Os:five years later PART-7,8,9 PG-6 14 dec - Page 4

nice update yaar 5 part together.wow!:)
U r great yaar
love all the parts...
After 6 years shaan till naughty yaar...
Wow!shanak hot hot hot kiss i love yaar.
They r cutest parents...
Shaan ne atlast khanak ko mana hi liya...love yaar
twins really cute as our shanak.
I really miss them...
Thanks agin awosome update.
Update soon next part

hei,
that was nice..
finally shaan manaofied khanak n feed her too..
n now he must go to london..n cant avoid that..the way he asked her to sleep on his side n use his pillow in his absence n she revealing that she does that was so sweet..
finally..arrrgghhh..ban the phones yaar..always rings at the wrong time..

PS: where is part 7 & 8??i didt see it.. :(((

wow i really liked it...shaan is still romantic after 6 yrs...😳
@ramzz i think der is some prob because i read all d parts...

Hey lovely update😊...loved reading it...its sad that he has to go to london...but u wrote the parts really beutifully...hmmm phones can be really annoying at times😉 where is part 7 and 8 and 9?????i cant c it

Guys im really sorry .my system encountered with sudden problem and part 7 ,8 ,9 got erased .bt no problem i will write them again soon .please be patient . I m really sorry for the inconvenience i caused..till then enjoy part 5 and 6

what happen when i was read that all parts r present u edit...post? new reader not getting all part but i read other part also after coming phone ring.

Originally posted by: luv_shanak

Guys im really sorry .my system encountered with sudden problem and part 7 ,8 ,9 got erased .bt no problem i will write them again soon .please be patient . I m really sorry for the inconvenience i caused..till then enjoy part 5 and 6

sorry... ok u erased part 7,8,9

Hye guys as I told u that my os somehow got deleted , now im posting rest parts again

Part 7

khanak( trying to remove shan' hands from her waist and trying to reach phone): shantanu mera phone baj raha hai

Shan( still kissing her neck): ha to bajne do khanak.. waise bhi itni raat ko pata na kiska phone hoga … wrong no hoga…

KHANAK: shantanu dekhne to dijiye

Shan: ( whining): khanak… had hai yaar 6 saal ho gae shadi ko par ab tak mere romance ke bich mein tang adana nahi gaya logo ka…

KHANAK( angrily): apka romance karna bhi to nahi gaya ab tak … acha ab hatiye dekhne dijiye kaun hai

( shan reluctantly let hr go .. khanak grabbed her phone from side table .. shan engulfs her from behind while she was reading caller' name)

Shan: in between kissing her neck): kiska phone hai???/

KHANAK: shhh… bai ka phone hai…. Hell. Ha bai . Namaste.. kaisi hai ap….. itni der raat ko phone kiya , sab thik to hai na… ha shantanu ye rahe… ha bilkul thik hai bai…. Bai ap bhi na, bekar ke sapne dekhti rehti hai aur pareshan hoti rehti hai…. Hum bilkul thik hai, ap chinta mat kijiye….thik hai .. lijiye shantanu se baat kijiye….

Khanak forwards her phone to shantanu.. shan takes her phone giving her a small peck on her cheeks who has got tears in her eyes

shan: ha ma Namaste.. ha ma maein bilkul thik hoon… ma ap bilkul chinta mat kijiye, apki jhansi ki rani jaisi beti ke hote hue waise bhi mujhe kuch nehi ho sakta… ma ap chinta mat kijiye, waise bhi khanak aur bache apse milne do din baad a hi rahe hai

Khanak luked shockingly at … he just closes his eyes and nods in assurance

shan: ji ma bas abhi hi plan bana…. To ap aram se so jaiye .. ab 2 din baad apni beti se ji bhar ke baat kar lena…. Ji ma bache so gae… chalo rakhta hoon….

KHANAK ws still confused at what he just said..

