FF: Partial Amnesia Pt 31Pg145-6th Dec

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tofeeees

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

@Nisha: Thanks! no thoughts on the shanak scene? :(

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Nisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

Shanak scene was superbly written Beeni! You're a master at that. So pure. So sincere. So endearing. The way Shaan cares for Khanak is something I would've loved to see in reel but at least you're giving it to me through this tale which for me is very real. I love how he comforts her and how she shows her vulnerability to him. The way he makes her go to sleep is totally sweet...a way I'd like to be comforted someday I guess. Its their comfort and understanding which is so romantic and is what defines true love for me. 😳

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

loved the update! it was intense with emotions, loved Madhavi! Khushboo was funny with her list lol! the video didn't open for me right away either , it was nice to see them together after three months

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Anu179

@Anu179

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Posted: 13 years ago

#864

Beenz...you finally posted...yeaaahhh!!!

First of all your Siggies are amazing...and yes seeing them back together after 3months was Bliss!!!!

Jitni taarif aapki updates ki karoon utni hi kam hai...reminds of this line in the song from Om Shanti Om...Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon

Kisi zaban mein bhi woh lafaz hi nahi

Ki jeenmein tum ho kya tumhein bata sakun

Main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen (read FF😉)

kaynaat mein Nai hai kahin

Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi ...

Your Narration brings all the characters alive...

Betaab/ besabar Shaan...calling Mitul on his wedding night...tsk tsk...then Geeta too...its so hilarious yet utterly touching...his love for Khanak is insurmountable...

Khanak and Shaan interaction...mind blowing...her fear was so palpable...and Shaan's reaction too...Beenz...kitni Taarif karoon...

So many functions...will Khusboo able to cope with her pregnancy...LOL😆😆

The convo between Natasha and Khanak was again very calming...a new bonding!!!!

Your narration moves me to the core...seeing RBO thru your vision is what we are doing...and this too is Bliss!!!!!

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

fabulous... 👏👏
so many function...😲
waiting for deir wedding...😉
loved d natasha n khanak bonding...😊nxt update sonnn...

Edited by snigdhanagar - 13 years ago

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janavi07

@janavi07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#866

very very very nice update...beeni u are so late we want update every day... just joking ... but we want update atleast after one day please beeni update... i love the all part ... waiting for the shanak wedding

please update next part soon😛

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#867

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

off to read part 23...im gonna comment now!!!!!...LOL...

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#868

rasmalai!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

after ages i get to comment n i only wanna frst comment here...i loved it...chota update like d interview...lol...shanak moments in part 23 cant b written in wrds...just as u said its d eyes tht speak...loved their moments...to yr knowledge begum saihibaa i havent missed any parts n i have read d sexy updates u made in part 22...my throat went dry...ab hum aapko raat mein milte hai rasmalai:) cya;)

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 13 years ago

#869

Thank you everyone! I myself am looking forward to the wedding! @Ann: OMG thank you for the song! It's so beautiful it made me blush lol even though it was for the FF hehe. and thanks for the sig compliment! Hinna and Smitha's hard work but my brain lol. @ Karishma: but i want a comment on part 22 too!! go read the part again and comment LOL!