FF: khamoshi part 5 updated on page 8/27 oct - Page 6

hi everyone,

Originally posted by: vishalipoornima

note:

hi everyone,

i'm very sorry becoz i literally abandoned this FF

but dont worry i will never discontinue this ff becoz this is my very first writing...

and will update the next part most probably today evening or tommorrow

and will try 2 give atleast 1 update a week

p.s. my studies are going well...thank u sooo much

yaaay.well come back amd cant waiy babe..

Originally posted by: vishalipoornima

note:

hi everyone,

i'm very sorry becoz i literally abandoned this FF

but dont worry i will never discontinue this ff becoz this is my very first writing...

and will update the next part most probably today evening or tommorrow

and will try 2 give atleast 1 update a week

p.s. my studies are going well...thank u sooo much

wow you are going to continue this FF...

Sorry guys for not updating frequently because of my studies and also I'm the laziest person in the whole world. So please spare with me. Thank u so much for your comments

And I'm going to introduce a new character "DUCKS" as Shantanu's best buddy in this chapter. He owns a caf which is their meeting spot. Shaan and ducks were friends since childhood and with whom shaan will share his darkest secrets'

Here u go

Part 5:

Madhvi and Khushboo were happy to see khanak and very much impressed with her simplicity and had spoke with her regarding the charity event also and she had agreed to do a special show with shantanu'

In the khandelwal mansion, it's nearly tea time

They were sitting in the living room and discussing about how was their day when madhvi suddenly remembered about khanak'..

Madhvi: sunil, today we met one girl''..cutting her inbetween

Sunil: not again madhvi how many times I have told you that It should be shaan's choice becoz he is the one who is going to share his life with her''

Khushboo: but dad, let her complete it then you tell your opinion'.

Sunil: ok ok mein haar gaya'.madhviji app continue karo ji'smiles and winked at her

Madhvi just glared at husband who had started to tease in front of their own son and DIL and tells about khanak to the father-son duo

Madhvi: sunil, Akshay listen carefully we met her at the care foundation and she is working their as a teacher for the deaf and dumb children'.

immediately Akshay asked her that is she also a deaf and dumb becoz mostly those people are teaching for these kids that's why I'm asking''don't take me wrong mom'''.

Khushboo: don't worry Akshay she is perfect match for our shaan

Madhvi: haan beta' whenever she speaks with the kids with sign language I can see a kind of peace and satisfaction in her face'

Khushboo: yeah mom you are right'but I just loved her simplicity and mesmerizing smile'

Sunil: oh oh just calm down Khushboo beta''and turned to madhvi and said so you are all set to bring our choti bahu''hmmm

Madhvi: no sunil you are not understanding I want shaan to see and like her if possible love her'

All gave a confused look to madhvi except Khushboo who exactly got her MIL idea'''

Akshay: mom what are you trying to say?

Khushboo: oye duffer she says that she wants shaan to fell in love with khanak and smiles at madhvi'

Sunil: but how?

Both Khushboo and madhvi shakes their head and said "MENnn"

Madhvi: ok listen you two know na that shaan is going to do a special performance for the charity event''.both father and son shakes their head in agreement

Khushboo: and mom asked khanak to do a special show with shaan and she agreed to it'

Madhvi smiles at Khushboo becoz she has got her plan exactly but the other two were still in confusion''..

Then Madhvi said so that shaan can meet khanak, talk with her and guess what they are going to work together for the next three months'it will be enough for shaan to realize his feeling if he genuinely likes her then we can ask her parents and arrange for their marriage''what say?

Khushboo: but mom my intuition says that shaan will definitely fell head over heel for khanak'''

All of them had a hearty laugh and starts making plans for their mission''..

On the other hand, shaan was restless throughout the day. He is always a calm and cool person but today only one thing moreover one person is in his mind that is the girl who he saw last night he was very much confused because he never believed in love at first sight and all but why he is thinking about a girl that too a stranger 'yes stranger because he don't even know her name but she occupied his heart and mind for the last 24 hours

When his mind asked that he had seen much beautiful girls before then what is so special about her?

Immediately his heart said that it is her beautiful big black eyes and musical laughter

Shaan suddenly raised from his chair and came out of his studio'

He sat in his car and decided to meet ducks because he can only give solution to his problems'.

(p.s. here ducks character is completely different from the one in RBO because here he is very sensitive and both him and shaan were best of friends from college days who can understand the other's dilemma easily without telling them to each other)

When shaan entered into ducks caf immediately he received a friendly hug from ducks and they both greet each other'

Now they were sitting in the caf'''..

