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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello😊
Thank you so much to Khushbu, heer, aasma, diyak, saranya, jaisy, sneha, rida, maneesha, mounika for liking and commenting😊
@Khushbu- welcome for the forums😊 Sorry im in a hurry!!
@Rida- nice to see you back😊 it's been over a week, everything fine??
@all- Thank you so much, im honored!!! And you don't have to thank me for choosing for Maldives, its really an awesome place!!! i love it too!! Please ignore if i make any mistakes😊

Part 48

Khanak, had to go to her apartment, where Dhruv and DD are staying, to get her clothes, as she wanted of her clothes. Aayush was going with her. Shaan had to take care of her visa, the name had to be changed, from Khanak Mishra to Khanak Shaantanu Khandelwal. Since Khandelwal's are known to everyone, she need not had to go for that, she Thanked God for that!! Shaan had laughed at her!! She never fails to amuse him!!

She's ringing the bell of her apartment, she's excited, Aayush is with her, he's happy too!! Shaan had dropped both of them, and he had promised to pick both of them after his work, actually her work!!

The door opens, Dhruv opens it, he's happy to see her too, and his face was somber when he had opened it, but after seeing her, his face had brimmed with a huge smile…

Dhruv: Hey Mrs. Khandelwal!!!

Khanak: Hey!! (both of them hug)

Aayush pulls on the pant of Dhruv, to indicate even he's present. Dhruv looks at him and picks him up and greets him with a peck on his cheek!! Both them move in, DD is very much happy to see her, she gets a warm hug from him!!

Khanak: How are you doing??

Lady: Not well!! (from Khanak's back) Khanak is confused, she turns around to see who it is, she's shocked, its Dhruv's mom!! She's not sure whether, she should be happy, but she doesn't see his mom smiling, she's serious, even DD's and Dhruv's expression changes to serious!! She senses that everything is not good, she kneels down to Aayush…

Khanak: Aayush aap apne friends se mil kar aao, we'll pack later, ok??

Aayush: ok!! (smiles) and runs out to see his friends….. Khanak is not sure, now what was the problem???

Khanak: Hello aunty!! (smiles)

Dhruv's mom: Hello Khanak!! Its been a long time!! How are you doing?? Oh yes, I heard you are married, how's it going???

Khanak: Great aunty!! Thanks a lot…

Dhruv's mom: So what's your husband name?? and yes I heard even he's a pediatrician too right??

Khanak: yes!! His name is..(not allowed to speak)

Dhruv's mom: u know what, forget it, im not interested!!

Dhruv: Mom!!! (he just can't take it)

Dhruv's mom: oh I see that, you haven't left her, quit Dhruv!! Remove Khanak out of your life!!

DD: will you just shut up!! (fuming)

Dhruv's mom: oh please, don't even try to speak to me!! (nasty)

Khanak is shocked to hear that, this family is been fighting for her!! She's the reason of the break-up of the family, she remembers the same family, enjoying their holidays and moving out together and having fun together, but why everything had changed?? why??

Khanak: aunty please calm down!! Dhruv, what's wrong??

Dhruv: Khanak, just don't listen to my mom, (controls his anger, tries to be cheerful) you have come here first time after your marriage, sit na Khanak!!

DD: haan Khanak, sit!!

Khanak: Dhruv, will you tell me, what's going on???

Dhruv's mom: oh I'll tell you!! I think you've forgottem your promise Khanak!!

Khanak: promise??

Dhruv's mom: aahh nothing more could have expected from you!! Ok Im here to take Dhruv to meet some girls, u know for marriage!!

Khanak is relieved, her face breaks into smile…

Khanak: oh that's nice!! (smiles)

Dhruv's mom: but he's refusing!!

Dhruv: Mom, please I've told you hundred times, that I don't want to marry now!! (Fierce)

Khanak: but why??

Dhruv: Khanak, please!!

Dhruv's mom: oh please Khanak, don't act like you don't know anything!!

