Os:five years later PART-7,8,9 PG-6 14 dec - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 9

khanak(while preparing bed to go to sleep): shantanu apki flight parso kitne baje hai???

shan: subah 8 baje ki hai.. kyun kya hua????

khanak? kuch nahi, bas who apki packing bhi to karni hogi na

shan: arey tumchinta mat karo… mein khud kar lunga..

khanak: kya? Shantanu khandelwal packing karenge…. Yeh mein sapna to nahi dekh rahi…

Sh e said sitting on bed in front of shan

shan: kyun mein apni packing khud nahhi kar sakta

khanak(angrily) : nahi kar sakte hai..aur kaisi yeh mein bhi janti hoon aur ap b hi…pichli baar canadagae the to sara samaan kis halat mein wapis aya tha mujhe achi tarah se yaad hai

shan: arey khanak who to bas galti se..

khanak: galti se koi cold drink ki bottle khuli bag mein rakhta hai kya… sare kapde kharab ho gae the

shan(embarrassingly) : wo to bas aise

khanak: ha to bas apki packing main hi karoongi.. bas ap itna bata dijiye ki kya kya pack karoon

shan: arey kuch khaas nahi.. bas 4-5 t shirts, trouser, meri shaving kit, shoes.. aur hagaram kapde bhi rakh dena, waha thand hogi na…. aur…ummm

khanak: aur kya

shan( pulling her from her hand so that she lad on his chest): aur meri cute si wife aur cute si family ki photo…

khanak smiles

khanak: wo to ap nahi bhi kehte to bhi mein rakh deti

shan:really??????

KHANAK: a-ha.. kam se kam is bahane hume yaad to karenge… warna ap ka kya bharosa.. wahan hume bhool gae aur koi gori pasand a gai to…

shan: ha ye to hai.. par khanak London ki goriyon ka bad luck hai .. kyunki unse zyada gori to mere paas already hai… aur tumse zyada gori to mujhe chahiye bhi nahi

khanak: acha ji

shan: a-ha

khanak( smiling) acha ab so jaiye.. subah uthkar apko rahul se bhi to milne jana hai

shan: arey khanak abhi to romance shuru hua tha aur tum sone ki baat kar rahi ho

khanak: acha to abhi tak ky ho raha tha

shan: arey yeh to trailer tha.. picture to abhi baki hai boss

khanak: shantanu,ab ap papa ban gae ho , ab to yeh filmi dialogue band kar dijiye

shan: kyun karoon bhai ( he presses her more to his chest and puts a strand of her hair behind her ear) inhi filmi dialogue ki wajah se aj duniya ki sabse khubsoorat ladki mere saath hai

khanak blushes.. she kisses shan on cheek and rests he head on his chest and both dozes off to peaceful sleep…………………….

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Posted: 13 years ago
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so shaan going to london..
khanak n kids to dhulwadi..
hope bai's nightmare is just a bad dream n nothing gets serious..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
lovely updates👏👏

it was shoo cute and super romantic☺️

a shanaklicious update😍

love every bit of it

from fights to arguments to endless teasing to romance chat cuddling talking to mom to kids full on tafreeh😉

lukin fwd to the new ff

hugs🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Eep that was lovely🤗thnx for updating😃...Shaan is going to London??????😭...but khanak is going to dhulwadi great...hope she dosen't decide to suddenly settle there😆...I can't believe that Shaan is so pathetic in packing...i can imagine the state of the clothes😆...great update thnx for updating🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks rb81 , if rida, sharon for liking my small attempt and soon will be starting my new ff

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I recently read this os n its really good
please continue soon
waiting eagrly...

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