When Love Takes Over NOTE pg 113 - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣 no i dnt think so...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sravya are u ok????????do u want us to rescue u🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sharon18

Sravya are u ok????????do u want us to rescue u🤣


rescue...🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maybe Sravys fainted after reading the PRECAP herself🤣it might have been too much for her to handle🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
atlest she must have fainted after updating...🤣
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I know ,God alone knows how long she will take to recover and then update😉...
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hope she comes in her sense soon...😆
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PART 41


After an hour or so, Khanak moves in her sleep, realizes she is not wearing her shirt and quickly looks around to see if Shaan is around


He is there, next to her, facing her with his mouth a little open

"HE LOOKS SO CUTE I WANT TO HUG HIM!" she thought


she quickly gets her shirt and wears it and without making a sound she goes down to cook something from both of them..

This is the time she gets to self- reflect.

"what is happening to me? why did i drink that bleach? why did i want to kill myself, not once but 2-3 times? what is wrong with me?"


She gets a book she finds somewhere close by and starts writing what is killing her from the inside. She takes around 30-45 minutes to write her thoughts, her emotions.

She closes the book and leaves it near the high- raised table in the kitchen and proceeds with the cooking.


S: what is that burnt smell? he asks while yawning and walking down the stairs, with his hair all shuffled up and his eyes looking sleeping

K: you know you look so cute?

S: huh?

K: anyways, what the smell you are smelling? she smiles

S: something is burning?

K: nope.. im just cooking.

S: yea, i am SURE something is burning

K: SHAAN! you are SO MEAN!

S: here, let me help you! what are you cooking?

K: none of YOUR business! let me cook, im making this italian dessert with italian pasta!

S: oh i see.. what is the flour for? for the dessert?

K: yup.. im making a cake she smiles

S: i see i see.. he goes and stands next to her

S: i never knew you could cook

K: why? don't i look like a girl who can cook? she asks with raised eye brows

S: no you don't

K: what kind of girl do i look like shaan? she asks with a blank expression on her face

S: the one who is lazy, will expect her husband to cook, to clean her room and to basically do everything you will just sit in one place: shop and eat and command on your husband. thats the kind of girl you look like.

This angers Khanak to the max..

K: shaan, i am NOT going to leave you! saying this she took some of that flour and threw it on his face

S: KHANAAK!

K: hahahahhahahaha she is laughing away to glory

S: takes the bottle of water and pours it on her hair

K: shaan! what the hell dude?!?!?!

Shaan is now busy laughing, khanak takes the chocolate/ caramel mixture she prepared for the dessert and pours it on his hair!

Shaan now has a black expression on his face and he just watches Khanak laughing away.


Shaan is super pissed and goes to take a shower.

He comes out in 15 minutes and goes straight to the kitchen to make himself a meal


K: shaan, why are you cooking, im cooking pasta for the both of us WITH garlic bread

S: its fine i don't want you to cook for me. he says seriously

K: why are you so serious?

S: why cant i be? he asks facing her

K: what the heck shaan, you are mad at me?

S: NO KHANAK! IM NOT! he yells

K: shaaann? what the heck yaar its not like you didn't pour water on me!!!

S: you POURED CHOCOLATE AND CARAMEL IN MY HAIR!

K: whatever shaan, be a sport.

She turns to walk to her room, but shaan grabs her hand, makes her face him and pushes her to the wall

S: don't walk away from me like that khanak

K: shaan, leave me..


In the meanwhile, shaan takes with his other hand a bowl of the eggs she beat up with flour and quickly pours it on khanak


K: AHHH! SHAAANNN!!! she starts hitting him and swearing all the swears she can think of in spanish/ hindi and english

S: ouch ouch ouch! khanak stop it!! ouch! he is saying ouch and laughing at the same time..


After 2 minutes, he cant take it anymore and swiftly picks her up and takes her upstairs.

S: YOU STOP hitting me or ill drop you!

K: FINE! DROP ME! my bones will only break and shatter

S: kha.. khanak, what nonsense are you talking about?

K: shaan!! put me down i need to take a shower NOW before the thing dries and it will never come off my hair!

S: no i wont!

K: shaaan!! she starts kicking her legs and hitting his hands with her closed palms

K: and YOU have to help me remove this from my hair!

S: what do you mean?

K: just take me to the bathroom! NOW!!

S: ok ok! gosh!

he takes her to the bathroom shower and puts her down gently

Just when he turns, khanak grabs his arm

K: shaan, you have to help me remove this **** from my hair!!

S: no i wont!

K: YES YOU WILL!

saying this, she runs to the bathroom door and locks it, and turns on the shower underneath which Shaan is standing.



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Posted: 13 years ago
oh sravya...u updated...🤗
finally khanak is realizing dat something is wrong wid her...
khanak n cooking grttt...😉 aweee dey r fighting wid all dat stuffs...😆😆
omggg dey r so cute...😊
shan is so naughty...yukkk egg on khanak hair...😆
omgg dey both r in same bathroom...😳☺️
u again stopped at wrong point yar...
plzz we wnt precap nw...😉😉 cnt wait wht will happ nw...😉
overall superb update...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
sravya nice update yaar...:-)
I love the all kichen scene-flour,chocolate
caramel holi...wow!where u got all this idea sravya?
And wall pin scene,lift scene
totally awosome.and last one she force the shaan remove the egg mix from her hair in bathroom.i think he is so shy wow! she locks
bathroom door and
turns on the shower underneath
which Shaan is standing.
Sravya i waiting for hot bathroom romance under the shower...:-)
Update next part soon.

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