Dhruv: Mom please it has not got a thing to do with Khanak!! Its my decision and its my life!!

DD just watches his son, he knew this was coming early, on a serious note, Dhruv had not moved on, though he had not fallen in love with Khanak, its just he has not got over by this, that his mom had changed a lot!! And Khanak had left him, he was not the one to receive refusal from anyone, but he had put a brave face, telling that he was fine, and he had moved on!! Which he had not….

Khanak: Dhruv!!

Dhruv: Khanak, you don't have to worry, Im not denying the whole marriage thing, im just telling that now im not ready!!

Dhruv's mom: Oh please Dhruv, do saal pehle, u were ready to marry Khanak!! But now…..

Khanak is devasted, she's shattered…. But still she hold her grounds!!

Shaan and Aayush walks in, both are happy, Dhruv and DD smiles too, Khanak tries to get back to normal..

Shaan: Hey!! Is everything alright?? Aap log chup kyun ho??

Aayush: Mom, ne shaayad, sabko finger on the lips kaha hai!! (jokes)

Shaan chuckles, Dhruv also tries to laugh, DD too, Khanak brings out a smile….

Shaan sees Dhruv's mom, but he doesn't know her, she looks at Khanak, she covers her face with a smile..

Dhruv: umm… Shaan!! This is my mom!!

Shaan: Nice to meet you!! (Now Shaan gets to know that something was not right, he tries to examine Khanak's face, since she's scooling it with a smile, he can't judge)

Dhruv's mom: me too, Mr???

Shaan: im Shantanu Khandelwal!! (smiles)

Dhruv's mom: nice!! I had seen you yesterday in the restaurant, u were with Khanak and Aayush!!

Shaan: u did!! U could have joined us….

Dhruv's mom: that's not a problem!! I was with my friends…

Shaan nods….

Shaan: Khanak, I think hume chalna chaiyiye, if your finished can we leave???

Khanak: ya!! Im done!!

Shaan: where's the bag??

Khanak: bag?? I think I should shop!!

Shaan: ok!! As you wish!!

They both take leave with Aayush, Khanak had managed a faint bye for Dhruv, but she couldn't look at him….. Shaan hadasked her whether she was ok or not, Khanak had responded with she's fine!!

After that, they had gone to shopping, Khanak had no mind for that, Aayush had done all the choosing with Shaan!!

In the night, Khanak had drained, her face had paled, Shaan thinks may be she's tired, yes she was tired physically and emotionally!!! Shaan allows her to sleep, but kisses a good night on her lips, he had controlled himself, he had cuddled her to him, and made her sleep in his arms!!!

Next day had been fleed, they did the remaining packing, she had got back her visa, Shaan was tormenting her every next second, when she's interestingly reading about the environment of Maldives, he had hugged her from back, and kept on kissing her on her neck and on cheeks, she had not forgotten the whole incident, but for time being its pushed away from her memory…..

Khanak: Shaan!! Please let me concentrate!! (breathless)

Shaan: no ways Khanak!! Last night I didn't get what I wanted, so why not now!!!

He had made her fall on the bed, he on top of her and kisses her fiercely!! She too can't herself, her turmoil, come back, Shaan had every right to know what had happened!! But she herself didn't know, why she had been unable to share it with him!!

They were disturbed by the knock on the door, Shaan groans, he's nuzzling her neck, Khanak opens her eyes, both of them get up reluctantly!!

Shaan: I can't wait to get away!!

Khanak had blushed at the mention!! Their flight had been on the same evening and they would be reaching by night…

While leaving she had kissed Aayush on his forehead, and had made rules for him, he agrees to everything!! And finally they had bid bye for the family!!!

They had landed on Male international airport, on Maldives. Khanak's eyes had lit up finally!! She had gushed, about how excited she's to Shaan!! Shaan had held her!!

Hotel staff had been come to receive them, they had a choice of taking, speed boat for 60min ride or a sea plane for a 20min ride!! Since it had been a late evening, they had to take sea plane!! They had now been taken to an island, where the resort was present!! Its hembadhu island!!!