KHANAK: shantanu y eh ap kya keh rahe the ma se. kisne kaha mein dhulwadi ja rahi hoon

shan(smiling): meine

KHANAK: hap pagal to nahi ho gae hai.. aiae achanak se hi plan bana diya … itne sare kaam hai ghar par

shan: khanak , jab tum yaha nahi thi tab bhi sare kaam hua karte the, samjhi tum …. Waise bhi tumhe dhulwadi gae tumhe kitne din ho gae hai

KHANAK: par shantanu…

KHANAK: kuch par var nai.. dekho do din baad bacho ki winter vacations start ho jaungi aur mein bhi 4-5 din ke liye nahi hoon… isse acha mauka nahi milega dhulwadi jane ka… ma aur ada bhi khush ho jaenge tum se aur bacho se mil kar

KHANAK: par shantanu , yahan mummyji aur ada bhi hai.. apko to pata hai na ajkal ada ki tabiyat waise hi kharab rehti hai……

shan: khanak dad is perfectly all raight.. kal hi meri dr. shukla se baat hui thi … unhone kaha hai ki dad ki reports bilkul normal hai… aur waise bhi yahan mom aur bhabhi to hai hi…..tum bas dhulwadi ja rahi ho…. Main kal hi travel agent se baat karke tumahari tickets karwa deta hoon.. aur waise bhi ma se meine ab promise kar diya hai.. kamse kam meri saas ke smne to mere naak mat katwao yaar…..

KHANAK( finally giving up and smiling): thik hai baba, jaungi.. ab khush…

shan: very khush

KHANAK: acha ab hatiye..

shan: kyun kaha ja rahi ho

KHANAK: arey dekh kar to au dono shaitan thik se so rahe hai ya nahi… kal subah unke kamre mein gai t hi to dekha parth ne blanket hi nahi odh rakha tha……

shan: chalo mein bhi chALTA HOON

part 8

khanak(shan soon as she enters kids' room: dekha meine kaha than a .. dekho ye parth aise hi so raha hai. Blanket ara beech faink rakha hai

khanak covers parth completely with blanket. Shan goes to varnika and start caressing her forehead

shan: dono kitne cute lag rahe hai na ste hue… bilkul tumahari tarah khanak..

khanak blushes a little

shan: pata hai khanak , varnika to bilkul tumahari tarah lagti hai, … wohi moti moti ankhen… aur iske gaal bhi tumahari tarah soft hai( he said caressing her cheeks)

khanak( smiling): acha, aur yeh parth, ye to bilkul ap par hai… wohi lambi naak.. aur wohi shararati smile..

shan: wo to hai…. Acha khanak mein to puchna hi bhul gaya tha, kal inki parents teacher meeting thin a…. to kya kaha teacher ne mere cute se angels ke bare main

khanak*(angrily): kuch angels nahi balki shararat ki potl hai dono ke dono… har time class mein shararat karte rehe hai… bechari teacher ki naak mein dam kar rakha hai

shan: ha to mere bache hai… shararat karna to inka janam sidh adhikar hai.. aur tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise tum to bahut sharif ho,… tum to jaise apne teacher ko pareshan hi nahi karti thi..

khanak: ho… mein apko pareshan karti thi….

shan: aur nahi to kya…. Yeh to mera dil hi janta hai ki tumne mujhe kitna pareshan kiya hai

khanak: acha ji to mein apko pareshan karti thi? Mujhse best student to apko mil hi nahi sakti thi … aur waise bhi pareshan ap mujhe karte the… to ap jaise ko kaboo me karne ke liye thoda to bigadna hi padta hai…..

And both start laughing remembering good old pathshala days…

khanak: waise shantanu, pata hai teacher inki tariff bhi kar rahi thi…

shan: kya???

khanak: yehi ki dono ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai…

shan: rally?? Har waqt to ladte tehte hai dono

khanak: wahi to .. teacher keh rahi thi ki chahe apas mein dono kitna bhi lad le par agar varni ko koi hath bhi laga de to parth to use chodta bhi nahi hai

shan(smiling) : wow! Dekha kitne pyare hai mere bache( he said kissing each of them on forhead)

khanak: mere nahi hamare bache( and she too kisses them)… acha ab chaliye.. dono uth gae na to sab pyarapan dikaha denge apko

shan(smiling): ya, chalo