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Posted: 13 years ago

Khanak wants to know abt a soccer club.. hmm.. what else is she going to do??


Thanks Shalini!! Khanak has a lot of plans up her sleeve...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update

penned amazingly

luvin this completely diff shaan and khanak

update soon



Thanks Rida for the always encouraging comments!! makes my writing worthwhile😃.


i was a little sceptical having them so different in my story but i guess it has paid off!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Brishti!!!

Mr S secretly devouring his tomboy!! Enjoyed it... Ha..meri ladki hockey stick se maarti hai aur tumhari soccer khekti hai..maybe we shud make them meet one day:)




Thanks Pundu!! let's do that... so will your Khanak fly down to meet mine😆.

bon voyage!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update sangi di...😃
omg khanak loves soccer...😆😆
awee shaan cleans d dishes n table...😆😆
khanak wnts to go to soccer club...
hope dis will bring dm closer...😊

interesting to see hw he will change dis tomboy...😃
waiting fr nxt part...😉




Thanks Snigdha for the lovely comments. She not only enjoys but plays too!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update sangi di...😃
omg khanak loves soccer...😆😆
awee shaan cleans d dishes n table...😆😆
khanak wnts to go to soccer club...
hope dis will bring dm closer...😊

interesting to see hw he will change dis tomboy...😃
waiting fr nxt part...😉



Thanks Snigdha!! She not only enjoys but plays too!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sangita🤗
I love you...
Wow she's one cute tomboy awww I jus love Khanak's character😃
Awww poor Shaan its gonna be a next to impossible thing to get her to love him😆
She is on the look out for a soccer club 😃 so cool it will be good to see her out of the house😃 I wish she gets a chance to pursue her higher education 😊
I think its time she atleast became friends with him 😊 and hope it will happen soon otherwise she is gonna lead a lonely life there😔 wonder how she dosent get bored...hmmm cooking for him great start😆
Loving it Sangita😊


Love you too Sharon🤗. Missed you so much!!! she'll pursue her studies!!

she does get bored at times but as i said she has her studies and soccer on tv to keep her busy, not to forget the numerous calls to Kolkata...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sangi dont delete the at the end of the msg when u quote our msg..
If u dont do that we could distinguish wat u write for us from wat we wrote for u na??
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Posted: 13 years ago



Hello my lovely ladies !!! Wouldn't dare to ask for apology for being abominably late with my update... by now I'm sure all of you are used to it !! So here goes the next update.
May I please request my silent readers to gain voice and atleast comment on my blog?




Part 16




As much as she wanted to try the MRT(Mass Rapid Transport), she took a cab instead to Sentosa island. Disgusted with being at home for so many days, she finally decided to venture out and explore the city !!



The primary tourist destination of the city, Sentosa was a revelation and for adventure freaks like her, it was paradise !! She thought of beginning her trail with the Skyline Luge Sentosa. For a thrill seeker and an adrenalin junkie like her, this part go-kart and part toboggan,the luge was a non-motorised three wheel carrier that she sat on and controlled while whizzing downhill on 650m jungle trail track towards the Siloso Beach.



The Dragon Trail,the second track,with elevated and tighter corners and sharper turns,she hung on for an exciting ride. The third trail,the Sentosa Skyride was a more relaxing aerial ride that carried her above tree tops and leaving her mesmerized though she wished that she had taken this ride in the evening.



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8 a.m at the breakfast table



" I was thinking of going out and exploring the city a little today ".



" If you are okay,we can do so on Saturday ". " In fact we can go to Sentosa ".



" Shantanu, I want to do it on my own ".



" I thought Shaan was fine with you ". Completely oblivious of what he said, she continued……



" I have a detailed map and also my cell phone, I'll manage ".



" But Khanak, you are absolutely new to the city and the systems here are very different from Kolkata ".



" Everyone here speaks English Shantanu and I understand and speak the language pretty well ". " Stop fathering me ". " If I'm in trouble, I will call you ".



Her curt behavior left him speechless but fuming within. He was at a loss in trying to put some sense into her head. Gosh!!! why is she so stubborn?



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Post lunch she took off for Underwater World Singapore. Here,a voyage to the bottom of the sea, began at the water's edge, with shallow rock turtle and ray pools. She was greeted next by brightly corals and exotic ocean dwellers (including eels,sea dragons and jelly fish) before embarking on a spectacular underwater journey through the 83 meter long travelator with a tunnel housing the majestic rays, fearsome sharks,great shoals of other fishes and a host of other creatures that inhabit the ocean depths leaving her spellbound and captivated.



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Nicole couldn't help but notice Shaan's restlessness. Mr.Cool (nickname gifted by his colleagues) has been jittery ever since morning. Reputed as a teetotaler,he has been to the smoking room already a couple of times.


" Would you like to talk, Shaan "?


" Hi, Nicole, I'm fine ".


" I didn't ask you how you are ". " I'm asking if you want to talk ".


" Khanak has left for Sentosa all on her own ". " I haven't heard from her till now ".


" Shaan, she is an adult ". " If she encounters any problem, she'll get in touch ". " Your worrying to death won't help ".


" Look at you " !!! " You are in absolute shambles ". " Collect yourself and try and open shop quickly ".


" Thank you Nicole ". Her thump on his back brought back some lost confidence.



Her ultimate stop for the day was the Dolphin Lagoon. Set amidst lush landscaping, the lagoon completes a seamless journey of discovery into the ocean's depths. She booked herself for the 6:45 p.m show. And was it a delight !! The dolphins and fur seals charmed the audience in a variety of programmes. She had a splashing good time as she went up close to the pink dolphins spy-hopping and tail walking their way into her heart !!



It was close to 8 when Shaan returned. The pitch dark of the house numbed his senses !!! He fished out his phone and frantically dialled her and like previous times,it was switched off!!!



His immediate thought was to report to the police. But what would he say, that he allowed his wife, a stranger to the city to venture out on her own in the name of freedom?



Where are you Khanak? Please come back my bride. I am lost without you !!!



His clenched fists portrayed his distress ……










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Posted: 13 years ago
haaa...wat a lovely update..
the adventure freak didnt bother abt informing her whereabouts to shaan..
watever it may be..atleast for courtesy sake she must have informed him wat she is doing..it is a humane thing right..
even after nightfall she didnt thought abt giving him a call..in this instant my heart goes to the worried shaan..
so as soon as she enters their apartment he is going to hug her tight kya??as he wud be relieved seeing her n his worries going away seeing her back..
when will khanak give a thought abt him??
for GOD sake both r living in the same apartment even if its not like hubby-wife in real sense..dont we inform tat to our room mates who r with us in hostel r somewhere..
here they have a name to their relationship even if its not followed in full sense..
Oh Sangi..i'm craving to read more of this story..
now-a-days i'm not liking the time u take to update..kya karun?? :(
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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely update

khanak exploring the city n dat without shaan, their morning little argue was nice she is really sturborn

she didn call to inform where she is dats not fair khanak atleast one call was needed. Shaan is worried n she is still not at home

wat will shaan do after she return back

waiting for next update

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