Maldives is an island, in Indian Ocean!!! Maldive differ in half-an-hour from India's timezone!!

Khanak was really excited to see the water villa!! She had squealed in joy and hugged Shaan, very tightly!! They had been left alone

Khanak: Thanks for this!!!

Shaan: sirf thanks se nahi chalega!!! He pulls her into a smooch, she responds to it!!!


http://www.overwaterworld.com/Resorts/Maldives/vivanta-by-taj-coral-reef-maldives.html
This link gives the photo of resort, do watch!!!
Sorry, this is needed in the story, please comment😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dhruvs mom is so rude and arrogant i dont like her at all and she was present on the restaurant ok toh koi tension wali baat nahi
shan only kissed her gud night that was so sweet of him and next morning he cant control himself and wants what he wants this shan is sooo sooo ... :)
thank god they reached maldives ab toh romance hi romance
and yes she should tell about what happened on apartment he had told her about kiya nothing tried to hide from her now its her time she should share this to him will wait for it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb twist in the story...so dhruv's mom is the lady who starred shanak in restaurent...
wohooo they are in maldives...now am super duper more excited than khanak as if am the one wid him...😆

waiting for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update
em as always loving the shanak moments
the love romance masti
the way he torments her is shanaklicious
i was really upset after reading dhruv's mom behavior but all the shanak moments were super fun to read
but i really wish dhruv moves on
lukin fwd to shanklicious moments in maldives
update soon

PS: everything is superb ... its juz that em traveling these days and can log in from mobile abd em not so used ti it so commenting is a bit difficult.. thx for ur concern :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it babe ive just been really busy past these days but dont worried I always try to read amd comment..xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update
Dhruv's mom entry 😡 and she started to speak rudely to Khanak and blamed her for what Happen. she spoiled Khanak's mood and shaan felt something bothering Khanak
kya baat hai Shaan u let Khanak sleep but never miss to give her a kiss 😉
wow!!!!!!! thy r in Maldive now, loved her romantic moment 😊
waiting for more to come
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome chandu!!!!!!!!!
aghhh i dint lke dhruv's mom at all...😡😡hope khanak share dis wid shaan soon...
oh soo mdey r off to maldieves...😃😃
nw wats gonna happ in deir HM...😳😳
waiting fr nxt...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello😊
Thanks to maneesha, jaisy, shubhadarane, virika01, khushbu, heer, aasma, neethurose, diyak, rida, sneha for liking and commenting😃 Thank you so much..
Sorry guys i was not able to complete, since i know that you all will be waiting for this one, im updating, im sorry for the chotu part, i promise a longer one on monday!!

Part 49

The villa is grand, its quite like a home, one room, a living hall, with an outside pool, besides pool there is a semicircled sofa. The room has a king size bed, a LED TV, with bathroom.

They are in living hall, she's wearing a full shirt on her skinny jeans, he too is wearing a jeans and a tee. They are clinged to each other, he's kissing all over her face, her body is arched, giving him access to her neck, her shirt which was tucked into her jeans, is not anymore, he had pulled it out, his hands on her bare waiste, her hands are holding his fistful of his hair…

They would have continued if not for the call, Shaan swears under his breath severely…

Shaan: what the heck!! i had just called Aayush telling that we have reached safely!! Who is it now???

Khanak giggles, he reluctantly receives, its from the staff, they wanted to know whether they'll be having dinner in their room or will they be having it in restaurant of the resort, Shaan excuses,

Shaan: (to Khanak) do you want to go out?? Or u want to have dinner here??

Khanak: (all perked up) We'll go out!!!

Shaan: sure???

Khanak: please please please…… (begs)

Shaan: ok!! (into the phone) we'll come over!! Cuts the call.

Khanak: ok then I'll shower and come (turns around to go to the stairs, as the bedroom was in the first floor)

Shaan: wait!! (she turns around suspiciously) even I'll come…

Khanak: (knows what he means, before she could realize he had moved towards her) No Shaan!!

