Os:five years later PART-7,8,9 PG-6 14 dec - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
please update soon last update 14 sept
and other 11 dec
why big gap u taken ?by the way i allready comment your part but onces agin i request u next part soon
and at last what your name?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Wowww...cute update,I liked khanak a lot...really nice update,continue soon😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you to all lovely people who liked my story .i o really grateful to u guys. And janvi,the reason for long delay in updating ,ive been busy wid my exams as well as my brother's wedding.bt im free now and will be updating dis as well as another os i started earlier. Again a big thanks to u all
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
awww lovely

super cute updates

exactly like shanak nok jhok

update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it totally
very cute story
keep writing😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hii luved ur update😊.
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks sravya, ammu shanak, janavi, , snigdhanagar, rb81, luvym, sharon, ifrida, puvi … for liking it and commenting

Part5

Khanak was still lying over shan

Shan: acha ab mere upar se hato

KHANAK: kyun kya hua?

Shan: arey, itni motiho gai ho tum.. mein pisse jar aha hoon…

Khanak: kya???? (She slaps shan on his chest and angrily sits aside) apne mujhe moti kaha.. ab ana ap mujhe manane

Shan without saying anything gets up and walks outside. Khanak was shocked at shaan's behavior. But then within few seconds he enters the room with a plate covered by lid in his hands . he comes and sits in front of khanak . khanak turns her face in anger

Shan: arey khanak mein to mazak kar raha tha.. yeh plate bahar rakhi hi , isliye tumhe kaha tha uthane ko

KHANAK turns her face and saw plate full of food

KHANAK still angily: yeh khana kiske liye laye haiab.. ap to khana bahar hi khake ae hai na

Shan: ha to ! mein bahar kha kar aya hoon, par meri biwi to bhookhi baithi hai na

KHANAK ( shocked to know that he knows she hasn't had food: apko kaise pata meine khana nahi khaya??

Shan: who kya hai khanak, jab bhi tum zyada gussa karti ho mein samajh jata hoonki tumne khana nahi khaya

Khanak laughed at shan's statement

Shan: ab zyada haso mat aur jaldi se muh kholo ( he said tearing off a piece of chappati and bringing his hands in front of khanak's mouth. Khanak smiles and opens her mouth. He fed her lovingly. It is the most lovable thing of shan for khanak that how he knows every little thing about her

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Posted: 13 years ago
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<p>Part 6[/P]

KHANAK and Shan were sitting near window. Shan's arms has completely engulfd
her in his embrace. His hands were on her hands. She has leaned on his strong
chest'.


KHANAK: shantanu bache thik se so gae the na?


Shan: ha. Oh! I forgot to tell you parth aur varni ne
bhi tumk manane ko kaha tha


KHANAK( smiled) : ACHA? PAR APNE TO MUJHE Unki taraf se
manaya hi nahi


Shan: arey bacho ko pata hi nahi ki unki mummy unse naraz ho
hi nahi sakti.. naraz hone ka haq to sirf papa se hai , aur papa ne to mummy ko
mana liya


KHANAK: ( smiling) >: wo to hai'..


Shan ( after a long pause , slowly): khanak tumse ek baat
krni thi


KHANAK: haan boliye


Shan: khanak mein 4-5 din ke liye London jar aha hoon''.


Khanak( suddenly sits up and looks at shan): kya? Kab????


Shan: parso jana hai khanak.. who actually aj usike liye
meeting thi ' ek concert karne ke liye bulaya hai


KHANAK (angrily with a little sadness in her voice):
shantanu, kya aj apne mujhe naraz karne ki kasam kha rakhi hai kya


Shan: khanak mera
jana bahut zaruri hai, otherwise u know na tha I cant live without u guys even
for a day


KHANAK: ha pata hai kitna nahi reh sakte ap hamare bina..
har baar vada karke jate hai ki phone karoonga aur yahaan mein bas apke phone
ka intezaar karti hi reh jati hoon


Shan: khanak this
time I promise mein tumhe regularly phone karoonga


KHANAK: par shantanu, do din baad parth aur varni ke school
mein function hai


Shan: oh shit , I completely forgot


KHANAK: agar ap nahi ae na to dono ke dono naraz ho jaenge


Shan: khanak , please yar , bacho ko tum samjha dene, ' mera
jana sachmuch bahut important hai , otherwise u know that I wouldn't have
missed it for the world


KHANAK: shantanu jab ap bahar jate hai tab mein khud ko nahi
sambhal pati to mein bacho ko kaise samjhaoongi


Shan: khanak sirf 4-5 din ki hi to baat hai.. aur waise bhi
yahaan sab to hai- mom, dad , bhabhi , bache'


KHANAK ( cutting him off): par ap to nhi honge na shantanu .aur apko lagte honge 4-5 din.. wahan jake ap
to busy ho jaenge, yahan hmara kya haal
hoga ye sirf mein hi janti hoon' ek to apke bina mujhe neend bhi nahi ati hai


Shan( naughtily): really?????


KHANAK: blushed a little): aur nahi to kya'


Shan( putting her hands around her neck): waise khanak ek
idea doon' chahon to is baar agar tumhe meri yaad aye to tum mere bed ki side
pe so sakti ho' aur chaho to mera takiya( pillow) bhi use kar sakti ho'.


KHANAK: acha??????? Chalo thank god


Shan: thank god? Kyun?


KHANAK: ab mujhe
guilty jo feel nahi karna padega''(shan looked at her questioningly)wo kya
hai na, jab bhi ap bahar jate hi to me apki side par hi soti hoon aur chupke se
apka takiya bi le leti hoon


Shan: acha ji.. cheating aur wo bhi shantanu khandelwal ke
saath


KHANAK( putting her hands lovingly on his cheeks) : cheating
nahi , pyar


Shan smiles and kisses
khank on forehead


Shaan: pata hai khanak mera jane ka bilkul mann nahi kar
raha par kya karoon jana to padega hi na


KHANAK: hmmm( with tongue in her cheek and smile on her face)
apse acha to shantanu wo karan hai


Shan: karan???


KHANAK: ha, mera naya padosi, bechara sahi keh raha tha mere patidev ko meri koi fikar hi nai, sirf apne sangeet se pyar hai[/P [P]Shan: acha ji

KHANAK( grinning): u-ha

Shan( pulling her ): khabardar jo mere alawa kissi ke bare mein socha bhi to, samjhi tum

[P]With that he moves his lips on her cheek. She felt blood rushing to her cheeks . he then kissed on her both eyes . then he moved on her
nose. She closed her eyes slowly. She held on to his vest with her hands.. he
traced his fingers on her neck. He sucked her skin on her shoulder still
looking into her eyes. She clenched on to his shoulder. He picked her up in his
arms without breaking the eye contact. He leaned on her and laid her on bed. She
held onto his vest and moved him on her.. his face moved into curve of her neck
and kissed her , moving from one side to another. She felt her blood
circulating at higher rate, body temperature increasing. He moved his hands in
her hair and touches her lips with his' he deepened the kiss, nibbling on her
lower lip and explored her mouth with his tongue. She moved away after sometime
and gasped for some air, foreheads still in contact.. he was breathless. His hands
wandered on her body. He held her hands to side and moved his face on her body. With a reflex her hands landed on his back.. she engufs him with her arms and kisses him .. he was aroused by her touch and reciprocates the kiss'' their love was at peak when 'trin trin' phone start ringing
Edited by luv_shanak - 13 years ago
neethurose thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Really nice job.

Loved it a lot 😊

Continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

nice😊. plz continue soon

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