FF~ HUMAN#10- Imp Note pg149..please read!!

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#651

ab bathao..y did u say that u r going to drown in sorrow n pain??
the update was actually lengthy enough but i felt it as a chotu update..😳

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Sonali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#652

loved the update Simi, it was cute!

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#653

@ Ramzz: Why may I ask do you think it was chota??

@Sonali: Thanks!!

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: simiv
@ Ramzz: Why may I ask do you think it was chota??

@Sonali: Thanks!!

coz mostly it was megha making her chachi miserable n her chachu best in his deeds..u finished the update in flight n airport..thats y its chotu..
for me the last part was like cherry on top..the thought shaan had abt her was so soothing n it was awesome simi..

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: RB81

coz mostly it was megha making her chachi miserable n her chachu best in his deeds..u finished the update in flight n airport..thats y its chotu..
for me the last part was like cherry on top..the thought shaan had abt her was so soothing n it was awesome simi..

Well, it was just another phase ..had to finish it.

The last part was an after thought.inspired by that piece of music😃 things sometimes I randomly jot down...thanks!

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sangitasengupta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#656

Hey Simi,

just finished reading!!!it looks like you are drawing your readers towards reality.good shift!!!too much mush also gets on to you sometimes.loved the way Khanak was losing her patience with Megha.

reminds me of how many times i do that with my 10 year old.

but you still keep the never ending bond between shaan and khanak intact.

waiting for the next👏.

greedily yours

Brishti

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: sangitasengupta
Hey Simi,

just finished reading!!!it looks like you are drawing your readers towards reality.good shift!!!too much mush also gets on to you sometimes.loved the way Khanak was losing her patience with Megha.

reminds me of how many times i do that with my 10 year old.

but you still keep the never ending bond between shaan and khanak intact.

waiting for the next👏.

greedily yours

Brishti

You got it bang on Brishti!!!😃

There appears to be a fine line bet the real and the unreal...ask me I am a perpetual dreamer.

Megha knws how to wrap folks around her finger.

And Shaan and Khanak will remain the same..

Thanks dear!!!

See you soon!!

Simi

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Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#658

eksss di it was so cute poor kahnak she must beenn tired i love meghna she dran cute awww ha ha she always rescue shann ha...he so dran nughty kabhi anhi sudhrega lolz i love the way eh madly in love with her ...he just want her close to him...whe scrazya bt her awww thy r home now lets see whats waitinf fr them...ut it was very chottu update😳

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: simiv

Well, it was just another phase ..had to finish it.

The last part was an after thought.inspired by that piece of music😃 things sometimes I randomly jot down...thanks!

that was so nice..i simply loved it..waise i'm very much drained today..was waiting for ur update..will try to post comments..but there is every possibility for me to doze off..

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: krock
eksss di it was so cute poor kahnak she must beenn tired i love meghna she dran cute awww ha ha she always rescue shann ha...he so dran nughty kabhi anhi sudhrega lolz i love the way eh madly in love with her ...he just want her close to him...whe scrazya bt her awww thy r home now lets see whats waitinf fr them...ut it was very chottu update😳

Hey thanks Anki!!

Yes now both chachu and niece are pulling Khanak's leg!!

And yes, he's crazy abt her no matter how angry she gets!!!

Chotu updt??? I think I pk so much emotions in it..that it looks chotu ..😳