Shaan: what no?? yesterday nite you didn't let me have it my way, so that's a punishment for you!!

She's remembered about her yesterday's incident, she's silent, Shaan takes the advantage and carries her in his arms to the bedroom, she's horrified, when he does that, she starts flailing her legs…

Khanak: Shaan please!! I promise today's night, will be yours, but not now….

Shaan: Sorry, now you get to see my cruel way!!

She realizes that they are in the bedroom, he makes her stand, on's the shower, in no time, they get drenched, her shirt sticking to her body, her hairs sticking to her face, making her look irresistible!!!

He too drenched, both of them are breathing audibly, he pulls her to his form, kisses her on her lips!! A deep passionate one, meanwhile he shuts the door of bathroom!!!

They enter the restaurant has a couple, you could tell its their first date, alone!!! Resturant is filled with couples, as its one of the famous resort for honeymoon…..

She's looking stunning in her blue gown, he looks dashing in his white shirt, which is half tucked in, they take their seats, it's a corner table, she's holding his hand, he pulls out a chair for her, she smiles and acknowledges it. He sits opposite to her….

Alcohols are usually banned in the city, but resort people they do sell it, Khanak disagrees the idea of him getting drunked, he promises to have only one martini, she shakes her head in disbelief, he smiles, he agrees to her finally…..She smiles gloriously at him, waiter is waiting….

Khanak: (to the waiter) can we have the special meal of Maldives?? I mean do you have it here???

Waiter: oh yes mam, so two meals??

Shaan: no only one!! We'll be sharing!!

Waiter: so its only one meal???

Shaan and Khanak nods in unison, waiter is gone, Khanak gets to look out of the restaurant, its beach outside, she looks at beach, and smiles,Shaan on other hand looking at her, he'll be knowing her completely now, he's excited to, his right hand gets hold of her left hand, Khanak looks at him and smiles….

Khanak: its so good!!! (talking about the resort)

Shaan: I agree!! (not at all about resort)

Khanak blushes, and looks away… Shaan smiles and slowly places a kiss on her left hand….

Khanak: Shaan!!! (tugs her hand)

Shaan: what??? U remember we are on our honeymoon, so u can't resist me!!!

Waiter comes with the meal, Khanak tugs her hand, he holds it more firmly….

Khanak is eager to know about everything about the city…Waiter places the dish on the table, Khanak asks the name of each and every dish, since it's a meal…

Waiter: (he explains) masroshi (pastries), mas riha(fish curry), papadhu (papad), grilled fish, rice and sweet black tea!!!

Waiter leaves, food is hot….

Khanak: Shaan don't you want to eat???

Shaan: oh yes im hungry!! And yes you'll have to feed me!!!

Khanak opens her eyes wide open, but she knows that if she disagrees he won't listen, she serves the rice on the plate, her left hand is in hold of his two hands, she mixes the rice with fish curry, and she feeds him, since it was hot, she had made it to cool first and fed him, he takes it, chewes on it, Khanak waits patiently, his ears and nose get redder, he yells telling the food is spicy!!! Bowing out fiercely, her left hand is free now, she gives him water, he drinks the whole of it…

Khanak: are you fine now??? Shaan shakes his head… She feeds him the pastry, he cools down…she's relieved too….

But she bursts out of laughing, she didn't wanted to laugh, she being herself, starts laughing hardly, Shaan just stares her, he is incredulous….

Shaan: hogaya!!

Khanak: im sorry!!(still laughing)

Please comment😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update Chandu 😊
Shaan never be late when it comes to Khanak but yeh kya kabab meh hadhi 😡 poor shaan kitna wait kare 🤣 koi baat nahi abto shower bhi saath meh hogaya 😉☺️
They had dinner and first Khanak feed him, food was spicy 😆
waiting for Monday, HM to be continue

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update chandu...
lol shaans nose and ears are reddened on eating spicy food...🤣
they had a combined shower.🤢...honeymoon track is interesting😉

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