FF: khamoshi part 5 updated on page 8/27 oct

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi everyone,
i'm vishali.i have written this particular story because i'm a great fan of shanak. they were like magic and had attracted us like a magnet. this story is my fav story and i hope, you will also gonna love it. And my sincere thanks to imane becoz she is my inspiration for writing a FF that too on shanak. you can also see my ff on shantanuandkhanak forum created by imane. so here u go



KHAMOSHI


Characters
Sunil khandelwal:
He is the owner of the khandelwal group of companies. To an outsider, he looks like an arrogant, ruthless businessman, who can do anything for his company's profit. But his family is the most important thing for him. He will just make the world upside down to see a single ray of happiness in his family. He loved his wife and his two sons from the bottom of his heart.
Madhvi khandelwal:
She is Sunil's wife, very kind and caring. She loves her family a lot especially her younger son. She still consider him as her little baby boy. She is the chairperson of some women's organization. She along with her MIL khushboo always goes to CARE FOUNDATION to donate money and food for children.
Akshay khandelwal:
He is the elder son of Sunil and madhvi, very responsible and devoted to his work. He is working in their own firm and married to khushboo who was chosen by his parents. But after marriage, realized their true love towards each other and now living their life happily.
Khushboo khandelwal:
She is akshay's wife. She loves her husband and his family particularly her deewarji whom she treats as her own brother. She works with her MIL for their charity and often goes to CARE FOUNDATION because she loves being with the children.
Shantanu khandelwal:
He is the younger son of Sunil and madhvi, very handsome, good looking and every girl's prince charming. He loves his family a lot and will share anything and everything with them. He is a famous and very popular music director in bollywood and had reached a very great height in a short time. Music was his passion. No not passion, his soul. Music will always makes him happy even in the tough situations.
Khanak:
A complete mystery. Soon shantanu will find the answer for it.
Poonam yadav:
Khanak's friend who knows everything about her.

Storyline
It is a unique love story between to completely opposite people. Once the story progress, you will find out how different they were form each other. But love blossom between them. How they react when they realized that they had fell in love, how they fears about their love and how they struggles to confess to each other forms the rest of the story.

p.s. plz give your comments. both appreciations and criticism even tomatoes and chappals


part 1 - pg 1

part 2 - pg 1

part 3 - pg 3

part 4 - pg 5

note - pg 6,7

part 5 - pg 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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here u go


part 1



One fine morning, shaan aka shantanu khandelwal is standing near the window in his room. The cool breeze of the sea and the early morning son had always makes him to feel happy and content. That was his favorite spot in the entire khandelwal mansion and had inspired him a lot to compose new tunes.


Shantanu has become a successful and promising music director in bollywood. He had composed music for less than ten films in this journey of music. But all of them were super duper hits. People had felt the soul in his music. In these three years, he had received so many awards and appreciation.


When he told his family about his decision to choose music as his profession, all had become very happy except Sunil khandelwal. Sunil had dreamt about his two sons managing his business empire after him. But Madhvi and Akshay had convinced him. Eventually, he also started feeling proud and happy for his son.

Shaan was thinking all these, when suddenly his phone rang.

Shaan answered the call and said: hello, shantanu khandelwal here


Person in the phone: hello, Shantanu. I'm Rahul mehra, director Javed's assistant.
(Shantanu had worked with director Javed in his two films and with rahul because he was the assistant director in these films)

Shaan: haan, I remember. How are you rahul?

Rahul: I'm fine. i just called you to tell that Mr. Modi (owns production company) had accept my proposal and agreed to finance my debut film.

Shaan: wow, that's great. Congrats.

Rahul: thanks and I want you to compose music for my first films.

Shaan: oh, it's my pleasure.

Rahul: then shantanu can we meet at my place, so that I could explain about my project. Then it will be easy for you to compose music. Am I right?

Shaan: yeah, I'll be there around 11. Is it OK for you?

Rahul: it's fine. OK then, see you at my place.

Shaan: bye.


Shantanu kept the phone down and walked to his closet, take out his clothes and went to the washroom. He is every happy for his new project and got ready to go to rahul's office.


He wore a yellow cotton shirt and blue jeans. He is looking dashing even in this simple attire. When he went downstairs, he saw his mom was giving instruction to harilal (servant) about lunch preparations. His dad and brother had already gone to their office and his bhabhi had gone to some orphanage. His mom saw him and smiled at him.Shaan went near her and hugged her from behind.


Shaan: good morning, mom.

Madhvi: good morning, beta.

shaan then turned her around to face him and madhvi kissed him on his forehead.


