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Hiii everyone!! How's everyone doing? lol okay anyway it's Valentine's Day ! So as always my "love" would have to none other than ShaNak <3 . Anyway I was seriously missing our burthal couple like crazy these past few weeks, and an OS idea popped into my mind, so I was like why don't I do it as a Valentine Day thing? 😳 While I was writing the OS I came across Saba's very beautiful VM, on "What Makes you Beautiful" by One Direction. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dRgdDx9Gh3k&feature=channel_video_title So that's been playing in my head the whole day and so has "Tu Mohabbat Hai", from Tere Naal Love Hogaya. So yeah, that had to be the title, I guess 😆. Now I guess I'm ramblilng about my life, which most people won't even read, so I'll just cut the crap and get on to the OS. 🤣 I never really wrote an OS before but I hope you guys like it 😳



Valentine's Day


Khanak woke up to a soft warm light cascade over her, in their bed. She moved her arm to see a wrapped package next to her with a reddish pink rose taped onto it. She looked at it confused until it finally dawned upon her that today was Valentine's Day!


"Aaj toh Bhalentine's Day hai, main kaise bhool sakhtee hoon?" she said tapping her hand lightly against her head.


She picked up the rose, and held it slightly against her cheek while she picked up the card that was sitting next to the package. She opened it and read something that made her cheeks blush the same shade as the rose, looking at the last line of the note


"...tumhari liye ek toofa hain, aaj raat ke liye. Main intezaar kaarongi." She had read.


Without much ado, she put the rose and card down and hesitantly approached the package. She slowly opened the package, scared and curious to see what was in it. As she went through the layers of colorful tissue paper she unveiled a deep red silk nightgown, darker than her soft cheeks.


"Haaye Bhagwaan, yeh Shaantanu bhi na..." she said remembering what he had told her once about being "Bold" and not being shy infront of him.


"Who bhi theek hai, itni din hua hamari shaadi se, main bhi ek number ka stupid hoon", she said as she eyed the gown, uncomfortably.


She placed the gown on the bed, and decided to forget about it for the time being, and went in the the bathroom to freshen up.


As she walked out of the bathroom, she wondered what she should do about tonight. She wanted to do something special for Shaantanu , but whenever she planned something, it always turned out to have the opposite effect! She sat down on the bed, away from the gown, and pouted slightly, until she saw her phone. She picked it up and started to scroll down slightly looking for the right person that could help her with her situation. She found Sam's name, and pressed enter, grinning slightly.

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"Kya yaar! Achi khaasi neend thi, aur tune itne subah utha diya!" Sam complained plopping on the couch in Shaan and Khanak's living room.


"Subha? Sam 10 bajh gaye, tum itni dair uthi ho?" Khanak asked looking at Sam.


"Haan, aur aaj to Saturday hai, itne khass kya baat hai, jisme itna jaldi uthna ho?" she yawned, while Khanak stared hopelessly at her.


"Sam, aaj 14 February hai, Bhalentine's Day?" she said, while Sam sat up straight.


"14 Feb... AAJ HAI?!" she said jumping up.


Khanak laughed" Haan aaj hai, lekin tumhe kya faraaq parta hai, tum toh..." she said.


"Oye Khanak, don't go there!" Sam said holding up her finger challenging Khanak.


Khanak chuckled " Haan theek hai, theek hai, pehle main re maadat toh kar de!" she said explaining her gown problem to Sam.


After Khanak finished telling Sam her story she sat down across from her, while Sam tried to stifle her laughter with her hand.


Khanak looked at her big eyed " Kya baat hai, tum itne ajeeb awaaz kyun bana rahe ho?" she said.


Sam couldn't control her laughter anymore" Oh god Khanak, tum kitne bhooli ho?" she said smiling.


"Maatlab?" she said with an annoyed expression.


Sam rolled her eyes " Khanak, kitne din huyi hai tum dono ke shaadi se?" she asked.


It was Khanak's time to roll her eyes at Sam


"I mean come on, you guys must've done "it" like 70 times already!" she said while Khanak looked down at her fingers, smiling lightly.


"Haan, phir bhi, main chahthi hoon, ki aaj raat Shaantanu ke liya bahut special ho" she said softly.


"Tum ne... pehle Shaan ke liye kuch special nahi ki?!" Sam said looking at Khanak.


Khanak remembered all of the times she tried to do something special for Shaan. From the "I Love You" halwa, to the red dress incident, to the outfit she wore on their honeymoon, every time something went wrong.


"Haan...Nahi...woh actually, mera surpises itna acha nahi tha..." Khanak said while Sam looked at her confused.


"Koi baat nahi, aaj double exciting bana denge!" Sam said.


Khanak and Sam planned everything for the night, occasionally fighting with each other, disagreeing on various topics. Near the evening Sam had decorated their room with gorgeous petals of various shades, and dimmed the lights slightly making the room shine. Sam looked out the window and saw Shaan's car pull into the driveway.


