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Wow Afiya thus was so good👏

Beautiful OS

khanak's frustration and how much she is disturbed coz she cant rem anything was penned amazingly

wht shaan went thru and wht he's still goin thru ... my heart choked

but no matter wht... he just want her to be with him coz that is where she belongs

the song selection superb... i loved it... em in luv wid this song

i liked that u wrote d the most beautiful dialogue from salaam-e-ishq

PS: y dont u name it "abhi mujh main kahin baki thodi si hai zindagi"

kinda long but juz thought of it

keep writing and try to update ur ff soon.

first of all that is so so so so so so so soo sweet of u to write for me and annie😳🤗

Awesome os Afya

awww so sweet

afiya...os was really nice...i really liked it...😊

awesome os yaar...u penned deir emotions beautifully...loved it
do come up wid sme mre...n dont forget ur ff😆😆😆

Originally posted by: aasma1

Oh wooow afiya whhat a sweet jpdate love kt tooo much, keeep writing

Thank you Aasma! Aww I know he's so adorable! :)

Originally posted by: sharon18

Wow Afiya thus was so good👏

The whole thing about having a memory loss and not able to recall anything and the frustration associated with it was well penned😃

I loved the part where Shaan comes to the conclusion that it doesn't matter how the future will turn out as long as she is there with him😊

Khanak's feelings and thoughts were well portrayed , the dilemma she was written really well😊

Loved the OS hope u come up with more😊

Just one request I dunno if I am right here but I think U had started an FF long back I don't remember the name but I really liked it but it was discontinued...Im not able to remember much could u plz continue that FF it was pretty long back...plzzz😊

Thank you so much, Sharon! Glad you liked it! 😃 Umm so far I've only written one FF, which is still going, here it is if you'd like to read it :)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rang-badalti-odhani/1756938/ff-shaadi-mubarak-imp-note-pg-83

Originally posted by: janavi07

Wow Afiya thus was so cute👏👍🏼

Memory Loss of khanak and don't remember anything her pain and frustration towards the shaan so Amezing

Last one shaan Dialogue so Awesome...clearly we can see the Love about his wife...and not matter anything i just Love it!

Loved the OS hope u come up with more😊

Thank you, Janavi! Glad you liked it... will try to come up with more! 😃

Originally posted by: IF_rida

Beautiful OS

khanak's frustration and how much she is disturbed coz she cant rem anything was penned amazingly

wht shaan went thru and wht he's still goin thru ... my heart choked

but no matter wht... he just want her to be with him coz that is where she belongs

the song selection superb... i loved it... em in luv wid this song

i liked that u wrote d the most beautiful dialogue from salaam-e-ishq

PS: y dont u name it "abhi mujh main kahin baki thodi si hai zindagi"

kinda long but juz thought of it

keep writing and try to update ur ff soon.

Aww thank you, Rida! I agree with you on the song selection it's one of my fav's too! Yeah I like what you did there w/ the title, thanks so much! 😊

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

first of all that is so so so so so so so soo sweet of u to write for me and annie😳🤗

darling ur writing has always been lovely n i love ffs n os..so im a sucker for them any day anytime:)

yeh kahi rishwat toh nahi ke ff na update karo?🤔😆

i loved it...everything in it was so emotional n showed d deep love shaan has for her n d indirect signs of love khanak has but doesnt realise until d end...

simply loved d ending where she kisses his tear away...i can imagine d beautiful scene😍

thnk u for d lovely gift.always there to appreciate yr lovely work

Aww thank you,Kari!! So happy you liked it! Haha I have no idea how to write the following part, so yeah I guess I'm stalling for some time! 😉 Will update that soon though! Aww thank you, once again!