Shaan: mom, I'm going out for a meeting.


madhvi had become angry and glared at him


Madhvi: shaan you are not going, until you ate something.

Shaan: but mom, it's very urgent. And I'm already late.

Madhvi: I don't care about your urgency and all that. Do what I say. That's it.

Shaan: mom, please.


Madhvi went to kitchen and poured down his favorite juice in a glass and gave it to him.



Madhvi: drink this and then you can go.

Shaan: alright.

Shaan gulped down the juice at one go and gave the empty glass to his mom and kissed his mom in her cheeks


Shaan: bye mom.

Madhvi: bye beta. Drive safe.
Shaan smiled at his mom's concern

Shaan: OK mom


Shaan waved at his mom and went. Madhvi watched her son's departing figure with a proud smile.

(Shaan had got his SUV from his first payment. So he never allowed anyone to touch his car even his own brother. That much he loves his car)


Shaan sat at the driver seat, started the engine and got his SUV out of the garage. He drives the car in the lane of south Mumbai to meet rahul.


precap: shanak's meeting

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2


Shaan had reached rahul's office. He parked his car and went inside his office. When he entered, rahul greeted him and hugged him. Then rahul asked shantanu to sit and he started narrating about his project to shaan. Rahul said that his movie is a musical love story, so shaan's music has an integral important to play in it. Rahul wanted his music to move forward his story and also express his character's state of mind like happiness, sad, insecurity, disappointment, hatred, dejection and all such feelings.

After completing, rahul asked about shaan's opinion.


Shaan: its awesome and quite challenging, so I'll definitely do it.

Rahul: thank you so much shantanu. I know that you are the right one for my film.

Shaan: no rahul. It's my pleasure to work with you. So when are we starting?

Rahul: sorry shantanu, I forgot to tell you that I have outdoor shooting and it'll take atleast 20
days maximum.

Shaan: don't be sorry. It's OK

Rahul: then I'll call you once I came back.

Shaan: it's fine.


Then shantanu and rahul signed the contract papers and shaan left from there to go to his music studio.



On the way to his studio, shaan felt very happy to compose music for rahul's film and he has immense faith and confidence in himself and his orchestra.
Yes. His orchestra is one of the best in india and had supported him to achieve his dream in his music career.


He went inside his studio and greeted his team. They greet him in return and started to compose music for one of their pending project. Shaan will always be in good spirit whenever he is in his studio. Finally they windup their work around 6 in the evening and shaan asked them to leave and to continue on the remaining the next day.

When everyone left, shaan was alone in the studio and he decided to go for a walk in the nearest park to get fresh air and to relax him after a tiring day.
He reached there in just 10 minutes and walked inside the park.



Since it is evening, there are many people talking their walk, kids playing around, young couples walking with each others hands holded and some men with random conversation.


Shantanu sat in the bench and closed his eyes.
Suddenly he heard some noise. When he turned around, he saw a girl playing with some school kids with her back turned towards him. Shaan tried to see the girl's face but he can't.


When she catches one of the kids, she picked the kid in her arms and turned around. Shaan was just blown away with her beauty. Till now, shaan had never seen someone as beautiful as her. Her face is very innocent and pure just like the kids, she was playing with. He saw her big black eyes and thought that her eyes should declare illegal because of their size. Her sharp nose and her naturally pink lips. When he saw her cheeks, instantly his hands longed to touch them. Her face was simply adorning a bindi in the forehead without any additional makeup. She was wearing a pink saree with silver embroidery and her hands with two dozen glass bangles. The sound of her bangles was like a melodious music to his ears. Her laughter made him to smile. He felt like he will do anything to see her smiling face. He stood there transfixed and stared at her with his mouth opened.


When he moved towards her, another girl came there and asked them to board their school bus. With the other children, she sat in the bus and went away. Shantanu stood there and watched her disappearing from his sight. But he noticed one thing that the bus belongs to CARE FOUNDATION. Yes, the same foundation where his mom and bhabhi were volunteers to collect funds for the orphan kids.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome introduction of the characters seems really very interesting
just going to read your updates
Edited by AwesomeYashAran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey😊
good to c u here I had read ur update in the blog😊
Congrats on ur 12th marksđŸ„ł
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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vishali lovely updates really liking the story
A big hug to you for such a beautiful story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey vishali I always ask u on imane blog when u r updating, but thank god u r
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great one dear keep updating
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it seems reallly interesting😊


looking forward to next update
Edited by loveYM - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi vishali
Awesome introduction of the characters😊
wow!both update very nice...
thank u so much for this FF ...me too very big fan of shanak...miss them Lot...😭
waiting for next update...




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