RAABTA-Part 96 on page 148 on 9/3 - Page 48

wonderful update...reception was awesome...😳😳

lolzzz kiya left whn shaan said no to her..😆😆

woww loved d shanak dancr n song was lke cheery on d top...😃 ohhh new room fr aayush...everything of ben10😆😆awee he soo caring ramu will be sleeping wid him...n shanak night out...cant wait...😳😳

no need too apologize...😡😡 we understang...nxt part soon...😉

Originally posted by: ktym

Aww shaan is so sweet...loved the room which he had decorated for his son...

Offo aayush granted permission to take khanak out...

wow waiting for the shanaklious update...😊

Originally posted by: heer_85

Loved the updaye Chandu
wow!!!!! shanak had a slow dance and Kiya left after Shaan ignorenes loved shaan reply to Kiya. " No "
so Shaan's surprise was a separate room for his Son
loved it
he asked permission to Aayush so he can take Khanak for a night out wow!!! love this part it was awesome
waiting for next part eagerly

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

OMG i m suprised ke khanak ne shan ke liye song dedicate kiya how lovely i love the song but can u tell me which movie is from?

aayush's room very right shan u did very correct and how caring that he had kept his room close to their room thats great and it how sweetly he asked aayush to take khanak with him i loved it

and kiya i was surprised bcoz what was kiya doing there and why she was asking him for a minute but thank god shan said no sternly

waiting for next very excited to know where shan is taking her :)))

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Wonderful !!!

I just love this Track ...This version of Raabta is sooo Good yaar ...LOved the way u implimented it on the Update ,,,,,,,,,Th edance was Just Super awesome :)) Surreal

KIyaa ...grrr why she is here now :( Such a mean girl yaar She still wanted to talk to Shaan :( I So want Shaan to tell khanak About this Kiya otherwise she will try to create missunderstanding in Future. Shaan Surprise was Wonderful LOved the way he decorated room & Ask harilal to Sleep next to his son :) So sweet ...Awesome !!!

Waiting for next part ...This is going great Please Dont feel sad ...U are awesome !!!

Continue Soon

Originally posted by: aasma1

loved the update babes, love shaan and khanak loved how shaan had asked ayush for permission to take khanak love it...
xxx

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

wonderful update...reception was awesome...😳😳

lolzzz kiya left whn shaan said no to her..😆😆

woww loved d shanak dancr n song was lke cheery on d top...😃 ohhh new room fr aayush...everything of ben10😆😆awee he soo caring ramu will be sleeping wid him...n shanak night out...cant wait...😳😳

no need too apologize...😡😡 we understang...nxt part soon...😉

Originally posted by: niki_rbo

hey doc update was lovely..i really loved it ...the way shaan ignores kiya..the dance...and the room he decorated for their son everything nice yaar...its really nice...

Part 45

While going in the car, Shaan is driving, Khanak is next to him….

Khanak: where are we going???

Shaan: it's a surprise!!

Khanak: surprise???

Shaan: just wait Mrs. Khandelwal!! (winks at her)

Khanak just looks out of the window, car comes to a halt, Khanak looks out, it's a huge apartment, Khanak wonders, Shaan moves to her side and opens the door for her, Khanak wants to know where they are?? She comes out of the car holding his hand, but before she could ask him,

Shaan: nahi abhi kuch mat poochna!! (he shuts her up, holds her hand and escorts her to the elevator, they are silnet all the way, Khanak tries to yank her hand free, but Shaan's grip is tight)

They come to a halt, she can see that it's the only flat on the floor, she's still wondering, Shaan opens the door with the key, but he has not left her hand, he enters with her, he puts on the light, its an elegant and posh, its not filled with furniture, but its gorgeous!!! It has an open kitchen, though its not filled with many stuffs, everywhere its clean, its like someone was living there!!!

Shaan has released her hand long back, she's taking in everything, Shaan engulfes her from back….

Shaan: toh kaisa laga mera surprise!!!!

Khanak: Shaan yeh ghar…… don't tell me ki hum yah ape shift ho rahe hain, aise kaise ho saktha hain Shaan (she frees herself from him, stands in front of him) come on tune abhi abhi Aayush ko naya room diya hain, and I want to stay with our family u know mom, dad, bhaiyya, bhabhi, dadi…….

Shaan: Khanak chill!!!! And he starts laughing at her, holding his stomach, Khanak feels like punching him…..

Khanak: why are you laughing?????

Shaan: aur nahi toh kya khanak!!!kabhi kabhi mujhe poora bholne ka mauka de diya karo…. (controlling his laughter, Khanak pouts at him)

Shaan: arrey Khanak, yeh voh ghar hain (wraps himself around her) jaha main padaayi karna aatha, before I decided to go London, I was staying here, maine apne college ki studies yah ape kiya tha, Dad ne yeh flat mere liye liya tha, so that I won't be disturbed…..

Khanak: r u serious?? U were staying away from your family???

Shaan: yes!! I had to!!! Bhaiyya the mom dad ke saath, so I need not worry about that, I wasn't like the teenger boys would be, I mean tab I didn't have any passion to make girlfriends nor bikes nor cars!!!

Khanak is hearing to him, her hands rested on his hands, which is placed on her stomach…..

