FF: khamoshi part 5 updated on page 8/27 oct - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

lovely update...

waiting 4 da next update...
Can u please intimate us about updates...we are unaware of ur updates...


thanks

i'll update mostly on Tuesday or Wednesday
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

loved the update😊

and the precap is really very surprising
desperately waiting for the update
try to update it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Loved all the updates...waiting for next update
plz make a content page too in the first page..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Hi vishali Lovely update...
surprise for shaan...Precqap Wow!
waiting for the next update
Can u please intimate us about updates...we are unaware of ur updates...
when u update next part please Chang your post title also...then we can aware about your update..plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Hey plz continue soon.. And can u pm me plz.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Part 4

Madhvi and Khushboo were going to the CARE foundation for the past 3 to 4 months representing their women club. They reached there and get down for the car. When they were going to mother Joan's office who was the founder of this wonderful place, madhvi spotted a young girl in her early 20s playing with the kids.

Madhvi thought,

"She looks very beautiful yet innocent and pure just like the kids'"

Madhvi: Khushboo beta look at that girl. She looks vey pretty na'.


Khushboo: yes mom she looks really very beautiful but you know shaan na, so don't start your match making again. Madhvi just frowned...


But stopped their convo, when they spot mother Joan in the hallway and they smiled at her.

They exchanged their greetings with each other...

Khushboo: mother we just came here to inform you that our women club is organizing a charity event for the orphan kids


Mother Joan: oh! That's very good. So how can I help you?


Madhvi: we planned to have some performances by these kids'so could you please arrange for that.


Mother Joan: it's our pleasure actually. So what kind of performance do you want?


Khushboo: mother my brother in law Shantanu khandelwal who is well known music director in the film industry had agreed to do a musical show for about 20 to 25 minutes in the event. we just felt to have a dance performed by these kids for that'


Mother Joan: ok. Come with me'


Mother asked Khushboo and madhvi to accompany her and they went to meet the in-charge teacher to arrange for the program so that Khushboo can give her opinion for that'

All three of them went to the teacher's room,

Madhvi immediately recognized the girl who was sitting there ...(yes the same girl whom she saw playing with the kids). Madhvi felt extremely happy to see her so that she can interact with the girl.

When they entered, that girl came near them'

Girl: good morning, mother.


Mother Joan: Good morning, child. Is this a free hour for you?


Girl: yes mother'


Then the mother Joan turned towards them and introduced them to the girl and she just did Namaste to them'and

Mother Joan: this is Khanak. Our school teacher and the cultural in-charge. Now you three can talk to her and tell the details about the show so she can make the arrangement for it.

Then mother went away from there



p.s. guys i know that i'm super late in updating... i'm very sorry for that

i loved writing a ff that too about out darling shanak but i'm damn slow

plz spare me..

Edited by vishalipoornima - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Hey visgali im aasma im also on imane blog, I wont be commenting on that blog but on india foruks cause its easier but anyways update was amazing loved it loool
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
update is short and sweet...please update next one soon..waiting for shanaks meeting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
nice update but its too short dear...
wow madhavi liked khanak at the first glance...so sweet of her...then there is no problem 4 shanak...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
wow! u updated
waited for long
madhvi liked khanak at one sight n started match making
lovely
hope this dance music bring shanak closed
update soon

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