OS:Khanak uthooo naaah...;)

Hi frnds..me koi achhi writter nahi hun..bs sunilmadhvi ki anniversry ki vdo dekhkr mujhe khayal aya ke agar khanak us rat nahi soti..to aage kya hota...

Agar aapko acha lge to plz like krna me cmnti ki koi aasha nahi kr rahi hun

Ye scene jb hai...jb khanak SR ke sej kaise sjate hai..aur hamara burthl shaan ke dimag me koi aur khayal ata hai...

Wo dono SR ke bate krte hai..aur dudh n pan ki bate..fir shaan ye chije lata hai..aur jb rum me enter krta hai..tb light off hote hai aur khanak soi rahti hai..

Shaan paan aur dudh lekar puri excitement ke sath ata hai...
Aur wo khanak ke pas jata hai...
Use wo jagata hai...

Shaan:khanak..
(Koi answer nahi)
phirse try krta hai..

S:khanak...khanak..fir thodasa gussese...khanak...

Khanak nindme hi..

Khanak:mmm...

S:khanak..dekho maine pan aur dudh laya hun..jo tmne kaha tha...

K:(1aankh kholke) to pijiye na...

S:khanak..khanak sona nahi plz sona nahi...tm muze dudh aur pan ke aage kuch btanewali ti...

K:(bedpar baithkar)shaantanu...aap bi na plz so jaiye aur mujhebi sone dijiye..aaj puri partyki tyari krke me thak gayi hu...aur ab ye bate krne ka koi wakt nahi...

S:yahi sahi wakt hai...jiska me 6mahinese intajar kar raha tha...

K:kiska injaar...

S:khuch nahi tm mujhe bta rahi ho ya nahi...

K:shaantanu pljj..muze sone dijiye kal pakka me aapko btaungi...
(Aur wo sone chali jati hai..)

s:(wo jaldise khanak ke hathse sheet khichta hai..aur khanak ko apni aur khichat hai...khanak aur shaan ke bich..bs 1inch ki duri rahti hah...)

nahi mujhe abi janana hai...(chotisi naughty smile dekhkar)

khanak bs shaan ki aankho me dekhti rahti hai...dil jorjorse dhadkana shuru karta hai..shaan apna hath khanak ke balo ko chuta hai...wo righthandse khanak ke shoulderse uske palm tk touch krta hai... Khanak ke sharirme mano jaise current ghusa hai...
Khanak kuch bol nahi pati..

S:haan khanak to kya hota hai..jb dulhan dudh lekar ati hai...

K:fir...wohhh..dulhe ke pas...jati hai...

S:(khanak ke lipske pas jata hai..)fir...

K:wo use dudh deti hai..aur so jati hai..jaise me ab so rahi hun...(aur wo sone chali jati hai..)

s:khaanaaak...agar tm nahi uthi to me tmse bat nahi krunga..

K:(uthakr)koi bat nahi..ghar me shanti rahegi...

Shaan bedse uthkar khidki ke pas jata hai...angry man ban jata hai:D

khanak ko bura lgata hai.. Woh..shanke pas jati hai..

K:aap muzse naraj ho sorry baba

shan kuch nahi bolta...

K:agar aap aise hi naraj rahne wale hai..to me chali sone aur jo wo turn hoti hai shan khanak ke waist par hath rkhkr apne pas khichta hai...

Aur wo apne lip khanak ke lips par rkhkr kiss krta hai...
Khanak ko samaz nahi ata..par wo kiss enjoy krti hai..aur wo shan ko bi kis krti hai...shaan surprise hota hai..par wo khush hota hai...fir uske neck,throat par..sweet kiss krta hai...uske face par...wo apni baho uthata hai...aur wo bedpar rakhta hai...khanak sharmati hai...aur shaan and khanak shanak ho jate hai...

K:ab to apko paan aur dudh ki jrorat nahi hai na...

S:nahi..jo me sunana chahta tha wo maine action me kr diya;)



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HEY guys yeh mera 1st try agar koi mistake hui to plz forgive me..

I hope ke aapko achha lga hoga

omgeee...sonal..u r 2 good in hindi..it was fun yaar...just luvved it...u didnt expect comment...how cum???luvved it...luv u

nice thought sonal

simple presentation i liked it

Im very very happy...Thanx guys...4 liking my os...thank u very much..

k..bye..good night..sweet dream

hei shona,
gr8 imagination..
it was good..if it happened in the show like this we need not have waited for more than 3 weeks for their SR..n that too with too many distractions..LOL!!!!
keep writing more..

Wow. Great story. Write more.

Originally posted by: RB81

hei shona,
gr8 imagination..
it was good..if it happened in the show like this we need not have waited for more than 3 weeks for their SR..n that too with too many distractions..LOL!!!!
keep writing more..

sahi kaha...3weeks kya yeh km hai...kitna tadpaya...isliye chunchunke badala liya... 🤣

Nice OS Sonal😊...Very cute...

Hey Very Cute Os 😳

Hey great going👍🏼 ...in odhni this was one of my favourite scenes it was hilarious...liked ur story a lot it was really good 😃plz write more...u have good writing skills👏 ...il b waiting for ur next update...plz write more😊