Shaan: Sirf Samar hi mera friend tha, we use to hang out in this house but most of the times it would be for studying, he was like your friends, he wanted to enjoy the parties, he has been a good friend to me!!! Pata hain Khanak, tum pehli ho jiske saath, I can be myself, I don't have to be thinking that whether you'll be liking about it or not!! Khanak will you promise to be my friend for the whole of my life???

Khanak knows what he's trying to tell her, she just want to hug him tightly and wants to promise him that she would never leave his side…..

Khanak: friend??? Mujhe laga main tumhare liye special hoon, aur aap mujhe sirf dost banana chahthe hain?? (pouts sweetly) Shaan smiles at his sweet wife…..

Shaan: tum mere liye bahut special ho!!!! (hugs her even tight, even she returns the gesture)

Shaan: arrey main tumhe important dikhana hi bhul gaya!! Chalo…. Pulls her to a room…..

Switches on the light, she's surprised to see the room, the bed is decorated with roses, she blushes seeing the bed….

Shaan: toh tum ready ho!!!

In a swift he brings her in front of him, crushes her to him, his right hand is roving at her back, he slowly releases the zip at her back, making her gasp, as she found his hand on her bare back, before she could realize, he had picked her up and had placed her on the bed, his coat is off, his shirts button half undone, he hovers over her, places a soft kiss on her neck, she mouns and wraps her arms around him, he pulls her dress away from her shoulder, placing soft kisses…..

Khanak unbuttons his shirt, unable to hold themselves for more longer, both of them kisses eachother fiercely, which they had held from morning, they get rid off their clothes, they make love to each other, in between talking sweet endures to each other, holding each other close, teasing, laughing mixes with groans, he had made her to grab him, as he had teased her by touching, she had kissed him,when he had least accepted that she'll do something like that, when he couldn't control himself he had to surrender, and had taken her to a fantastic land, which is just their's own!!

Morning light had peeked through the window, Khanak is still sleeping, just a blanket covered her, Shaan is awake, he's sitting next to her and looking at her, he bends down and kisses her on her cheeks, slowly lies next to her…. She murmurs in her sleep…..

Khanak: Shaan please!!! I want to sleep!!!

Shaan: haan toh so jao na!! maine kya kiya?? (slowly his hands goes around her belly and pulls herself more close, his face resting on hers)

Khanak first blinks, and opens her eyes slowly, turns herself towards him, his arms still wrapped around her, she looks at him with a weird look…..

Shaan: Khanak, why r u looking at me like that???

Khanak just stare him, cuddling herself to him, her hairs all messed up!!!

Khanak: time kya hain??? (hoarse)

Shaan: time???mujhe laga u'll wish me and I'll be getting a morning kiss…..

Khanak: mujhe tumse kuch poochna tha???

Shaan: kya??

Khanak: u said u didn't have any girlfriends, toh phir tum yeh sab kaise pata hain??? I mean the requirements I'll be needing, etc….. u know…

Shaan: voh…actually main…. Dad aur bhaiyya se seekha!!!

Khanak: not bad Shaantanu Khnadelwal, im impressed!!!!

Shaan uses the opportunity and moves closer to her, he's about to kiss her, but…………….

Khanak: time???

Shaan: Khanak!!! (wines) ok its (checks his mobile, which he had placed near the pillow) near to 8!!!

Khanak: haan toh phone deejiye!!! (demands) He agress and gives it to her, she looks at it more fascinatingly, and starts to punch some keys….

Shaan: (pulls her closer) is the phone more fascinating than me??? (looking at her deeply)

Khanak: yes!!!! I mean no!! but my son is more adorable than you are!!! (she gets on the call)

Khanak: Hello Aayush!!! Aap ready hogaye???

Aayush: (squeals in joy) Mom!!! Haan main ready hogaya hun!! Pata hain aaj Khushboo aunty ne mujhe ready kiya hain!!!

Khanak: not bad Aayush (gets up, Shaan also gets up, both of them lean on head rest) did you sleep well?? Last night???

Aayush: yes mom!! Aur papa kaha hain?? Mom aapko mera promise yaad hain na???

Khanak: aapke papa yahi hain!! Aur haan promise yaad hain!!! Yeh lo apne papa se baat karlo!! (places the phone onto his ear)

Shaan: hey champ!!!

Aayush: hello!! Papa aapko aaj mujhe lunch ke liye bahar le jaana padega….

Shaan: yes boss!! Aapke mom ko sath lekar ya phir sirf hum dono!!!

Aayush: (giggles at that) Mom ko bhi saath leke chalthe hain!!!

Shaan: ok!! As you wish!!! (Khanak tells Shaan to ask Aayush, whether he had breakfast or not??)

Shaan: Aayush aapki mom pooch rahi hain, ki aapne breakfast kaya hain ki nahi???

Aayush: haan!! Dadi ne khilaya!!!

The talk goes on, Khanak snatches the mobile from him, as he had started to tease her with Aayush, the fight goes on, he snatches the mobile from her, and enjoys teasing her with Aayush, Aayush had to run to the school, so he offs the phone…..

Khanak is angry at him, he smiles and keeps the phone aside,

Shaan: kya hua Khanak???

Khanak glares at him and she just sits there…..

Shaan: naaraz ho?? Aur mujhe pata hain tumhara gussa kaise utara jaatha hain…..

He lies down and pulls her on top of him, she finally surrenders herself to the man of her life………