FF: khamoshi part 5 updated on page 8/27 oct - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you sooo much for your lovely comments😊

i'll update the next part tommorrow.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Vishali nice updater
Character sketch and story line is good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hii VIshali
good to c u here
was waiting for ur update in a blog
read it again
please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very well written...
loved it vishali...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome story...
nice update...looking forward 4 da next part!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME !!!

i loved it very much and that her eyes should be declare illegal was very cute it made me smile😊
plz update next part very soon cant wait to read it plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey! 😊

Amazing Intro. Loved part 1 and 2 👏. Shaan already falling for khanak! wow 😳
please do continue soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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The stroy seems very interesting! Khanak description was too good! Nd shaan has already fallen for her! Yippee!... M eager to read...Plz continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shreya.Shanak

The stroy seems very interesting! Khanak description was too good! Nd shaan has already fallen for her! Yippee!... M eager to read...Plz continue soon!


thank u so much

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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3

Shantanu went towards his car and drove to his home, but thinking about that beautiful face he had ever seen before throughout the way. He was sure about two things – first one that girl works for CARE FOUNDATION, and second there is something about that girl which makes him to know more about her.

Shaan parked his car and went inside his house. He looked around the living room. There was no one including harilal (servant), since it was quite late. He went to his room and switched on his room light.

He took his night clothes and went to the washroom. When he was standing opposite to the bathroom mirror, he has been seeing that girl's face. he splashed the water on his face continuously but he cant control himself.

He changed to his night clothes and went outside. He lay down on the bed. Inspite of the tiring day, sleep had evaded him. He can only see her innocent yet beautiful face and hear her musical laughter.

He had been tossing on the bed constantly and finally spelt around 3 in the morning because of his tiredness.

He was running behind a girl and trying to catch her. But she was too quick and had been running ahead. When he was about to catch her, an irritating sound had disturbed him. shaan immediately opened his eyes and switched off the alarm clock.

"Oh god! What happened to me? Yesterday only I saw her and today I'm dreaming about her. I don't know anything about her not even, her name. Am I that much desperate?"thought shaan.

Then he said to himself that "its just an infatuation. focus shaan focus. You have to learn so many things and should achieve your dream, so focus on that and you have no time for these stupid things".

With his new found determination, he went to the washroom to get ready to go to his studio.

In the dining hall,

Sunil, Akshay and Khushboo were sitting and having their breakfast.

Madhvi was serving them and giving instructions to harilal to bring the food for shaan when he entered. She asked him to sit and gave him the breakfast.

When suddenly,

Khushboo: Akshay, what are you doing?

Akshay had the habit of reading the economic times in the dining table which irritate Khushboo most of the time and today also he took the paper from harilal when he brought them inside.

Akshay: Khushboo, only the business news.

Khushboo: mommm.

Madhvi: Akshay you and your father were spending the whole day in office and we don't blame or complain about that. Just spent a little time us.

Sunil: yes Akshay. Your mom is right. Because breakfast time is the family time.

And all of them laughed at sunil's answer.

Khushboo looked victoriously at akhsay and he just frowned a little , folded the paper and kept it aside.

After finishing the breakfast, all of them started to their destination (i.e.,) sunil and Akshay to their office, shantanu to his music studio and madhvi and Khushboo to CARE FOUNDATION.

precap: madhvi and khushboo's interaction with khanak and a surprise for shaan.

p.s. the surprise is not only for shaan because i'm going to give a very diffrent characterisation to my fav khanak

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