Ducks: shaan you really forgot your best buddy man' I had seen you nearly two months before'kya baat hai bro?

Shaan: its nothing like that man I got busy with my new music projects thats it ducks

Ducks: hey I'm just kidding yaar'' but he realized that something is wrong with shaan'he had been very much in confusion, ducks can sense that from shaan face'

Ducks: shaan is there any problem you seemed very restless since you came here'.. whats the matter?

Shaan is surprised that how he find that? But smiles at him because that is what friendship is''

Shaan: woh'kya hain naa..woh he slammers

Ducks: so how does she look?

Again shaan is surprised at him and immediately said how do you know that I'm talking about a girl?

Ducks: so you were telling me about a girl ''hain naa'.hmm he teases him

Shaan again thinks about that girl and blushes

Ducks: oye oye '.the great aspiring music director shantanu khandelwal is blushing''ok now tell me about her.

Shaan: yaar I'm so confused I have seen her only yesterday in the park near studio but there is no one single minute that I'm not thinking about her even I saw her in my dreams this morning'

Ducks started to laugh at his friend's state and shaan glared at him

Ducks: ok ok sorry yaar you continue but shaan what is so confusing about that man'I don't understand

Shaan: because I have been seeing so many girls everyday in fact much more beautiful than her but she is the first one who is affecting me this much its so difficult for me to even concentrate in my music'..everytime when I start to compose I have been seeing only one thing that her innocent and beautiful face'everytime when I hear any music it remind me only her magical laughter which is so genuine just like a small kid'shaan is lost in his dream land and smiles to himself

Ducks looks at his friend who don't even realized that he had fell in love with a girl'

Ducks brings him from his dream land and said shaan see you are only saying that she is affecting you'cutting in between

Shaan: yes that's what I'm saying she is affecting me so much but whyyy?

Ducks smiles at him and said meri dost ise kehethiye "love at first sight"

Shaan is shocked to hear this that too from his very own friend

Shaan: ducks you know na that I don't believe in such things'

Ducks: but it is the fact man that you fell in love with that girl'.

Shaan: pyaar to durr ki baat hai I don't even know her name man''..

Ducks: you, try to understand shaan its all destiny'.see you were going to that park for the last two years since you have started your studio there but you seeing her yesterday and falling for her its all in your fate no one can change that'

Shaan: but yaar..

Ducks: ok shaan like you said you have been seeing so many girls everyday even many of them had proposed to you since college days but have you ever thought about them again?

Shaan: nooo

Ducks: but she is the only one who is affecting you this much because somewhere in your heart you are feeling for her'

Shaan: but I don't know anything about her'

Ducks: see you have just accepted that you had feeling for her

Shaan shouted what?????? Ducks looks at him cynically

Shaan: ok now stop looking at me like that'and tell me when I accepted that I'm feeling for her'

Ducks: shaan I can see that in your face man'moreover when I said that your heart had started feeling for her instead of refusing you said that you know anything about her, that means''''.

Impatiently shaan asked that means what yaar'

Ducks smiles and said that means you want to know about her in fact you want to know each and everything about her '.am I right?

Shaan instantly got up from his seat went towards ducks and hugged him

And said thank you so much yaar I got my answers'

Ducks smiles at his friend and shaan left from there happily with his new found feeling that is his love for that stranger girl

But with the determination that she wont be a stranger to him any more because he going to find each and every thing about his love''''

Precap: shanak meeting in the care foundation

p.s. this is my longest update so far and next update I'm not sure about that because of my hectic schedule'but will pm u guys

Loved the update Vishali
m so happy u updated
Madhvi told Sunil about khanak, she has planed to make khanak work with shaan for musical show thats great Sunil and Akshay are always funny loved them
loved khushboo here she is so sweet and liked khanak
and understood madhvi's plan
ohh!!!!! Poor Shaan can't even concentrate in his work yehi hi toh hai tumari sapno ki rani dude heheh
he even started to dream about khanak
he met duck and he solved his delima that its love at first sight
loved shaan and duck's conv, he understood his friend's problem before he spoke
good shaan u get ducks point and its love at first sight
wow!!!! now shaan will try to find her and know about her, lekin shaan tume zyaada dhundna nahi parega ur mom has set all with ur dear bhabhi
will wait for next part n their meeting
please if possible 1 update per week dena please its a request
update soon

i m sooo happy that u r continuing it

Nice update vishali...

Awesome update...😊