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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it babe cantr wait to read more loool xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😃
From tomorrow onwards clg is starting, im excited for my new year, new topics, new cases, lots to see and learn!!!!! but don't worry updates will be regular, as this year is not that crucial, we'll be starting our year seriously after 3months😆 now we r filled with fests!!!!
First of all, thanks a ton to neethurose, aasma, saranya, maneesha, mounika, diyak, heer, jaisy, rida, Sneha, Pranjal, niki, thank you so much for commenting and liking😃
wish me good luck for my new year!! and yes even for my Shanak!!

Part 39

Shaan had a blast last night, he had enjoyed it to the core, but yes in the middle it was disturbed by Kiya, but as usually he had not cared, he had just blowed of the incident from his mind, but he had made a mental note to ask Samar about Kiya.

He's now laying on his bed, seeing the empty side of his bed, which won't be remaining empty after tonight'.. That thought made him broadly smile' He sleeps back on his back. From next day onwards his life would be filled with her, only her'..and yes Aayush, his new son!!!!!

He's disturbed by the knock on the door, he wonders who's it, at an early hour of moerning, he gets up reluctantly, swearing under his breath, he opens the door, shocked to see his mother'

Shaan: Mom!!!! (sounding sleepy though he was wide awake)

Madhvi: Good morning beta, get ready and come downstairs, wear something easy!!! (brightly smiling)

Shaan: why???

Madhvi: Haldi beta iss liye!!

Shaan: itni jaldi???

Madhvi: haan voh Khanak, ke liye haldi bejani hain naa!!

Shaan has no idea about it, he gives an expression like explain????

Madhvi: arrey beta, jo haldi tumhe lagegi, ussi haldi Khanak ko lagana hain!! Abb hogaya tumhara, abb jaldi karo!!!!

Shaan smiles, Madhvi leaves, Shaan gets ready for his haldi, he's now seated, he's covered by ladies, he's visibly embarrassed!!! His mom comes first, he smiles shyly , she applies haldi first on his legs, then on his hands and then on his face, at first he makes a face, but after he enjoys it, whole Khandelwal clan had enjoyed, Khushboo and Akshay playfully had put haldi on his nose, he had grinned at them!!!!

On te other side, Khanak was ready for her haldi, but Aayush is still sleeping, he had slept late yesterday, but he had also wanted to attend the haldi, but Khanak didn't wanted to wake him up, meanwhile, mish comes to her'.

Misha: arrey chalo na Khanak!!!

Khanak: voh Aayush!! (points to Aayush)

Misha: kyun?? Abhi tak nahi utha?? Toh uttadena!!! Shagun ki haldi bhi aagayi hain!!!

Khanak: haan!! Lekin'..

Misha: koi problem nahi, main use le leti hun!! (as she knows her friend very well, she carries Aayush in her arms) abb chalein????

Khanak smiles and both moves out, her was first applied by DD, in her father's place, after applying haldi, he had pecked her on her forehead fondly!!! After that Raj's parents, then her friends, first foremost Dhruv, he applies it all over her face, Khanak yells at him, all others laugh!! Next is Raj, then Misha and Nirav, finally Aayush woke up, he was now in Raj's arms, he starts seeing through his half opened eyes, he asks for his Mom!!!!

Raj: tumhari mom toh gaayab hoayi hain!! Yeh dekho yeh koi yellow aunty hain!! Shaayad aapka maom ho!! (laughs under his breath)

Aayush is in no mood for fun, he's still looking at everyone, trying to figure out where he was, rubbing his eyes with both of his hands'

Khanak: Raj stop it!!! Mish can you just wash his face, so that he'll be fully awake!!

Mish: yes maam!!! Pehle tum toh fresh ho jao!!!!

Dhruv: itni jaldi?? Nahi nahi!! Kuch mazaa hojaye!! (winks at Raj, Raj grins, Mish takes Aayush from Raj and moves in)

Khanak: dhruv tum aaj kal sirf masti hi kar rahe ho!!

Dhruv: arrey Khanak jab saare functions katam hojate hain na, toh hamari saare fun bhi katam!!! Toh we'll enjoy to the fullest!!! (does an hi-fi with Raj)

Elders also agrees, Khanak shakes her head, she's smiling seeing her friends enjoying haldi, Raj had literally put haldi on Dhruv's face, Dhruv not to be left out, through all this chaos, she was missing her parents immensely, the most important day of her life, and her parents is not with her. If her parents would have been on the top of world, she was reminded about her brother's marriage, where she had lots of fun with her mom and dad, in pulling her brothers leg, now it was her time, her friends were pulling her leg, but her parents were missing, she's now in her room, looking out of the window, she was left alone, to clean herself!!!

Her phone rings, she's lost, she misses the call, once again it rings, she's startled, she looks at it, she smiles an half smile looking at the screen, its flashing Shaantanu's name!!!! She picks up the call, she's not allowed to speak'.

Shaan: Khanak!! Tumhe pata hain I took completely an hour to clean myself, it was horrible, but still I did this only for you!! Kyun ki mom ne kaha the same haldi you'll be putting on, u know what I mean'..

Shaan: achcha voh sab chodo, yeh batao, r u struggling to get your haldi off, u know im free right now, I don't have have any problem in helping you'''.he chuckles, but senses that she's silent, she hardly does that'.

Shaan: Khanak??? Are you alright??? (A lone tear comes down her cheek)

Khanak: yeah'

Shaan: Khanak, what's wrong??

Khanak: kuch nahi, tum bolo!!(tries to be fully composed)

Shaan: (he realsies its an important day of their life, then she would be')Khanak, r u missing your parents???

Khanak is silent, tears flow freely from her eyes'.