"Khanak, Shaan agaaya!" she said pushing Khanak into the closet to change.


"Kya, itni jaldi!?" Khanak gasped.


"Umm, Sam tum jao, nahin yahaan se nahin, udhar se!" Khanak exclaimed pushing Sam through the door.


"Jeez yaar, quite shoving... YOUR WELCOME!" Sam screamed while Khanak closed the door behind her, her heart racing as she headed towards the closet to change.

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"Khanak, Khanaaak!" Shaan yelled walking up the stairs toward their room.


"Main yahaan hoon, Shaantanu, kaamre main," Khanak replied.


Shaan smiled with his tongue in his cheek and walked slightly towards the door. He opened the door to witness Khanak standing over the table litting up one of the many candles. She was wearing his gown, but had a beautiful deep red silk robe over it.


"Hi..." he whispered huskily in his deep voice.


Khanak turned around, her gorgeous black hair unveiling her flushed face.


"...Hi..." she replied blushing horribly.


Shaan looked down and laughed slightly at how cute she could be sometimes. He gazed at her longingly at started to walk near her, in tensing his gaze with each step.


Khanak felt her cheeks burn, and she felt a smile creep slowly on his face.


"Uhh...woh... app...ne kh... khaana khaya?" she asked him not meeting his gaze.


"Hmmm...khayaa.." he said approaching her.


"Kya...kya khayaa" she said as she felt his strong arms slide around her petite waist.


"Khanak," he said looking down at her.


"Hmm..." she said lost in his gaze.


"Shhh..." he said seductively lowering his lips to her shoulder rubbing his nose against hers. He kissed her collar bone slightly, while Khanak closed her eyes in response to his touch.


He traveled his lips across her neck up to his chin and finally up to her lips. He opened his eyes and saw Khanak waiting her lips slightly parted, clinging on to his shirt. He smirked slightly and decided to have some fun with her. He tilted his head down to hers and rubbed his lips lightly against her, Khanak shivering slightly in response. He enjoyed teasing her, and played with her lips once again, feeling her breath slightly against his chin.


"Shaa..." Khanak said slightly, wanting his lips against hers more than ever.


"Kya hua, Khanak," he said in his husky voice teasing Khanak.


"App...", she said.


"Main...main kya..." he said smiling tickling her slightly against her waist.


Khanak frowned slightly and knew what she had to do. She grinned mischievously and slid her finger through one of the loops on his jeans pulling him closer to her.


He came closer to her laughing at the gesture she had just made, before he had a chance to say something he felt her soft pouty lips secure his lips against hers in a swift movement.


Khanak intensified the kiss, moving one of her hands across his sturdy back, and the other in his fluffy, jet black hair.


Shaan continued kissing her, his hand slowly inching towards her belt on the robe. He looped his fingers around one of the strings and swiftly pulled it apart, letting the robe fall down to the ground.


He felt Khanak raise one of her silky soft legs, and rub it slightly against his. Not able to control himself any longer he smiled into her shoulder as he picked her up, and carried her towards their bed. Khanak smiled pressing her lips against his forehead.


The two fell on the bed, becoming one in each other's embrace.

"Tere jazbaaton mein mehki si saason mein
Yeh jo mehek sandali si hai
Dil ki panahon mein bekhri si aahon mein
Sone ki khwasish jagi si hai
Chehre se chehra chupao
Sene ki dhadkan sunao

Ko bhi do, khud ko tum
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein. "

❤️


I had to use Labon Ko as Imane vid my request so remarkably :) I really love these two, hope you guys had fun! Happy Valentine's Day to all and Lots of Love, Mwah! <3


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Posted: 13 years ago
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IT's HOTTT.😛...loved it..

HAPPY VALENTINE DAY
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it, very cute and hot😊
Happy Valentines day😊
Thanks for this sweet gift😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Afiya 'HAPPY VALENTINE DAY'.
OS-Hot!Hot!...
U give us best gift today...
Realy miss shanak so much..after reading your os i am so happy..thank u so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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eeeks Afi ! thanx for the valentines day gift!
it was awesome! and HOT!

Happy Valentines Day all !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey afiya...awsome os...loved it...
n it was hawt...😳 i was missing dm sooo much...😭
thnk u fr dis wonderful os...🤗
n Happy valentines day to all...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastic OS

loved it

hot romantic... super fun to read

even with that burning desire their is endless teasing

i luk fwd to more OS from you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Afiya!!! have a blast today!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Happy Bhalentine's Day😃
OMG wat a cutie update on this day of love❤️ Loved it😃
Awww it made me nostalgic I really miss these 2 burthals😔
It was truly a lovey valentine OS...
AWESOME👍🏼
Plz come back with more cutie OS's like this😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for rekindling beautiful memories Afiya!! LoveU

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