we hav read soom far...so chill n keep writing😃😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi niki di i m silent reader but please dont disconect this FF please update soon

love u😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey friends...i was little scared...i thought u guys not liking the story..so only yaar...i am writing story only for u guys..u guys should like it..thats my aim and that feels me very happy..i am making some one happy with my story...so only yaar...now i will defiently complete this ff...
sorry guys for last two updates i was not able to comment individually...
thanks a lot for hitting like button and those who commented thanks a ton for expressing ur opinions...i am really happy u guys r really liking this story...

ch : 13

shaan kissed her hardly...

with a force khanak pushed him away...shaan was standing little away...

shaan smiled at her...khanak glared at him in anger...

she ran into her room...closed the door and she lyed on the bed and

she started to cry...tears rolling down from her cheeks..it did not stop...

khanak : oh god wat am i going to do...please save me from here...

she was crying for a minute r so...she wiped her tears...

no..i wont cry...i want to escape from here...think..think...watch out..

so that i can escape from this place...uhh...how they r getting food here...

to get the ingrediants they have to go out na...

she stood up walked to washroom she washed her face...

she came out of the room...she saw shaan was sitting in the hall reading a book...

shaan raised his head from book and saw her..they both looked at eachother...

she turned her head and she walked towards the kitchen...

she started to open each and every cubboard...

she saw there was plenty of ingrediants r there...there is no need to go

out for anything...suddenly she felt some one is behind here...

within a fraction of seconds she was hugged by shaan from back...

shaan :wat wifey..wat r u searching...

his chin is resting on her shoulder..his hands on her waist...he was nuzzling her neck...

khanak :leave me...(she tried to escape but she cannot)

shaan :i will help u..tell me wat do u want...

khanak : u will do anything...pushing his hands which was crawling

upwards from her waist ...

shaan :umm ...i will...(kissed her neck)

khanak :please tie ur dogs...r put them in a room...

shaan laughed heartly while still hugging...

shaan :no...that one is not allowed...kissed her cheeks...

khanak tried to move but she cannot...

shaan : shall we go for a walk...

khanak thought walk...ha...so that i can find a way out...

khanak : ummm..ok...

shaan left her and he looked at her in ...and he smiled at her...

shaan :come lets go...shaan grabbed her hand

khanak :leave my hand..i am coming na...

shaan did not listen to it...he was holding her hands and he was walking

towards the entrance...when they reached the door...khanak stopped walking..

shaan : wat happened...(looking at her)

khanak :uhh...dogs...

shaan smiled at her...on seeing his smile khanaks heart pained..his heart

started to say how can he do this...it felt pain...

shaan : i am with u come...

he started to walk along with her...there was no dogs came...

khanak thought may be dogs r in the room...so morning they will not allow out..

her heart became little happy...so this is the time i have to escape from here...

khanak with a force she withdrawed his hands and she started to run...

she has run 5 steps r show...

shaan :sweety...sweety (with a smile)

khanak turned around and with a smile she said i am not sweety u idiot...

she showed her tongue to him and she has turned her head to run...

she was stopped ...oh no how come this..there was a dog standing...

oh no this dog name is sweety...damn...it was showing its teeth with terror...

she returned back to him in horror...shaan was laughing at her...

that dog came to shaan...shaan gently touched its head ..it was obeying his orders..

shaan :oh sweet darling...

shaan looked at khanak who was breathing heavily...

shaan : shall we go for a walk...

khanak was standing there itself...

shaan : sweety...

khanak came and stand besides shaan and she was afraid...

shaan slowly put his left hand around her and it rested on her waist...

and he was holding her sideways..and it was sideways hugs...

khanak :leave me...

shaan :sweety...

that sweety was standing near her...so she cannot do anything...

khanak thought that was better he holded my hand..now shit...its all my fault...

i have to be carefull...i should think a lot before doing anything...

khanak saw many trees and there was lot of roses...

she felt happy on seeing beautifull different roses...

that sweety dog went away...they were standing in garden were full of roses r there..

shaan left her..khanak went an d touched each and every roses...

it was very beautifull...she loved the place..she loves roses..from childhood

she keeps roses in her hair...she loves to keep...

she went and looked at each and every roses...all r so beautifull...

she was happy on looking at the roses...

shaan looked at her...his heart felt happy on seeing her happy face...

khanak :ahhh...she was holding one of her leg...

shaan went near her quickly...with tensed face...

shaan :khanak wat happened...

khanak :my leg...

shaan holded her and he made her sit in the ground near a tree...

khanak : thorn pricked...tears formed in her eyes...

shaan : cont u be carefull...

shaan sat besides her leg...he slowly took her leg and placed it in his lap...

khanak : no ..i will take...

shaan did not listen to that..he carefully looked the thorn...

khanak felt uneasy..her heart beated fastly...

shaan slowly removed the thorn...

shaan : took it..(with a smile)

khanak :u took it...she looked her toes...her saree little bit raised...

shaan saw her ...but she was busy in seeing her toes...

khanak :thanks shantanu..(raised her head and saw shaan)

khanak quickly adjusted her saree down...

she was about to get up...shaan pulled her with a force now shaan was above her...

khanak : hey u..leave me..wat r u doing..

shaan : u owe me one...holding her hand tightly...not allowing her to escape...

khanak :wat...shocked...she tried to move...but shaan removed her saree...

khanak :leave me ...she tried to fight him with all her effort...

shaan :dont fight wifey...i am ur hubby...

khanak : no..i am not ur wife..leave me...uhhh...

she tried to escape but shaan was very furious and he did all things he wanted

to do to her..she fighted but shaan was strong enough...

shaan made her as his ..




hey friends please leave ur opinion when u get time...when i update next one i will pm
u guys..once again thanks to all of u guys...and to silent readers also..thanks guys...

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