Shaan: Khanak!!! Listen, ur parents r with you, you remember the words you told to me na, when I had asked you about you missing them (in his house, when they were sitting and talking near the pool) You had said that you see them in Aayush's and your happiness, ur happy right?? toh phir??

Shaan: Khanak please don't cry!! Shit!! And I can't get out of my house now!!! (his parents orders)

Khanak: Shaan!! (controls herself) im fine!!!

Shaan: r u sure Khanak???? (worried)

Khanak: yep!!! (smiles)

Shaan: (lets out a long breath) thank god!! Ek minute ke liye aisa laga'.

Khanak: Shaan!! Stop it, kitne bholte ho!!! Anyways I've to go take a shower now!!! (back to herself)

Shaan: sshhoowwweeerr!!!!

Khanak: haan!!! (clueless) Shaan grins and shakes his head'.

Shaan; ok!!! But don't forget aaj raat''

Khanak: (wide opens her eyes, and then smiles shyly) Shaan!!! Bye!! (cuts off the call)

Both of them smile at the phone!!!

Coming up: main event!!!

Please comment😊
Anything to be added please tell!!!
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey missed ur update yesterday
aww the haldi part was so cute
hahaah shan telling khanak about haldi applied on him was quite funny kitna pyar karta hai khanak se bless them
poor khanak ofcourse itna imp day uska yaad toh aayegi hi parents ki
i loved shan cajoling khanak he really cant c her cry itna pyar toh kismat walon ko milta hai
waiting for the main event sorry yaar like button kaam nahi kar raha
and best of luck for ur new year in clg enjoy ur studies and acche se padhai karna 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

wowww chandu...missed ur update yesterday...bt nw u r baqqq...

it was very choty bt chalega..😉 oh today is wedding day...khanak friends teasing her n dr shez alone n missing her parents..shaan sensed her sadness n cheered her...n wats gonna happ aj raat...😳😳 hope aayush doesnt come between dm...😆😆

waiting fr nxt part...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
wohooo coming up is shanak's marriage...lovely😉

will wait for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Miss the update yst
This update was lovely
Shaan check his side of the bed n thought it won't remain empty from now onward 😉 naughty naughty
Haldi part was very Nice Khanak missing her parents n her friend pulling her leg as usual Dhruv n Raj r very funny 😆
Shaan called her n sense she is missing her parent what he said was right about Aayush
that shower talking part was awesome 😆😉
waiting for main event
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Dear

very very Cute update :)

Firstly All the very Best Dear .,,,,,,,,,may you get all the Success :) Start your new year with Enthusiasm, Positivity & Big Smile & I am sure u'll Kill it :)

Update was Lovely ………Haldi function & Masti described beautifully. Shaan agreed for function as he got to know that the same haldi will be applied to his Love :) For me attractive part was the way you have beautifully included Aayush & his Sweet antics. Wakening up & searching for Mummy. As usual Raj was super cute :)

Khanak Missed her parents………Awee…….Felt really sad thinking about her situation. Loved the excitement in Shaan's voice & the way he handled khanak after knowing her mood ………Beautifully Written !!!

Shaan teasing & Masti was Super cute ………….Perfect !!!!

Waiting for next ……….Continue Soon

Love

Pranjal.

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
hmm even i was feeling a bit sad for khanak
but the fone conv changed khanak's mood as well as mine
loved the shanak conv
i juz love the fact that he alwayz rem ayush... he luvs hms as his own
lukin fwd to the main event and lots of shanak moments
update soon

BEST OF LUCK FOR UR NEW YEAR ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awwwlove shanak sooo much, they are sooo adorable and cute shaan is soon sweet he cantr see here cry, awww poor jersey obviously shes gonna miss here parents on such am important day.
also I would like to see khanak talk to misha or khusbhoo about married life and how she shud prepare, talk about sr, talk about how to look after here husband.. etc and it'll also be nice to see their bond
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p.s. happy new year babes
xxx :-)
Edited by aasma1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Chandu I m Back...
finally I finished reading all the remaining updates.

Love it All😊
Love the Lanavala trip and shanak first kiss scene near the pool side that's was so romantic...😉
aayush called shaan as papa...so Lovely 😊
shanak engagement...they fought for engegment theme😆

The shopping part was awesome, Aayush wanted to play a game to find clothes for each other, This was superb ideakhanak refuse to wear the dress, she want shaan to see her at engegment it self, they select the ring 😛
wow!!!
The engagement attires are so beautiful and so the rings.and their beautifull kiss was lovely.😛

lunch date shanak feed each other thats one very nice except Raj he he he he ...😆
hayeee!!!!!! shanak rock in the samer and kiya party yaar superb👏


OMG naughty naughty shan i liked that shan unbuttoning his shirt awww i dont know about khanak but i was blushing blushing and blushing😉😆
khanak started crying aww she got so emotional man very sensitive and shan feeling bad was a scene to watchthe peck on the lips was so romantic😉
All dresses are really beautiful...😊
shaan is right Aayush is growing he needs some space bt at other side khanak worries are right coz she loves Aayush

khanak feeding shan and aayush sooo cute😊
The group conv was awesome they talked abt khanak sleep for the next day😉
They all play a game on shaan n he too joined them...Lisa...😆
Poor shaan Trap his own game...😆
she went to shaan too meet him n misunderstanding cleared..and kiss 😉
Mehandi part so cute and poor shaan bathroom mai romance karne ka plan flop ho gaya...😆
haldi part so nice...shaan Talking like kid...she miss her parents
i loved shan cajoling khanak...😊
waiting waiting for the main event ...

chandu wating for the shanak wedding 😊




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