FF~ HUMAN#10- Imp Note pg149..please read!! - Page 68

Hey Smiley Simi

Awesome……. Awesome……. Awesome……. Awesome……👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks a ton for this Wonderful Gift.🤗 U have actually made this birthday special for me….Thank u So very Much. I cant thank enough for this.😊as coz of u I get so many blessings & wishes. Plus the bestest gifts are this Special Update & Trespro 2 from Mani Di.(Issshhh I am So Lucky to have you people in my life.) the best birthday of mine

Ok Now back to the Touture for you….My comments .

So they are hedding back home…..HM khatam.😒.matlab reality shuru & dreamland ended.😊 (actually not as these two are the most romantic & passionate couple in the universe so inka apne aur hamara inke dreamland se bahar aana is highly impossible ) Matlab now in future updates will get to see their struggle.😊Some Work enviorment…..Ghar ki choti moti jaruriyaatoin ke kisse ….inshort now they are going to face real life Struggle.😃 (meri zubaan mein kaha jaye to ab pata chalega aate daal ka bhaav doctorni sahiba ko…lol )

Loved the start.👏 The Trio of Megha shaan & chachu is awesome. You have beautifully dsicribed the whole Sence,👍🏼 I can so imagine them in frount of me frame by frame. (Kudos to you ) So shanak has cut short their HM as Khanak had to report to Hospital. He is joining early to help Doctor Krishnan.😃 (ok ab aayi baat samaj mein😳) Shaan as always supported his angle without any question.😍 (he is just amazing Hubby). Megha wanted to watch a part of movie.😆 She seems to be too facinatd with that. Dog turned into bubble gum?😕 😆(Wow kya soch hain Simi👏) Khanak is irritated as she is doing the same task since last 45 min.😒 (poor girl) Shaan is enjoying all this thing.

Shaan is teasing Wifey.😉 Loved the way u described khanaks irritated expressions.👏 Ek taraf Megha is asking her Non stop questions. & Dusari taraf Hubby Full on Masti ke mood mein.😊 (BEchaari sacchi bade patients hain khanak mein⭐️) loved the Duo of Chachu & niece asking khanak ajeeb questions, the best part is when To stop the roving hand of Shaan 😉 khanak tells him to stop besharmi. & Megha innocently asked "What is Beshami Chachi?" (Lol….I seriously loughed a lot while reading this part ) khanak tries her bestto answer the questions but finally she give up & handel responcibility to shaan (Sabr ka baandh toot gaya…..bechaara Shaan ) loved shaans She is hot comment.😉

Haila Khushboo is feeling unwell.😲 Akki is very worried abt her health.😔 Loved the portion where u described that he is trying hard to manao Boo to go to Airport Clinic.👏 & shaan smiling. Loved the sentence u used "Akki had his hands full with two children already and there was a third on the way." (awesome simi…..loved it) Boo behaving like a kid, finally she end up asking for help from Shaan.😆 Shaan serched Khanak & got her in a Book Stall with Megha.😳 (loved the part ,,,,,Specially the way u described his presence👏) loved Khanaks thoughts here watching hubby in his best.😉Simi u call him "devil in disguise!" aisa kyon….he is Super cute yaar.He gave her a coffee. The Acting part was superb 👍🏼(loved your writing Simi…..the Richness in your words are just Adorable👏) Loved the whole convo between them.

Megha is back with her mischief.😉 But Khanak covers up for her & ask for the apology.😊 The lady admire Megha & Especially Shaan.😉 Loved Shaans reaction. He is the most Badmaash,😉 always loved to tease her. Shaan is back to besharmi he ask for something in return for coffee.😉 Khanak gave him permission to have"Shushi". Shaan is super excited but Megha broke his excitement 😆 with her "Chachu!! You are going to eat those poor little fishies!?" 😆 (I love Megha here more as I am a vegetarian ) Shaan immediately say her that he wont eat it. To stop her from crying.😆 (he is a sweet heart)😍 loved the way u described the victorious expression on Khanaks face.👏 Loved the final part at "Seoul Airport" the Blue & pink lines were awesome⭐️ as always Specially the Blue one….. "And I love you, my sweet unruly and yet utterly adorable wife! What will I do without you?"(haaye these two are making me insane)

The final part Love Dream was the best best best part. U have wonderfully described the whole sinario.👏 Specially the words u used to described it,,,,,,it was tempting sim, Your writing is fantabulous. Wow sacchi I don't have words to describe the last part.😊 Loved the way he took Khanaks sleepy form into embrace,😍 & her equal loving response to him.😊 Loved thelast line "the incredible power which bound them together and made them inseparable;" So now I am ready for Mumbai.😊 (Welcome to the Jannat Shanak. )Loved the Video simi u have a awesome choice.👍🏼

Beautifully written,,,,,,,,,,,,Kudos!!!!

Thank u once again for this lovely gift. I loved it. Cant even explain it right now. Thank u Thank u Thank u.

Waiting for the next part……..Kab milega 😳…..jaldi jaldi dena. 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Pranju.