Awesome once again Beeni!!! And HOT too!! Made my day!!!
It must be difficult for Shantanu to understand I guess as to why Mithul blushes when he asks his own wife for an outing! Shan doesn't have any problems with that right? His ' you can do anything with her' had me 😆. So typical of him!! Of course Shan's outburst abt being married and staying separate made me feel for him!! Such a passionate guy and no action for months!😛
Shan's self talk was cute and his naughtiness and his anticipation to put the plan into action was adorable lol.
Ahhh!!! here comes the hottest part! So could imagine his sexy,husky voice '
Aur kuch maang leti toh shayad who bhee mil jaata' 😳
Khanak's happiness at seeing Shan and her involuntary movement towards him and that bizarre feeling in her belly just so damn real!!! if readers could feel it why not the lady herself!! Shantanu just needs a reason to kiss her!!! And the kiss was beautiful or what!!
The pallu holding, his dialogues of becoming filmy and pulling her just so Shantanu Khandelwal. So sure of himself,of his charms and the effect and all. His hands on her bare stomach!!!!!! Really!!! That has gotta be the HOTTEST ever!!!! Now I have to imagine whether his fingers were proper or gone haywire lol. Khanak slapping away...😆
As usual Shanak equals to teasing,fighting,romance,intense and passion and you stayed true and gave us a little fight in between and pacifying too!!
Now imagine me falling off my chair here and on the verge of fainting when he held the mangalsutra between his teeth!! Could it be any more hot, sexy, dominant and that you have this and you are mine thought!!!! On the bed and pallu removing and the hand *fainted*
Here comes the serious part! but then these two have the capacity to make it look so real!(I am speaking as if I am watching right)But don't blame me lol. I can so visualise these two like doing anything!!*mind out of gutter* lol.
But Shan didn't register her falling down the steps part when she told him but was stuck on scans and all!!!
I think getting away from Khanak when he can't lie is also so typical of him!!
Mithul's reprimand and Shan's 'yea..' and how the docs know all, this is how people interact and act lol. Damn real!!!
Loved it!!!! You have raised the bar Beeni!! Its like nothing I have ever read!!! Absolutely beautiful!!!!
PS: I have been staring at your avi for 15 min now!!! How can she go for his neck like that!!😉
Edited by SPN_JD_Addicted - 13 years ago
